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Name/Gender/Age: Sulir,male,18
Race: half human - half undead (can switch between human and undead but he becomes tired)
Appearance: he has silver,short messy hair,red eyes,he stands at 5.66 feet,hes not skinny or fat hes a little bit in the middle,his skin is white but just a bit tanned(a bit),in his undead form hes basicly an undead skeleton. since i dont know how to describe armors here's a pic instead http://megaween.deviantart.com/art/Warrior-Fantasy-Earth-Zero-167952800?q=boost%3Apopular%20blood%20warrior&qo=22 only the armor and if no pics are allowed i'm sorry
Bio: when he was born an outlaw killed his parents,then the great blood mage sulir took him to his palace and raised him ,when sulir became 10 years old sulir enchanted him with the powers of blood,he then was kidnapped by the king of undead he made him undead but he still remained human and he learned how to control his undead form so then he took a sword and he tried to kill the undead king but he failed so he ran away,5 years later he went to blood dragon mountain he cut some blood dragon scales and he forged his armor then he went to the skull kings lair and he took some small red skulls and forged his weapon,after every adventure,he went to taverns, he would get some water there and didnt pay for it so he was forced to go get a job,so he became a blacksmith he collected some gold and payed for all the water he drank, after he did that,he went to the forest to take a walk but then a dark mage enchanted him with the powers of dark magic and he blacked out,when he woke up,he found himself in a small house and a man was there so then Sulir asked the man "who are you and why did you help me?" the man answered "my name is Odein,i saw u lying in the forest so i had to help you" sulir said "thanks but i have to go now" so sulirleft the house and then he continued his journey.
Personality: he's aggresive half of his time,he's tactical that means he plans attacks so he doesnt die or die quickly,very sneaky he'd rather sneak past monsters to not waste time fighting them,he's really adventurous so he'd rather climb up a mountain and find a reaaaaallllyyyy rare plant that can only be found only once in a century than just chill in the forest and eat some fruits
Weapon: a long,red dagger with a small red skull on it,black handle and a small red skull on the handle
Magic/Power: dark magic (can shoot up to 2 darkballs each turn that hurt a bit,can teleport up to 50 inches away each turn once)
Other: his weaknesses are arcane magic and ice

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[quote name='Keyblade Spartan' timestamp='1305197475' post='5204599']
i added my bio to my app
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I'd say that you rewrite your app.

Try adding capitals.

In my personal opinion, though, you don't think your grammar's good enough as to RP. But that's up to Twig.
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[quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1305209354' post='5204777']
I'd say that you rewrite your app.

Try adding capitals.

In my personal opinion, though, you don't think your grammar's good enough as to RP. But that's up to Twig.
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i'll try to add capitals,btw my grammar is better but i was too sleepy when i was making my app
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Alright to sum it up, seeing as there is no "plot" Flandre, Moneh and I are short of half-assing one by mixing our ideas together
At least [i]I[/i] am

Flandre stated that, for some reason, the barrier around the world is weakening and causing chaos to being spreading around the world.

I jumped in, as I usually do, by introducing the "main villains" and having them attempt to complete a goal by defeating Fiera . . . who seriously as a character is getting on my nerves, and as a roleplayer I am annoyed with Flandre, but moving on . . . while stealing something from Marco [Monkeh's number two character]

Monkeh, seeing where I possibly was going with this, had her first character Koyuri state that the item stolen by one of my characters, Amanda, could be used to form an army of dragonkin like herself.

That is pretty much where we stand the moment I posted this. How things will change is anyone's guess seeing as I am making this up off the top of my head with each post.
maybe that is why I see this as almost never ending . . . but who cares X3
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[quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1306126758' post='5226544']
Alright to sum it up, seeing as there is no "plot" Flandre, Moneh and I are short of half-assing one by mixing our ideas together
At least [i]I[/i] am

Flandre stated that, for some reason, the barrier around the world is weakening and causing chaos to being spreading around the world.
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Which is actually due to the amount of sin currently in Kerulia, Too much Sin in Kerulia weakens the boundary between Kerulia and Viemvear, Eventually causing it to crack, then break

[quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1306126758' post='5226544']
I jumped in, as I usually do, by introducing the "main villains" and having them attempt to complete a goal by defeating Fiera . . . who seriously as a character is getting on my nerves, and as a roleplayer I am annoyed with Flandre, but moving on . . . while stealing something from Marco [Monkeh's number two character]
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Uriel is not necessarily the main villain, it in fact has to be someone that was still in Kerulia at the time of the break rather than Viemvear, Amanda has the highest possibility to be the cause of it...

