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Return of the Vongola - Chapter 9 is up in here!! [PG-16]

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[quote name='Enma Kozato' timestamp='1321520219' post='5648294']
The Fic is in need of another guardian introduction.
We need a storm and a sun for significant immediate plot developement
Cloud and Mist for more subtle or delayed developments
And lightning for filler.
That is if DLs following KHRs style of character developement.
It's a solid style too, and Link, you may not know it, but it's a style you usually lean towards in the works I've read by you.
Take a group of characters and make them immediate, and leave some others to linger and develop.
That's what I see in your writing anyways.

/ADD influenced literary critique and reccomendations
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...That's actually not wrong at all, Chase

And I never noticed O-o

Lolol

I like dat pattern~

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[quote name='Dark Necromancer' timestamp='1321472280' post='5646658']
Being patient is all we can do, I'm afraid... I've been waiting for almost a month and still waiting... It could worth the wait, eventually, if CS and DL finishes with Chapter 9, hopefully...
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[color=#0000cd]Meh, not exactly worth the wait...[/color]

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[quote name='Chaos Sonic' timestamp='1321663926' post='5651566']
I'm guessing the theme?
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[color=#0000cd]Yes, the theme.[/color]
[quote name='Darklink401' timestamp='1321664916' post='5651611']
lolol

We got one

:'3

[color=#0000cd]Huh?[/color]

ALSO

SONIC

When it cuts from the room to the outside, leave TWO spaces DDD:

[color=#0000cd]Yeah, I was a bit conmfused there...I thought Final was on the window or something and then there's this guy on the roof and something a bout a house...? Wha?[/color]
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[b]Weather Reports. Foe Fiction. These are what have shown us the writing capability of YCM. That is to say, very little at all. Do we need more proof of this? Yes, because these are Phantom's Divinations.[/b]

[spoiler=21 Guns][color=#800080]...[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]So?[/color]

[color=#0000ff]"So" what?[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f][i]How[/i] are we going to recruit Ven Hawk?[/color]

[color=#0000ff]I don't know. I thought you guys might know.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]I can't travel across universes, if that's why you're saying.[/color]

[color=#0000ff]But Jen can, so I thought she might be able to help.[/color]

[color=#800080]I told you, I don't know how I got here.[/color]

[color=#0000ff]Then what do you suggest we do?[/color]

[color=#800080]Hm…[/color]

[color=#0000cd]Well?[/color]

[color=#800080]I'm thinking! Wait, I got it! Just believe as hard as you can that we'll go and find this Ven guy. That might work![/color]

[color=#0000cd]Well, I'm believing as hard as I can.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]It's not working.[/color]

[color=#800080]You're just not being passionate enough![/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]Roxas, how much longer do we have to deal with her?[/color]

[color=#800080]Come on guys! We got to hold hands, otherwise-[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f][i]No.[/i][/color]

[color=#0000cd]Absolutely [i]not[/i].[/color]

[color=#800080]Stop being such babies. Here, I'll hold your hands.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]Fine.[/color]

[color=#0000cd]Hold on guys, I'm getting a call on Skype.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]Who is it?[/color]

[color=#0000cd]...No way.[/color]

[color=#800080]What?[/color]

[color=#0000cd]It says it's Ven Hawk.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]How can that be?[/color]

[color=#800080]Answer him![/color]

[color=#0000cd]Um, hello?[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Hey, Roxas! You said you wanted to talk?[/color]

[color=#800080]Blake, what's going on here?[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]In Heroes Corps., Ven is a member of YCM. Roxas probably exists as a character within that series.[/color]

[color=#800080]So it's like the opposite of us being characters but we can exist in the real world with Roxas.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]Ven must think he's talking to the Roxas in his world. Now I can't help but wonder about all the possible alternate versions of us that might be out there.[/color]

[color=#0000cd]You know my Phantom's Divinations thread in Fan Fic, right?[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Sure do![/color]

[color=#0000cd]Well, remember when Fenrir and Dark did a series of audio reviews? I was thinking that we should something like that too.[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Why me? [/color]

[color=#0000cd]Listen, I think someone's out to get me, and I think they're going to use you against me.[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Why would they do that? There's no way that I would turn on you![/color]

