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Luxray, lol, for Kaiya, you put her appearance as her personality and her personality as her appearance, but other than that, accepted
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You know, I actually noticed that about halfway through making the apps, and I made a mental note to change it later, but I forgot. XP

Screw you, 6-Shot. :D

Also, since I've noticed you've put Amaya and Daisuke up as Other Characters, feel free to play them as victim characters- since I planned for Aito and Kaiya's mystery father to be the one who passed the Yuishoko on to them, they're pretty much useless. That mystery father thing could also be a future sub-arc, methinks...

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Luxray, damn your spoilers! Now I know how Desperado feels like lol. Anyways, yeah, I'll be sure to make a note of that so I can utilize them in future situations, but actually I just put them as other characters because you actually posted their names lol
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It didn't give me problems with microsoft word. >:3

I just wish I could have done a better job. I was supposed to go to bed 10 minutes ago so I guess this will pretty much just be a rough draft and I'll edit it a bit here and there. <_<

Personal Info
Username: Desperado Finale
Name: Takeo Mizushima
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Blood Type: B+
Date of Birth: December 1st
Hobby: Not doing anything, naps, resting, lying in…oh what am I kidding? He’ll take a nap anywhere and enjoy it.
[spoiler=Appearance (Too lazy to figure out a good appearance and type it out so I found a picture of Shizuo I love. I’M STRAIGHT I SWEAR!):]
This except extremely drowsy looking.
[img] http://images4.fanpop.com/image/photos/18900000/Shizuo-Heiwajima-heiwajima-shizuo-18933476-713-1024.jpg [/img]
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[spoiler=Personality:]
Takeo is your all around lazy good for nothing. He never takes anything seriously, he seems to be near emotionless, and the only thing he really seems to care for is sleep even in class. People are amazed he goes to school even though he just sleeps most of the time. People are even more amazed that he gets no grade lower than an A-. He lets everything slide not really giving too much of a crap for whatever might get most people mad. He also never seems to give enough of a crap to apologize for something he may have done. All he’d give is a shrug and then maybe just go back to sleep. During the rare moments Takeo isn’t asleep he’s easily distracted and bored. When he’s asked a question he’ll usually give an honest blunt answer but when he lies…well you can’t really tell since he always sounds the same. All this tends to gets him into a lot of trouble with just about everybody but he’s still a pretty likeable guy. Not to everybody though. Takeo is also extremely adaptive. To sum things up he’s lazy, uncaring, unemotional, unserious about just about everything, blunt, adaptive, and gets people pissed almost all the time while avoiding that himself.
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[spoiler=Bio:]
The Mizushima family had always been an extremely rich and prosperous family. A very famous family known for the large island resort they own a mile out into the pacific. Also unbeknownst to the public they’re an abnormally cruel and selfish family. If you were a member of the main branch you’d be set for the rest of your life. Takeo was a member of the Ine family, a very poor family, which served the Mizushimas. Him and his two siblings were severely ridiculed and harassed by all their cousins. His parents couldn’t take it and when he was 7 they killed themselves. The Mizushimas decided to take the three in on 5 conditions. If any three failed then they would all be kicked They continue to serve them as they did before.
2) The three be tutored and no grade can be below an A-.
3) The eldest of the three (Takeo) be trained in all sorts of martial arts and fighting styles.
4) At the age of 15 Takeo will fight three of the strongest heirs to the family to decide who will be the heir.
5) Will be known when the 4th is complete.
They accepted and all worked hard to meet the requirements. Takeo worked the hardest. Working to become strong while still maintaining his grades. The day came where he finally faced off against his three cousins. They thought it would go quickly and underestimated him. After a long fight he finally won. The fifth condition was revealed.
5) Fight the enemy so we don’t have to send in our real beloved family to be killed. Oh, and win. It'll be painfully obvious who those enemies are so even an Ineot like you could tell.
Like the other objectives he accepted without hesitation. He just wanted to protect his siblings and give them a good life that the Mizushimas could. Minus all the ridicule of course. He hasn't been told about the enemies and just assumes it's some rival family. He doesn't like the idea of killing anybody but if it's to help his siblings he'll do it. The amount of constant training and studying that most of the time goes late into the night has increased ever since.[/spoiler]

Yuishoko Info
Does Your Character Already Have a Yuishoko?: Yes.
Does Your Character Already Know How to Use His/Her Yuishoko?: Yes.
Does Your Character Already Know That He/She is a Next Generation Keeper?: No. He doesn't actually know that much. Just fight enemies and that's all he needs to know.

