Crystal Gem monsters

[EndlessOcean]

Cyrstal Gem Onyx Dragon
Earth/Level 8/Dragon/Fusion/Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck by sending 1 "Crystal Beast Amber Mammoth" & 1 "Crystal Beast Saphire Pegasus" to the Graveyard. You can Destroy 1 face-up Continious Trap Card to have this card gain 500 ATK until the End Phase. If this face-up card would be destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone, as a Continious Trap Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard.
2600/2000

Before i make more, Any good?

[Horu]

A few OCG errors but the card is a 7/10 once it gets fixed.

[EndlessOcean]

What are the OCGE?

[Horu]

Instead of "destroying" said monsters, try sending them to the Graveyard. Also "Continuous-Trap Card" should just be "Continuous Trap Card". Those are the only errors I can spot for now.

[EndlessOcean]

Fixed, should i make more?

[Black W Mage]

s*** card is s***.

[Cody Frost]

I see absolutely little use in this card -.-...and I'm a Ex-Crystal Beast user. Ran the theme in several forms, ranging from Hamon Beatdown, to Gadjiltron Beasts, to Abundance Draw Engine OTK. This card...is kinda useless.

Rate: 1.3/10

Sry to say this is probably my lowest rate for a card :/

[Black W Mage]

[quote name='Cody Frost' timestamp='1302306824' post='5123643']
I see absolutely little use in this card -.-...and I'm a Ex-Crystal Beast user. Ran the theme in several forms, ranging from [b]Hamon Beatdown[/b], to [b]Gadjiltron Beasts[/b], to [b]Abundance Draw Engine OTK[/b].
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lol wut

[Horu]

You should create more gems but slowly work with them. They will get better and better if you continue to work with them. I promise.

[Cody Frost]

[quote name='Red W Mage No. 6-2-5' timestamp='1302307002' post='5123647']
lol wut
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Hamon Beatdown is when you Abuse your Blessings through the Draw Power from Ancient City - Rainbow Ruins and Rare Value, before you summon Hamons (1 at a time) and kill your opponet. Usually you'll find a way to Abundance the place, Summon 3 Pegasus, 1 Cobalt Eagle, and 1 Other Crystal Beast Monster. Use Pegasus' Effects and get 3 Crystal Beasts on your Spell and Trap Zone, Use Cobalt Eagle's effect and send a Pegasus to the top of your Deck..And then Hamon Appears to deal a ton of damage. The other Crystal Beast Monster I tended to Summon in this combo was Emerald Tortoise, to abuse Hamon's Defensive Effect.

Gadjiltron Beasts (Better known as Gadjiltron Abundance), uses Geartown run at 3 along with Ancient City. You destroy your own Geartown with Another Geartown or Ancient City, and Spam Gadjiltron Dragons from your Deck while you set up your backrow for the final blow using Abundance.

Abunance Draw Engine is Achieved with the Brionac/Ancient City infinite draw engine. All you need are at least 5 cards in your hand and you keep spamming the draw engine until you get all the cards you need...usually all 3 Abundances.

[Horu]

Very amusing

[Cody Frost]

[quote name='Horu' timestamp='1302310394' post='5123741']
Very amusing
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Sometimes I hate your very simplistic few word comments >.> I see no poet in your words...

[EndlessOcean]

Can people stop saying this is just bad and tell me how to improve it?

[Horu]

I'm not too familiar with crystal beasts. I just generally like the card. Though he shouldn't revolve his stuff around the TCG or his cards won't really seem like his own. So he should make it into a completely different Archtype.

[Cody Frost]

[quote name='Horu' timestamp='1302311574' post='5123773']
I'm not too familiar with crystal beasts. I just generally like the card. Though he shouldn't revolve his stuff around the TCG or his cards won't really seem like his own. So he should make it into a completely different Archtype.
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That's an Idea or he could make this card a level 4 or lower monster that can be splashed in the Deck. A good example of such a card would be like the following (which I submited to a Card Contest):
[img]http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1830/67897.jpg[/img]
Lore:
When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or Special Summoned, you can add 1 "Crystal" Spell Card or 1 “Ancient City - Rainbow Ruins“ from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. If this card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard.

Try something that revolves around the Crystal Beast Theme. Spells and Ancient City are a big part of the Crystal Beast theme, which is why I based this card like that. Maybe you can try something similar to this. Hmm...on a side note, maybe I should repost my Crystal Beast Support Cards on the Realistic Cards forum...

[Horu]

I see

[Cody Frost]

[quote name='Horu' timestamp='1302313164' post='5123837']
I see
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I had a feeling you would say something like this >.>

[Horu]

Maybe I should make CB deck to get familiar with the cards.

[Cody Frost]

It wouldn't be a bad idea. That's how I managed to make a lot of support cards for several archtypes, and managed to develop several archtypes of my own.

[Horu]

I actually create my archtypes by complete accident

[Black W Mage]

no I meant that you were bad at playing CBs.

[Horu]

I don't think I've ever found an opponent that runs CBs. Maybe when I get back into the game, I can ask my friend to make a CB deck for me to test against.

[Cody Frost]

Even with Abundance, CBeasts will be riddled with weakpoints. (And what do you mean I don't know how to play C.Beasts?)

[Horu]

He thinks he's the only one that can play CB properly.

[Black W Mage]

It's cuz Ancient City is bad.