[color=#0000cd]I'm glad to hear that. Anyway, you know Katekyo Hitman Reborn, right? Because I sure don't.[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Dude, KHR is awesome.[/color]

[color=#0000cd]Anyway, let's review this fanfic by [/color][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/85176-chaos-sonic/"][color=#0000cd]Chaos Sonic[/color][/url][color=#0000cd] called [/color][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/246502-return-of-the-vongola-chapter-9-is-up-in-here-pg-16/"][color=#0000cd]"Return of the Vongola"[/color][/url][color=#0000cd].[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Who's Chaos Sonic?[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]Seriously?[/color]

[color=#4b0082]So who are your friends?[/color]

[color=#0000cd]We'll get to them in a bit. Let me just set up the recording equipment. Okay, let's start. Hello, YCM. I'm Phantom Roxas.[/color]

[color=#4b0082]And I'm nightwing2199.[/color]

[color=#0000cd]I decided to do thing's a little differently tonight and have an audio recording. Joining us are my friends Blake and Jen.[/color]

[color=#800080]Hi everyone![/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]Hey guys.[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Blake? So you named the character in Zodiac Cross after him?[/color]

[color=#0000cd]Eh, something like that. Anyway, for this episode, we'll be reviewing "Return of the Vongola" by Chaos Sonic.[/color]

[color=#800080]This guy has six stars? How come I've never seen him? Did he get a name change?[/color]

[color=#0000cd]Anyway, to some it should be obvious, but this is a Katekyo Hitman Reborn fanfic. This fanfic seems to have a fanbase of its own, and it's currently on it's ninth chapter. I am not anticipating anything bad, but I am here by Chaos Sonic's own request. Apparently this story does not feature Tsuna, the main character of Reborn, so I assume that knowledge of the series is not required for enjoying this story. Let's start with Target 1. Wait, what the hell is that supposed to mean?[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Oh, the anime referred to each episode as a "Target".[/color]

[i]A teenage boy with spiky red hair, and boy-ish facial features[/i]

[color=#2f4f4f]As opposed to a boy with girl-ish features.[/color]

[i]sat near the window of the classroom. He closed his brownish-red eyes and yawned loudly, covering his mouth with his hand. He looked out the window, his face rested against his palm, as he had been frequently doing so for the whole class. Noticing nothing new, he glanced over to his right, about two desks away from his. His eyes caught sight of their target, a young girl with light blond hair that reached down to her shoulders and bluish gray eyes, which were slender. Her thin lips were curved into a small smile as she stared at the teacher.[/i]

[color=#800080]I'm liking the character description so far, but I can only imagine them as detailed heads on an unremarkable class uniform.[/color]

[b][i]I can't believe Hana's interested in this stuff. History is boring as hell.[/i][/b]

[color=#2f4f4f]And as long as you're bored, so is this story.[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Well, this girl is kind of Kyoko, so she's the love interest.[/color]

[color=#800080]That's obvious, so I'd like to see how this love story develops.[/color]

[i]Arashi thought, looking up at the ceiling, his hands behind his head as he leaned back on his chair. He glanced at her again. [/i][b][i]Then again, this whole school's boring. There's nothing to do around here...maybe I should...yeah, that's right, I can do it. Nothing to be afraid of! Alright, today, after half a year of having a crush on her, I'll finally tell her my feelings![/i][/b]

[color=#0000cd]This thought process is so clichéd that it indicates that his attempted confession will not go well.[/color]

[i]“Arashi Chiso!” the teacher’s called, almost making Arashi fall out of his chair. “Are you still daydreaming, or do you mind answering the question?”[/i]

[color=#4b0082]The teacher's what called?[/color]

[color=#800080]I'm actually surprised Chaos didn't notice that.[/color]

[i]The boy gulped. "Um...that is an interesting question sir! It makes the student rationalize, and is made to trick the untrained mind! Without further ado I'd have to say it is option 'B'!"[/i]

[color=#2f4f4f]The awkward idiocy. It hurts.[/color]

[i]Arashi heard a few chuckles and snickers from around the room, and sighed, laying his head between his arms. Just then, he heard a small noise, like a faint whistle. He looked to the side, out the window, but saw nothing. He shrugged slightly, and closed his eyes.[/i]

