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[color="#0000ff"][spoiler='The first ten cards of the Storm Archtype']
|Storm - Aquosis|0|SET0|Aqua/Effect|Water|4||1600|1600|When
[/color][color="#0000ff"]this card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a different
attribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this monster
to the deck then shuffle your deck. During your Standby Phase, gain Life Points
equal to this monsters level x100.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Flarzaqus|0|SET0|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1800|0| When
[/color][color="#0000ff"]this card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a different
attribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this monster
to the deck then shuffle your deck. During your Standby Phase, deal damage to
your opponent equal to this monsters level x100.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Bresalve|0|SET0|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|4||1900|0|
[/color][color="#0000ff"]When this card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a
different attribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this
monster to the deck then shuffle your deck. This card can attack your opponent
directly. If it does, half the battle damage.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Nighatim|0|SET0|Fiend/Effect|Dark|4||1800|0| When
[/color][color="#0000ff"]this card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a different
attribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this monster
to the deck then shuffle your deck. Once per turn if this card has destroyed a
monster, this card can destroy a card on the field.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Shinseus|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|4||0|2000| When
this card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a different
attribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this monster
to the deck then shuffle your deck. Once per turn, this card can negate the
activation off a card which destroys a monster on the field.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Realm of the Storm|0|SET0|Spell Card|Spell||Field|||This
[/color][color="#0000ff"]card gains the follow effects when there is a “Storm” Monster(s) on the field
depending on the attribute. [/color]

[color="#0000ff"]FIRE: Deal 500 points of damage to your opponent during your
[/color][color="#0000ff"]standbye phase. [/color]

[color="#0000ff"]WATER: Gain 500LP during your standbye phase.

WIND: Select one “Storm” Monster you control. It can attack
[/color][color="#0000ff"]directly this turn. When it does so, battle damaged is halved. You cannot use
this effect on the same monster consecutively.
[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]LIGHT: This card cannot be destroyed by card effect.

DARK: Once per turn, if a monster you control has destroyed
[/color][color="#0000ff"]another monster in battle you can select one card on the field and destroy it. [/color]

[color="#0000ff"]If all off these effects can be used, you gain the
[/color][color="#0000ff"]additional effect: You can send this card from the field to the graveyard in
order to summon 1 ‘Master of the Storm’ from your deck or hand. For the first
turn it is on the field. Treat it like no attributes have been tributed. On the
second turn it has been on the field, treat it like all five attributes have
been tributed.|
[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]Fury of the Storm|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|7||500|0|This
[/color][color="#0000ff"]card cannot be normal summon or set. This card can only be special summoned by
removing from play three level four “Storm” type monsters off different names
from the deck. This card’s Attribute is treated as the attribute of those three
monsters. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card attacks, trap
cards cannot be activated until the end off the damage phase. For each
different attribute on your side on the field, this card can attack your
opponent directly. When this card is attacked, raise its attack equal to the
number off different attributes on the field x500 for that battle. Both off the
previous effect ignore the EARTH attribute. If this card's total ATK would be
changed by a card effect, negate the activation of that card and destroy it -
excluding this card’s own effect. When this card is destroyed, return all
removed from play “Storm” monsters to the deck.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Rivsibaes Procelela – Nature's Fury, Protecting Storm.|0|SET0|Dragon/Effect|Light|11||500|0|If
[/color][color="#0000ff"]your life points would be decreased to 0 and there is 1 "Fury of the
Storm" which has been in your Graveyard for at least 5 turns, Special
Summon this card this card and gain 100 Life points for each "Storm"
monster of a different name that has been returned to the deck in this duel.
This summon cannot be negated. You can only summon this card in this way once
per duel. The Attribute of this card is also treated as WIND, WATER, FIRE and
DARK. You take no damage while this card in on the field. During your battle
phase, all of your opponent’s card effects are negated. This card can attack
your opponent directly for each different attribute on the field. The EARTH
attribute is not included in this effect. When this card attacks, increase your
Life Points by its attack. During your opponents battle phase, change this card
into defence mode and
increase its defence
equal to the number off different attributes on the field x750. The EARTH
attribute is not included in this effect. When this card is removed from the
field Special Summon it during the end phase of that turn.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Storm's Counter!|0|SET0|Trap Card|Trap||Counter|||Send one
[/color][color="#0000ff"]Storm monster from your deck to your graveyard to negate and destroy a Trap,
Spell or Effect Monster who's effect destroys a monster on the field|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Spirit of the Storm|0|SET0|Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||You
[/color][color="#0000ff"]can active this effect once per your standbye phase. Select one Storm Monster
on the Field whose level is divisible by four then select one Storm Monster in
the graveyard with a level equal or less off it which is divisible be four. For
this turn, the select monster on the field gains the effect off the selected
monster in the graveyard.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"][/spoiler][/color]
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[quote name='Tempest of Reach' timestamp='1303470962' post='5158820']
[color="#0000ff"][spoiler='The first ten cards of the Storm Archtype']
|Storm - Aquosis|0|SET0|Aqua/Effect|Water|4||1600|1600|When
[/color][color="#0000ff"]this card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a different
attribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this monster
to the deck then shuffle your deck. During your Standby Phase, gain Life Points
equal to this monsters level x100.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Flarzaqus|0|SET0|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1800|0| When
[/color][color="#0000ff"]this card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a different
attribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this monster
to the deck then shuffle your deck. During your Standby Phase, deal damage to
your opponent equal to this monsters level x100.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Bresalve|0|SET0|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|4||1900|0|
[/color][color="#0000ff"]When this card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a
different attribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this
monster to the deck then shuffle your deck. This card can attack your opponent
directly. If it does, half the battle damage.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Nighatim|0|SET0|Fiend/Effect|Dark|4||1800|0| When
[/color][color="#0000ff"]this card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a different
attribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this monster
to the deck then shuffle your deck. Once per turn if this card has destroyed a
monster, this card can destroy a card on the field.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Shinseus|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|4||0|2000| When
this card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a different
attribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this monster
to the deck then shuffle your deck. Once per turn, this card can negate the
activation off a card which destroys a monster on the field.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Realm of the Storm|0|SET0|Spell Card|Spell||Field|||This
[/color][color="#0000ff"]card gains the follow effects when there is a “Storm” Monster(s) on the field
depending on the attribute. [/color]

