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I hate showcase these days, a year ago you would have had at least five posts by now. I'm sorry.

Anyway, the tag feels like it has no focal point. I know I can see it, but it's not noticeable enough, therefore other effects on the tag catch my eye.

I like the idea and the concept, however I don't think you've executed it well enough for it to be a finished tag.

I think you could do some more with it, blur the background. Add a little more depth, the sprite/render you have used looks like you've just set it to overlay, which you shouldn't make obvious. Try and emphasize the focal more, make it appear to be more 3-D, than flat on the background.

Get where i'm coming from?

However in spite of this, I think you have yourself a nice style. All you need to do is improve and get better, once you manage to centre the focal and make it stand out more, you'll have your self a decent tag!
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