[color=#800080]The most interesting thing so far is the mystery of what question the teacher asked.[/color]

[i]-----------------------------------------------------------------------[/i]

[i]Arashi was the last to walk out of class when the lunch bell rang. He saw Hana turn the corner, and was about to follow her, when he heard the same noise as before, but a bit louder.[/i]

[color=#0000cd]Interesting that Arashi is the only one that seems to have noticed this. Either this is a plot point, or a suspicious noise is completely irrelevant to anyone's interest.[/color]

[b][i]Well...I can always tell her later. Yeah.[/i][/b]

[color=#0000cd]You've waited six months. You can wait a bit longer.[/color]

[color=#800080]You'll get nowhere if you don't come to face your feelings.[/color]

[i]He kept following it, curious as to where it came from. His search led him to the roof, where he could hear the sound very clearly. He opened the door, and stepped outside to the roof. In a single glance he saw what looked like a baby, wearing a black cloak and a brown beret over his dark blue hair. Around the baby were around a dozen birds, a dog, and several squirrels. The baby turned to Arashi with a glare, causing him to smile nervously.[/i]

[i]"Hey little guy...those animals scaring you?" he asked, approaching slightly.

The baby held out a necklace. Tied to it was a white whistle.

"It is not my fault...they came on their own." the baby said, with a small frown.[/i]

[color=#4b0082]Except it is your fault. The animals became because you blew that whistle. That is, by definition, your fault.[/color]

[i]"What do you mean? Where's your mommy, anyway?"[/i]

[color=#0000cd]Out of all the countless questions you could be asking right now, those two should be at the bottom of your list. Why is this baby talking? Why does he have a whistle? Why isn't he scared by the animals?[i] Why does he have blue hair?[/i][/color]

[i]"It doesn't matter, just listen. The sound you heard was this whistle, that is too high-pitched for normal humans to hear. The fact you were able to hear it means the data was right.[/i]

[color=#0000cd]Yep, it's a plot point, and an interesting one at that.[/color]

[i]You, Arashi Chiso, are destined to become the fifteenth boss of the once proud Vongola family. I was sent here to give you your mission."[/i]

[color=#4b0082]Wait a minute, Tsuna was only supposed to become the tenth boss. If this guy is supposed to be the fifteenth, then how many years is this supposed to take place after KHR?[/color]

[i]"Simple," Final said. "You must travel the world in search of all six guardians, and rebuild the Vongola to its former glory."[/i]

[color=#0000cd]Wait, since when was this kid named? That's not how introducing the name of a character works.[/color]

[color=#800080]Well, we finally got to the premise. How will Arashi react?[/color]

[b][i]Simple, he says...[/i][/b] [i]"That's crazy. You're crazy. I don't care if you're a baby that can fluidly talk, I'm not believing you, or any of this.[/i]

[color=#0000cd]So he witnesses something that should be impossible as far as he's concerned... and decides to call BS on what the baby has to say. I'm so glad that Arashi is our hero![/color]

[i]I don't even know who the hell you are! It's not even that hard to find out my name, so you're not impressing me. Now go home, kid. I've got a girl to confess to."[/i]

[color=#0000cd]Let's assume that goes well for you. What then?[/color]

[i]"Final is my name. And the question becomes whether you'll be able to confess to her, seeing as she may die."[/i]

[color=#800080]Ah, that should get his attention. Arashi will dash to save Hana, and be her knight in shining armor! Go, Arashi! There isn't a moment to lose![/color]

[i]Arashi's eyes widened slightly. "What the hell? What do you mean?"[/i]

[i]Final pointed down toward the entrance to the school. Arashi quickly ran to the edge of the roof to see what the baby meant.[/i]

[i]At first he didn't see anything unusual, but then the entrance gate burst open, and several armed men wearing suits ran in. Arashi's hands gripped the railing harder, his body tense. He saw one of them place his finger on his ear, and his lips started moving. For some reason, Arashi could vaguely hear some fragments of what he was saying, such as "Boss, following the baby paid off..." and "We're going to search the building now". He stopped talking for a bit, then nodded, placing his hand on the pistol at his side with a grin.[/i]