[color="#0000ff"]FIRE: Deal 500 points of damage to your opponent during your
[/color][color="#0000ff"]standbye phase. [/color]

[color="#0000ff"]WATER: Gain 500LP during your standbye phase.

WIND: Select one “Storm” Monster you control. It can attack
[/color][color="#0000ff"]directly this turn. When it does so, battle damaged is halved. You cannot use
this effect on the same monster consecutively.
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[color="#0000ff"]LIGHT: This card cannot be destroyed by card effect.

DARK: Once per turn, if a monster you control has destroyed
[/color][color="#0000ff"]another monster in battle you can select one card on the field and destroy it. [/color]

[color="#0000ff"]If all off these effects can be used, you gain the
[/color][color="#0000ff"]additional effect: You can send this card from the field to the graveyard in
order to summon 1 ‘Master of the Storm’ from your deck or hand. For the first
turn it is on the field. Treat it like no attributes have been tributed. On the
second turn it has been on the field, treat it like all five attributes have
been tributed.|
[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]Fury of the Storm|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|7||500|0|This
[/color][color="#0000ff"]card cannot be normal summon or set. This card can only be special summoned by
removing from play three level four “Storm” type monsters off different names
from the deck. This card’s Attribute is treated as the attribute of those three
monsters. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card attacks, trap
cards cannot be activated until the end off the damage phase. For each
different attribute on your side on the field, this card can attack your
opponent directly. When this card is attacked, raise its attack equal to the
number off different attributes on the field x500 for that battle. Both off the
previous effect ignore the EARTH attribute. If this card's total ATK would be
changed by a card effect, negate the activation of that card and destroy it -
excluding this card’s own effect. When this card is destroyed, return all
removed from play “Storm” monsters to the deck.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Rivsibaes Procelela – Nature's Fury, Protecting Storm.|0|SET0|Dragon/Effect|Light|11||500|0|If
[/color][color="#0000ff"]your life points would be decreased to 0 and there is 1 "Fury of the
Storm" which has been in your Graveyard for at least 5 turns, Special
Summon this card this card and gain 100 Life points for each "Storm"
monster of a different name that has been returned to the deck in this duel.
This summon cannot be negated. You can only summon this card in this way once
per duel. The Attribute of this card is also treated as WIND, WATER, FIRE and
DARK. You take no damage while this card in on the field. During your battle
phase, all of your opponent’s card effects are negated. This card can attack
your opponent directly for each different attribute on the field. The EARTH
attribute is not included in this effect. When this card attacks, increase your
Life Points by its attack. During your opponents battle phase, change this card
into defence mode and
increase its defence
equal to the number off different attributes on the field x750. The EARTH
attribute is not included in this effect. When this card is removed from the
field Special Summon it during the end phase of that turn.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Storm's Counter!|0|SET0|Trap Card|Trap||Counter|||Send one
[/color][color="#0000ff"]Storm monster from your deck to your graveyard to negate and destroy a Trap,
Spell or Effect Monster who's effect destroys a monster on the field|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"]|Spirit of the Storm|0|SET0|Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||You
[/color][color="#0000ff"]can active this effect once per your standbye phase. Select one Storm Monster
on the Field whose level is divisible by four then select one Storm Monster in
the graveyard with a level equal or less off it which is divisible be four. For
this turn, the select monster on the field gains the effect off the selected
monster in the graveyard.|[/color]

