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This is my card i will use for round 1:

 

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Lore:

This card cannot be special summoned or set except by attributing 2 dark monsters, Once this card is on the field it cannot be destroyed by card effect or trap, For each dark monster in the graveyard this card gains 1000 atk , if the opponent has no monsters on the field your opponent suffers 2300 life points.

 

looooool wish me luck lml

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The card was also terrible:

1) It was difficult to even understand what it does. "attributing" 2 dark monsters? It can be Normal Summoned? Does that first line mean that I can Special Summon it from my hand by tributing 2 DARK tokens in a nomi-like fashion? "cannot be destroyed by card effect or trap"? How is a card supposed to destroy it other than by it's effect, anyway? When and how often does that last effect trigger? Does it reduce life points or inflict damage?

2) Insanely broken - as far as I can tell, this is a Normal Summonable Beater that has a clause to Special itself, and that burns for 2300 at who-knows-when timing while easily having enough ATK to single-handedly OTK, especially with that burn.

 

I mean, did you even read it? How could you possibly read it through and still think that you had to "attribute" monsters to Summon it? Usually I don't go out of my way to criticize people's cards, but when you come to the contest's section, to explicitly show people, "This is what represents the level of card making I am at", and to have that level tested against other people, a basic read-though can't be too much to ask. OCG errors like not capitalizing Special Summon can be ignored - maybe you just don't know the correct syntax - but outright logical failure like those present on the card simply show a lack of effort. Why even bother to enter a contest with hopes of winning when you're not putting effort in? Surely that just puts the effort you made to put the information into the card maker, and to post it here, entirely wasted?

 

You don't have to be good, but at least bother to try.

 

Edit: Sorry for the rant, but it's late and things like that irk me.

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