[color=#0000cd]Those don't sound like fragments. Those seem like they could have been everything the soldier would have said. In fact, how could Arashi possibly make out a single syllable of what was being said if he's up on the roof while these guys are at ground level? If Arashi was able to hear that for the same reasons that he was able to hear the whistle, that means he has superhuman hearing. If that's the case, then in cases such as the teacher yelling at him, most sounds should be like a megaphone in his ears.[/color]

[i]“There's really no time to explain, but these guys are part of a mafia, and they have come to kill you. Of course, they're Mafioso, so they'll really kill everyone until they find you. Or maybe kill everyone either way. So what are you going to do?"[/i]

[i]Arashi clenched his teeth, shaking a bit. "E-even if I run, they'll find me another time, won't they?"

"Most definitely."[/i]

[color=#2f4f4f]"See those guys? Yeah, they'll probably kill everyone just to find you."[/color]

[color=#800080]"Well, gotta run!"[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]Our protagonist, ladies and gentlemen![/color]

[color=#4b0082]Guys, Tsuna was just as much of a loser when he started out, so cut Arashi some slack.[/color]

[i]"B-but how can I do anything? Sure, I've gotten into a couple of fights at school over the years, but these are a group of Mafioso with guns, I'm just a teenager!" Arashi said, then turned to Final. "You know so much about the mafia, don't you have some friends you can call over that can get us out of this mess?"[/i]

[i]"I have a better idea," the baby said, and pulled out a dagger with a red blade.

Arashi looked at the dagger and said, “You're planning to kill them with that?”

"Wrong, I won't be doing much of anything.”[/i]

[color=#0000cd]Because you're lazy like that.[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Or because he made a similar promise like Reborn made to the Ninth so that Arashi can fight his own battles.[/color]

[i]Final said as he moved towards Arashi. "You are, after you die."[/i]

[color=#2f4f4f]What.[/color]

[i]Arashi turned around fully, his back to the railing. “W-What?!”[/i]

[i]Before he could say anything else, Final tossed the red dagger, and it stabbed Arashi in the chest. He struggled to say something for a few seconds, then slid down to the ground.[/i]

[color=#2f4f4f]And then there was much rejoicing across the land.[/color]

[b][i]I’m gonna die... I really am worthless...unable to confess to Hana, or even protect her. She may really...die. Those Mafiosos will kill her....they'll...[/i][/b]

[color=#2f4f4f]Hold on, let me grab my violin.[/color]

[color=#800080]Blake, stop it.[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Wait a minute, this is exactly what happened to Tsuna when he first got hit with the Dying Will. Nice reference![/color]

[i]A bright orange flame lit up on Arashi's forehead, and his eyes opened slowly. He slowly got up, and turned to face the railing, looking downward at the ground.[/i]

[color=#4b0082]Wait a minute, why isn't he is underwear?[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]Why do you care if he is or isn't?[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Well, it's what happened in the first chapter of the manga.[/color]

[i]“Looks like he found his dying will.” Final muttered. "I was worried he might actually have died there..."[/i]

[color=#0000cd]Wait a minute, there was the possibility that he could have died there? What the hell, Final? I get that this is powered by his will, but if your mission involves killing the very person who is supposed to take over the mafia, you really need to rethink how this plan should work.[/color]

[i]They looked up in time to see Arashi jump from the roof, and fall down to the ground. He landed with hardly a sound, on his two feet, as if he had just done a small leap. He looked up at them with an intense glare.[/i]

[color=#800080]Hurray, fight sequence! Looks like Arashi is about to prove his worth.[/color]

[i]The Mafioso in the back, who had slicked-back purple-dyed hair, gasped. "Look! He has a flame on his forehead, he's the one! We don't know what he's capable of, put him down!"[/i]

[i]Two of the Mafiosos shot at him various times. Arashi quickly sidestepped the bullets aimed for him with a calm expression on his face. He dashed toward one of the shooters, and before he could react, kneed him in the stomach. He kicked off from the kneed Mafiosos toward the other shooter, and punched him in the face. Both men were knocked out.[/i]

