Kuroda Kaito Posted April 17, 2011 Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 [IMG]http://i1005.photobucket.com/albums/af178/W4RP4NDA/Tags/collab.png[/IMG] No text : [IMG]http://i1005.photobucket.com/albums/af178/W4RP4NDA/Tags/notext.png[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted April 17, 2011 Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 Flow's a bit weird, and it's monotone imo. I like the lighting behind the guy, but not the random light in the bottom left. Not bad though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 17, 2011 Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 There are definitely many things that can be worked on, such as flow, random light on the bottom left, the overall lighting could be worked on as well, and the depth a tad more. Although, i like the outcome i must say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted April 17, 2011 Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 For some reason, I rather like the compo. The only thing really killing it is the mono color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted April 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 [quote name='Catman25' timestamp='1303062483' post='5145869'] Flow's a bit weird, and it's monotone imo. I like the lighting behind the guy, but not the random light in the bottom left. Not bad though. [/quote] [quote name='NightWalker' timestamp='1303066632' post='5146139'] There are definitely many things that can be worked on, such as flow, random light on the bottom left, the overall lighting could be worked on as well, and the depth a tad more. Although, i like the outcome i must say. [/quote] [quote name='25000st' timestamp='1303072638' post='5146409'] For some reason, I rather like the compo. The only thing really killing it is the mono color. [/quote] aThanks guys well this is our first collab so it'd be kinda bad but we're proud of it ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 Well, personally I think it's pretty great... Perhaps you could change the saturation, contrast, and / or color of the C4D at the bottom to get some variety... Oh, and, Kai, I'm up for a collab if you want... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted April 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 [quote name='Sotos' timestamp='1303122006' post='5148027'] Well, personally I think it's pretty great... Perhaps you could change the saturation, contrast, and / or color of the C4D at the bottom to get some variety... Oh, and, Kai, I'm up for a collab if you want... [/quote] Well OK, let's talk about it via PM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 Hey guys, You have some nice work here, not bad! Some things I would say though are, there isn't a detailed flow, it's a little off, you might want to not put things in random places and try and make C4D's fit the tag a little. Things that generally facing in opposite directions in a tag ruin the flow, work on your C4D and effect placement and you'll up the flow a little more! Also, as Catman pointed out, it's a little monotone, its too much of the same colour, try mixing it up a little and add a few more colours in. It should improve the quality of the tag by quite a bit and make it less dull! There is also a few minor details that you might want to change, like the light in the bottom left, possibly change the direction of the smudge lines and maybe make it a little less busy? However, I like it. I think you guys should keep it up! Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted April 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 [quote name='Hioco' timestamp='1303153225' post='5149037'] Hey guys, You have some nice work here, not bad! Some things I would say though are, there isn't a detailed flow, it's a little off, you might want to not put things in random places and try and make C4D's fit the tag a little. Things that generally facing in opposite directions in a tag ruin the flow, work on your C4D and effect placement and you'll up the flow a little more! Also, as Catman pointed out, it's a little monotone, its too much of the same colour, try mixing it up a little and add a few more colours in. It should improve the quality of the tag by quite a bit and make it less dull! There is also a few minor details that you might want to change, like the light in the bottom left, possibly change the direction of the smudge lines and maybe make it a little less busy? However, I like it. I think you guys should keep it up! Good job! [/quote] Thanks Hioco, we'll try to improve next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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