.Rai Posted April 17, 2011 Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 Considering I've done only, what, 4 tags (including this), I think I'm doing well. Random smudgey stuff without a focal. [center][IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/11iebk8.jpg[/IMG][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 17, 2011 Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 This would be much better as an abstract, imo. The two focals don't flow together, and the light is just too powerful. remove the person, as well as the unneeded glares. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted April 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 I could darken some of it but I was aiming for quite a bright piece. For the focal, I can remove the person but the right side becomes fairly empty but if I crop it, it becomes an awkward size and also I loss a lot of the detail on the right too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted April 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 My advice is, keep the guy and remove the text, center him a bit more, but [i]definitely[/i] keep the lighting at this level, I love it Great job overall... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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