Yuishoko Name: Chain of Souls
Yuishoko Type: Kaho
Yuishoko Sealed State Appearance: Looks like a dog tag key chain. On the dog tag are the words Soul Chain.
Yuishoko Activation: First he’ll yawn and then he’ll say, “I’m tired. Let’s take a nap you’ll never wake up from.”
Yuishoko Activated State Appearance: Two chains coming out of his jacket’s sleeves with ninjatos attached to the end of them. The ninjatos can detach whenever he wants them too.
[spoiler=Yuishoko Abilities:]
-Chain Field: The chains extend to their max length and wrap around the surrounding area.
-Gravity Chain: Gravity around the chain is reduced to decrease the weight of the chains. Only the chains coming out of his sleeve even seem to have any weight to them. When used with chain field the area the chain surrounds loses 7/8 of its gravity so that it becomes similar to the moon’s.
-Soul Stealer: When the chain or ninjatos come into contact with an enemy it will steal a small part of their soul. When used with chain field it’ll very slowly steal small parts of the opponent’s soul. Being in the area for an extended period of time will cause the opponent to feel major exhaustion or perhaps exhaustion. Even longer periods of time will cause complete soul loss and the will body just give up. Ways that souls can be returned to their owner are Takeo returns them himself, he's knocked out by the owner, he dies, or the chain is destroyed (which is hard). His death will release all the souls into the environment which will basically becaome ghosts and cause major problems. Is chain being broken won't release all of the souls but just a good amount. Souls released can be reclaimed more easily than how he normally takes it.
-Soul Manipulation: He can use the souls or parts of souls in various ways such as adding to the length of his blade or grinding on the chains. Even give it back to the owner. If enough souls are collected then attacks using them are possible.
-Soul Healer: Takeo can sacrifice some of the souls from his collection to heal himself and comrades.
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Note: His sister's name is Rin and brother is Ken. They're both in middle school.

