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Mecha Love Posted April 15, 2011 Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 I'm sorry, I don't really understand the concept of this. It has no plot really and what exactly are you going to do? What is going to happen? You'll be sparring and neither will want to lose because it is "virtual fighting" as such. If it was a yugioh/pokemon RP then you'd use skill but here you are literally just going to say "Jacob punched with all his might at Janette who had no chance to block" I'm sorry but it doesn't call out to me and I don't understand the point. I'm posting this so you can see my opinion and maybe improve this. I like the way you've written it out though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSP Posted April 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 [quote name='Elemental Dragon' timestamp='1302855928' post='5139813'] I'm sorry, I don't really understand the concept of this. It has no plot really and what exactly are you going to do? What is going to happen? You'll be sparring and neither will want to lose because it is "virtual fighting" as such. If it was a yugioh/pokemon RP then you'd use skill but here you are literally just going to say "Jacob punched with all his might at Janette who had no chance to block" I'm sorry but it doesn't call out to me and I don't understand the point. I'm posting this so you can see my opinion and maybe improve this. I like the way you've written it out though. [/quote] Thanks, I'm always open to suggestions. To be honest, I don't see the difference, I could exaggerate the fights to the point DBZ does, but then again, what would be the point? However, your opinion has made me reconsider, I will open another RP up and in the meantime get to work on a more solid plot for this one. Thank you for your consideration. Lock~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 15, 2011 Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 [quote name='GSP' timestamp='1302856527' post='5139821'] Thanks, I'm always open to suggestions. To be honest, I don't see the difference, I could exaggerate the fights to the point DBZ does, but then again, what would be the point? However, your opinion has made me reconsider, I will open another RP up and in the meantime get to work on a more solid plot for this one. Thank you for your consideration. [b]Lock~[/b] <--- Not yet [/quote] My advice to you would be probably try some other RP's. I could name a few good ones [My own () Elemental Clash and Battle of the Chsen Duelists, Pokemon Keys of Anima, Music for a forgotten future, Pokemon Tech etc.] and I'd say have a go at those. See how RP's work and build on yours. If you like pokemon, make a pokemon RP. Build or change this one. A fighting type pokemon RP? Just an average pokemon school? etc etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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