[color=#0000cd]Okay, I'm picturing this scene in my head... Yeah, that was awesome.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]Alright, I'll concede, he's proving that he's good at being the protagonist, although the personality change is somewhat drastic.[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Ah, you see, that's the effect of the Dying Will.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]So as long as he keeps dying, Arashi is cool?[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Yes![/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]Cool, so I got even more satisfaction from reading Arashi get stabbed.[/color]

[i]"He's strong..." the Mafioso with purple hair muttered.[/i]

[i]"That's right. And with my Dying Will...I shall protect this school!"[/i]

[color=#800080]So passionate...[/color]

[color=#0000cd]Okay, so the Dying Will actually makes inconsistent personalities into a plot point? This is the same guy who started the story bored out of his mind.[/color]

[i]There were only two other Mafiosos left conscious aside from the purple-haired one, and both of them dashed at Arashi with knives. Arashi dodged the first stab, and tripped the stabber, then grabbed the hand of the other one before he could stab him, and twisted it. The Mafioso fell to the ground, clenching his broken hand, clenching his teeth and grunting. The other Mafioso stumbled up, and punched at Arashi, who ducked, and threw his own punch, hitting the attacker straight in the face, and sending him against a tree. The Mafioso with the broken hand grabbed for his gun, but Arashi stepped on his hand.[/i]

[i]"Reaching for something?" he asked, then crushed the man's hand under his foot.

The purple-haired Mafioso had gotten his fallen comrade's rifle, and was pointing his gun forward. Not at Arashi, but at Hana and her friend, Aki, who had long black hair and brown eyes. There were lunch boxes at their feet, their contents scattered.[/i]

[color=#0000cd]Outrageously badassadery aside, where did Hana and Aki come from?[/color]

[i]"What now, little hero? You move, and they go down. So just be a good little runt and give yerself up, would ya?"[/i]

[i]Arashi clenched his teeth. "Damn you..."

Just then, a small rock came from above, and struck the Mafioso on the head, making him stumble back.[/i]

[color=#2f4f4f]"Curses, a rock! My one weakness!"[/color]

[i][i]Who in the...[/i] he thought, then looked toward the school's roof. [i]Final! Alright, now's my chance![/i]

Arashi dashed forward before the Mafioso could regain his senses, and punched him in the gut. He fell to his knees, and Arashi kneed him, causing him to fly up a bit, before crashing to the ground. He squirmed to get up, but Arashi stepped on his chest.[/i]

[i]"You're not going anywhere, punk..." Arashi muttered, and stepped down more, almost breaking one of the Mafioso's ribs.[/i]

[i]The man hollered, but Arashi just knelt down and punched him on the face, knocking him out.[/i]

[color=#0000cd]I get that this is supposed to be a shonen series about the mafia, but isn't Arashi being excessively brutal? These guys totally deserve it, but still.[/color]

[i]Just then, the flame faded and Arashi quickly stood up holding his head. “Ugh, what the hell happened?” he asked.[/i]

[i]He looked around and saw the Mafioso group all unconscious. He turned toward the school and saw a large crowd had gathered, with many mutterings and whisperings among them.

A few of the students ran up to him.

“Man, that was awesome!” one guy exclaimed with a grin, giving Arashi a slap on the back.

"How'd you do that?" another asked, his eyes wide.

Soon, a small group had formed around Arashi, asking him all sorts of questions. He actually began to smile, until he saw Hana still standing next to the fallen lunch boxes. A bead of sweat rolled down her cheek, and she gulped.

Arashi frowned, as he saw a lot of students walk away, giving him weird looks.[/i]

[color=#800080]This is a pretty cute scene. I'm glad that Arashi has some fans for being awesome.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]Except others are equally disturbed because he was, as Roxas pointed out, far more ruthless than he needed to be.[/color]

[color=#4b0082]And he scared off Hana! That's not good. Hopefully things get better for him.[/color]

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[i]At the end of the school day, Arashi started walking home, alone as always, still wondering what happened. Suddenly, he felt a weight on him and looked up. Final was sitting on top of his head, looking ahead.

“So, now do you believe me?” he asked.

Arashi blinked. "Final..."

He nodded. This caused Final to tumble down from his head. Before reaching the ground, however, he spun around once and landed perfectly on the ground.

"Don't nod when I'm sitting on top of your head or I'll fall off, dammit!" he said, glaring at Arashi.