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Yup! Finished.[hr][spoiler=Character: (Family Name First) 火愛 炸実 / かわい さくみ / Kawai Sakumi]
[b][u]Personal Info[/u][/b][hr][b]Username:[/b] FC123456[hr][b]Name:[/b] [size="1"](Family Name First)[/size] 火愛 炸実 / かわい さくみ / Kawai Sakumi[hr][b]Gender:[/b] F[hr][b]Age:[/b] 16[hr][b]Blood Type:[/b] AB+[hr][b]Date of Birth:[/b] 17 - 04[hr][b]Hobby:[/b] Illegal production of explosives[hr][b]Appearance:[/b] Sakumi sports crimson red hair, with black highlights. She keeps it tied in a ponytail at all times, and if her hair is down, then that's indication that she is not in a good mood. She wears dark red eyeliner, with wings, which contrasts highly with her pale skin. Her generic brown eyes are often concealed with contacts that change the color. She likes to wear red nail polish, with a small flame design. She often wears a ruby bracelet given to her by her mother, after she passed away. The bracelet also helps keep her Yuishoko in check, and allows for her to override the sentience. Otherwise, Blaze completely controls her abilities, and it can kill her if it wants.[hr][b]Personality:[/b] The most noticeable part of Sakumi’s personality is her almost unconscious arrogance. She carries herself highly and with a good amount of self-esteem, which can be somewhat off-putting to people she first meets, due to her potentially rubbing them the wrong way. However, Sakumi always means well in the end: she’s just rather bad at putting other people before herself sometimes. She also tends to be rather stubborn, being unwilling to change her ideas unless someone drills into her head that it sucks. If it comes to this, Sakumi also tends to get uncharacteristically aggressive and defensive, due to the threat towards her pride. She also has a tendency to become whiny whenever environmental conditions become uncomfortable. [hr][b]Bio:[/b] Sakumi was spoiled ever since birth. Her parents bought her anything and everything she wanted. She always had state-of-the-art technology, and the newest fashions. Her parents were both rich; her mother was a lawyer, and her father, Hakuko (白粉), worked in the acting business. Both parents raked in millions in a year, however, they rarely saw their daughter. She would often stay at her friends' house, or host parties at her own. At only 15, she had her first drink, and on that same night, she also lost her virginity. Two months later, her father came home, bearing bad news: her mother was shot and killed after winning a case. The shooter had already been incarcerated, but the gunshot wound was lethal. Her mother died within hours. About a year later, her father was arrested. He had continued in acting, however, he started dealing drugs on the side. Sakumi remained home, with the maids and butlers catering to her. However, one by one, they quit, until Sakumi was left to live on her own. It took her a while to get used to working, but she managed. While she cleaned out her father's room, she found a stash of fireworks in the closet. Curious, she set them off, enamored by the colors and explosions. She began making her own, also creating bombs in the process. She keeps them hidden, and knows they're illegal. It was during this bomb-making time that she discovered her Yuishoko. She had accidentally detonated a bomb in her hand, but miraculously, the explosion didn't hurt her at all. The only mark was on the palm of her hand, in the shape of the kanji for flame. She tried wrapping it, thinking it would go away. However, it never healed. After a month of having the mark, she started hearing voices. It spoke to her, and introduced itself. It spoke archaic Japanese, and Sakumi had a difficult time understanding it. However, she learned who, or what it was, and it explained the concept of Yuishoko to her. She learned some of her basic abilities, including Bakuhatsu, but still makes bombs. She says, "it's fun. The time it takes to make one, and the final result... I love it."[hr][b][u]Yuishoko Info[/u][/b][hr][b]Does Your Character Already Have a Yuishoko?:[/b] Yes[hr][b]Does Your Character Already Know How to Use His/Her Yuishoko?:[/b] To an extent.[hr][b]Does Your Character Already Know That He/She is a Next Generation Keeper?:[/b] No[hr][b]Yuishoko Name:[/b] 炎の手 / ほのおのて / Honoo no Te / Blaze Hand (ほのお / Blaze)[hr][b]Yuishoko Type:[/b] Keijo[hr][b]Yuishoko Sealed State Appearance:[/b]
The kanji for flame (炎) is located on the palm of her left hand. She often feels burning pain from it at night. Blaze often talks to her, speaking in archaic Japanese, giving Sakumi a difficult time understanding.[hr][b]Yuishoko Activation:[/b]
Sakumi simply allows Blaze to activate; it is sentient and makes its own decision. However, if she wants to "override" this sentience, she simply says the name of her Yuishoko while the palm of her hand is directly aligned above or below her face. In either situation, the flame kanji on the palm of her hand transfers to her forehead.[hr][b]Yuishoko Activated State Appearance:[/b]
The kanji for flame (炎), located on her palm moves to her forehead, and glows a bright red. Her pupils disappear, and her body temperature nearly doubles.[hr][b]Yuishoko Abilities:[/b]
爆発 / ばくはつ / Bakuhatsu / Explosion
[i]Sakumi's most basic and self-explanatory ability. She she can let out as much as 6 joules of energy in an explosion, which is about as much power as 6 sticks of dynamite. She is not hurt by the explosion, but a significant amount of "Pride" is lost, and using this ability too much causes Sakumi to lose control of her Yuishoko. The sentient being of Blaze will take control, and she risks killing herself.[/i]
燃やして / もやして / Moyashite / Burning
[i]Similar to the Bakuhatsu, but much more focused. The explosion becomes focused into one shot of fire. This also drains "Pride" from her, more than Bakuhatsu.[/i][/spoiler][hr]


~ElectricKirby
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Alright, I'll get to reviewing the apps and then start on my opening post for the IC

EDIT: Desperado Finale, so everything is fine but maybe you should add how someone can get the pieces of their soul back without Takeo actually giving it back to them

ElectricKirby, everything is good except for the age... 15-17 plz
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WORKING ON STILL!!

[b][u]Personal Info[/u][/b]
Username: Auralady
Name: Akazuki Rei
Gender: female
Age: 17
Blood Type: Ab
Date of Birth:
Hobby:
Appearance:
Personality:
Bio:

[b][u]Yuishoko Info[/u][/b]
Does Your Character Already Have a Yuishoko?:
Does Your Character Already Know How to Use His/Her Yuishoko?:
Does Your Character Already Know That He/She is a Next Generation Keeper?:

Yuishoko Name:
Yuishoko Type:
Yuishoko Sealed State Appearance:
Yuishoko Activation:
Yuishoko Activated State Appearance:
Yuishoko Abilities:
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