Chiri Tsukikawa Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 The program I'm using is GIMP 2. As I've said I'm trying to get better at this, so I've decided to give it another try. Any advice, please. I'll do my best to fix it. [spoiler=Versions 1, 2, 3 & 4]Version 1: [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/29lmzac.png[/IMG] Version 2 (The background is blured): [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2qamq9k.png[/IMG] Version 3: [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/15i9oap.png[/IMG] Version 4 with main help from Kuroda Kaito (some help from So Legit You Quit & Shocked): [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/21ab677.png[/IMG][/spoiler] Version 5 (I waved the text because it goes good with her water theme, she's a water demon): [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/34ove2t.png[/IMG] If you don't have anything nice to say (advice or "I like it", etc), please don't say anything. If you say anyhting that doesn't make sense you will be reported and/or negged. (I've clearly stated the program and what I what replies on, which is advice on how to make it better) There has been good people and [b]spam[/b] on my last one. And the spammer was reported. Thank you for reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 All you did was add a choppy render, dots, and text to a black background. Get more creative, look at tag tutorials, look at other pieces of art for an idea of how things should look. As for more critisism to add to what 21 guns is doing: You have 2 focals, the text and render. And your render takes up to much room in the tag. Your lacking the basics in this. As I said, look at some tutorials and stuff and it will help you. (basics being "flow, lighting, depth, atmosphere, etc."). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 The red dots kinda bad.. I think u should remove it. And the text is too plain.. Nice, keep going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 The render is over-sharpen, the dots are annoying and the tag/sig is too simple and stay away the text until you master the other things. If you want i can PM you some GIMP tags that i have Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiri Tsukikawa Posted April 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 Thanks. Like I said I'll do my best to fix it. And .:Kai Hiwatari:. that would help, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiri Tsukikawa Posted April 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 I updated it. Thanks so much Kuroda Kaito! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 15, 2011 Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 You're improving. Don't stop, take as much critism as you can, use it wisely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiri Tsukikawa Posted April 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 Thanks. I take criticism like you said and try to improve it from what people told me. EDIT: I think I made the text better. [quote name='Wolkenritter Vita' timestamp='1302473416' post='5129166'] I waved the text because it goes good with her water theme, she's a water demon[/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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