Also, I Facepalmed at your "objective", You have access to the Dictionary, Use it, There is an Entry on Veirnars(What Fiera is, Though there is no entry in the Library's encyclopedia), One of Fiera's Weaknesses is actually been blotted out by the crack, so use the other to try to defeat her, though will kill other sinners in the process =3

Also, Since the Boundary has cracked, The council has some influence outside of Viemvear, but not much, Their influence is ironically limited to the black mist, so yea, Now you know WHAT that feeling was earlier...
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Actually, There is 1 Main plot and 2 Sub-plots:

First off, There is the Main Plot involving the East's Prediction of a Meteor Shower, as well as the North's and West's prediction of a Rising Darkness

Then There is the Dragon Army, Monkeh's Sub-plot

Finally, There is My Sub-plot, Involving Viemvear's boundary breaking, Possibly thought to be the beginning of the Rising darkness
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Name/Gender/Age: Ka'Lees / Male / 160 (Qunai age slower than most)

Race: Qunai - The Qunai are an honourable race, who are very stern about their rituals and their ways. They are quick to shun anyone who opposes their ways, and prepared to fight to defend their honour and land. They are larger in stature to humans, and much darker skinned with blonde hair. They practice the art of Alhastre, which is the use of magic to transmute elements into other elements, so long as it abides by the rules of equal exchange. They were virtually wiped out in a conflict with an ancient Human city, as a rogue Qunai obtained a powerful artifact that allowed him to bypass the rule and thus destroyed the area. As a race, they are slowly perishing and have sent several warriors to find a way to save their people. They have lived in desert areas for years, and hate the cold.

Appearance: Ka'Lees is about 6'4, has a bleach blonde hair which is held back in a ponytail by a horse hair band. His skin is a deep brown, and his eyes are red like blood. His muscles are exposed from his ragtag clothing. He wears a crude linen shirt, held together with bones, along with linen trousers which are loose and held around his waist with a rope of horse hair. He wears tanned leather sandals. His left arm is covered in tattoos which show the laws and teachings of construction Alhastre, and his right arm has the tattoos displaying the laws and teaching of destruction Alhastre, and as such, his left and right arm are more powerful than one another at certain things. Ka'Lees has a large scar on his right cheek, presumably from previous combat. He has a short, curved dagger hanging from his belt, which he uses in addition to his Alhastre.

Bio: Ka'Lees was always a larger child, bigger built and sturdier than the rest. His elder brother died in a combat trial, a testament to the Qunai's harsh way of living, and Ka'Lees witnessed it. From that day onwards he trained harder than any of the other aspirants, to strike vengeance against the one who struck his brother down. Whilst he did lose his brother, he still had a sister, and both his parents, although his parents were aged and weak, soon to leave the clan and join the sun god, Hastre. His sister, Ha'Lace is a apprentice priestess, who is soon to leave for a bigger clan. When Ka'Lees reached the age of 25, which is very young in terms of Qunai, he was tasked with a hunting expedition with three other aspirants, and was away for six months. When he returned, he returned with the heads of all three. They all went insane in the harsh wilds and fought one another. As a matter of respect, Ka'Lees killed them and returned their heads for a proper send off. Aswell as all of their heads, he returned with a masterfully built wagon full of meat and hides, proving his skill with Alhastre and his survivability. Since that point forward, he repeatedly proved himself as a competent fighter and master of the elements, ranging from crafting homes and tools, to defeating opposers to his honour and invaders against his clan, such as Centaurs and giant beetles. On the day now known as the Death Spark, Ka'Lees fought against the onslaught of humans, defending his clan vigoursly. His parents were already dead by this point, taken peacefully as the years went by. At the middle age of 156, Ka'Lees was the head of his family, and the only member of it left in the village. Ha'Lace had already moved to the large Qunai city, which was also under attack from the humans. As Ka'Lees struck down another human with a large chunk of transmuted rock, he spotted the one now known as the Betrayer. He stood upon a cliff, holding up a sparkling red crystal. Uttering the ancient words of Alhastre, a shining red light swept over the land. Ka'Lees encased himself and nearby Qunai in a quick transmutation, protecting them from the Death Spark. He was hailed as a hero, but accepting no such title. After a few years, the remaining Qunai had branched together, living in a small village in the desert, people of the sands once more. This is when Ka'Lees decided that he should find a way to save his people, and left for the grasslands, forests and mountains if he had to, prepared to lose even his life to save his kin.

Personality: Ka'Lees isn't an overly talkative man, preferring to let his actions speak for him. He holds honour dear to his heart, and only works with those granted that trait. His stern attitude prevents him from backing away from many fights, battling till his blood drains or until they flee, whether it be their soul or body that escapes. Ka'Lees' sole purpose now is to find a way to help his people become restored to their former glory, using his Alhastre knowledge to get what he needs. Whilst he appears quite frightening, he is actually quite kind hearted, and willing to help those that ask for his assistance, especially the poor, as he knows their pain and sorrows. He fights with the ferocity of a tiger, but with the wisdom of an owl, making him a formidable opponent. One of his main weaknesses is his lack of resistance to the cold, and his strong sense of honour, even though he will never admit that it's a weakness.

Weapon: A small curved dagger and his strong fists.

Magic/Power: Master of Alhastre, able to transmute anything so long as he abides by the rule of equivalent exchange.

Other: This is my first RP character for a while, so if I have missed any key details required please let me know. I am willing to let this character die, but only if it is in a decent and 'honourable' way, so please PM me first. Heres hoping I get in ^-^ I do apologise for the minor necrobump, I have been following the RP for a while and finally got my account working, so decided to apply :P

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