"S-sorry..." the teenager said, then sighed. "I miss my boring life...Hana doesn't even look like she wants to ever see me again...being thrown into such a world is too much...is there no way to go back?"[/i]

[color=#2f4f4f]"I liked it better when my life sucked! I hate being a hero!"[/color]

[color=#800080]To be fair, this is a lot for Arashi to take in.[/color]

[color=#0000cd]You don't understand the finer points of being cynical, do you?[/color]

[i]"There isn't. Now that your destiny has come to you, you can no longer hide from it. On the upside, I'll always be by your side until you become a Mafia boss."

"R-really? That's so great of you!" Arashi exclaimed, smiling.

"No, it's not." Final said, then turned around and begun walking. "It's my job. Now come on, you don't want to miss our flight."

"Flight? I heard nothing about a flight!"

"We're going to Italy, which is the most likely place for a Guardian to be. Remember, you have to find all six of them."[/i]

[color=#0000cd]So are we reading a Pokémon story where Arashi has to recruit humans, or was this actually part of the plot in Reborn?[/color]

[color=#4b0082]No, Tsuna just got his Guardians over time. The plot of this story doesn't have to be exactly the same as the manga.[/color]

[color=#0000cd]I suppose you're right, and since this is the first chapter, it seems like it should be able to differentiate itself from the source material.[/color]

[i]"Right...you could have at least told me, so I can mentally prepare... but tell me, what was up with that dagger? I don't remember anything since the time I was stabbed up until when I came to."

Final stopped walking, and looked back at Arashi. "It was a dagger whose blade made with the same stuff as the Dying Will bullet. It's a material that allows a person to enter "Dying Will Mode", as it is referred to, by giving you the strength to fulfill your Dying Will. It only lasts five minutes though."

"And...if I didn't have a dying will when I was stabbed?"

Final turned away from Arashi again. "Well...I am an assassin..."

[b][i]J-just what kind of scary person did I get involved with...?[/i] [/b]Arashi thought, trembling.[/i]

[color=#0000cd]And that's the end of the first [s]Target[/s] chapter. It actually wasn't so bad. I would imagine that Arashi will man up over the course of the story, but there isn't much of a plot besides Arashi's impending inheritance and his search for his Guardians. And why does he have to get specifically six Guardians.[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Well, you see, there are these things called Arcobaleno, and-[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]That's nice. It wasn't too bad, but I'm really not interested in the story quite yet.[/color]

[color=#800080]This is definitely worth the read though. You enjoyed it, right nightwing?[/color]

[color=#4b0082]I sure did! I strongly recommend this story other KHR fans, and since there are nine chapters, there's plenty to read here. And you guys can call me Ven if you want.[/color]

[color=#0000cd]Well, Ven, thank you for your time. I'll talk to you later, okay?[/color]

[color=#4b0082]Alright, see you later![/color]


[color=#2f4f4f]So what now?[/color]

[color=#0000cd]I didn't even consider it before, but there's another Roxas out there. The problem is, how come we could communicate with the Ven from that universe? I guess that Ven is the Chaos Sonic of that universe.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]Maybe there's an alternate universe where he actually is a hawk?[/color]

[color=#800080]More importantly, this could be related to why Votek is recruiting the protagonists.[/color]

[color=#0000cd]Speaking of Votek... he's written another Divination.[/color]


[color=#800080]Oh God... What did he do he Tay?[/color]

[color=#0000cd]It's hard to tell, but it can't be good. All the more reason to be evasive of him.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]He called you "The Chronicler". What did he mean by that?[/color]

[color=#0000cd]Your guess is as good as mine.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]So what do we do now?[/color]

[color=#0000cd]We'll have to monitor his movements. He seems willing to play along with the game, and he pretty much admitted that he's going after Ryu next. Guess that means we're going to have to find Brandon. He's got a Gastly for who knows whatever reason, so he might be able to help us against Votek.[/color]

[color=#2f4f4f]You let me know when you figure out how we're supposed to even find him.[/color]

[color=#800080]We were lucky enough for Ven to find us, but what Brandon?[/color]

[color=#0000cd]I thought you said we should be passionate?[/color]

[color=#800080]Shut up.[/color][/spoiler]

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