[color="#0000ff"][/spoiler][/color]
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The wording is off.

"When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this card to your deck."

This should be correct, fix the cards with that. I also added "by battle" because they would be too abusable with wondrous orb, sacrifice, black cross etc.

Realm of the Storm is too long. Think of something different. Same goes for Rivsibaes Procelela – Nature's Fury, Protecting Storm (even the name is too long, I didn't even bothered reading it TBH.) and Fury of the Storm, which is broken anyway. I think we discussed Fury already......

And stop with that blue color crap and returns when posting cards.

Edit: This means that your cards will not be accepted, until you fixed them.
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Alright, Deck edited.

3|Set0|Jazoro, Inexorable Assassin
3|Set0|Hurdan, Warrior of the Flame Barrier
3|Set0|Vulf, Hunter of the Flame Barrier
3|Set0|Kyoko, Flame of the Flame Barrier
2|Set0|Vargon, Moth of the Flame Barrier
2|Set0|Nanotech Soldier
2|Set0|Bushi, Samurai Keeper

3|Set0|Wondrous Orb
3|Set0|Neko Dance
3|Set0|Pot of Magic
2|Set0|Black Cross
1|Set0|Lifesaving Escape

3|Set0|Sacrifice
3|Set0|Double Devastation
2|Set0|Grudge Reborn
2|Set0|Overheat

3|Set0|Magma Dragmored
3|Set0|Lightning Drake
3|Set0|Gux the Infernal Chariot
1|Set0|Emperor Zerozian
1|Set0|Oro the Flare
1|Set0|Saraph, Emblem of Eclipse
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3|Set0|Bird of Illusion
3|Set0|Gillman Summoner
3|Set0|Jazoro, Inexorable Assassin
3|Set0|The Destructive Trunk
2|Set0|Mariella, Lost Soul of the Sea
1|Set0|Bore Gore Rage Bull
1|Set0|Inspirited Core
1|Set0|Plasmoid Herculus
1|Set0|Red Lightning Technoni
1|Set0|Spring-a-Sprong

3|Set0|Black Cross
3|Set0|Brimstone Core
3|Set0|Lifesaving Escape
3|Set0|Wondrous Orb
1|Set0|Yellow Calling Spell

3|Set0|Lightning Pact
3|Set0|Sacrifice
2|Set0|Spell Syphon

3|Set0|Auros, Steed of Salvation
3|Set0|Junk Fastgun
3|Set0|Lightning Drake
3|Set0|Emperor Zerozian
3|Set0|Oro the Flare

Space for Neko Dance and Protective Radiance pl0x
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[quote name='Hp doom' timestamp='1303472182' post='5158865']
The wording is off.

"When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this card to your deck."

This should be correct, fix the cards with that. I also added "by battle" because they would be too abusable with wondrous orb, sacrifice, black cross etc.

Realm of the Storm is too long. Think of something different. Same goes for Rivsibaes Procelela – Nature's Fury, Protecting Storm (even the name is too long, I didn't even bothered reading it TBH.) and Fury of the Storm, which is broken anyway. I think we discussed Fury already......

And stop with that blue color crap and returns when posting cards.

Edit: This means that your cards will not be accepted, until you fixed them.
[/quote]
[color="#0000ff"]
Gee, and there isn't already huge ammount off cards that are abusable with wondrous orb, scarifice etc?

And what do you mean too long? There isn't a card effect limit...

Oh and, Fury is not broken, we have discussed him and I have discused him with other people and it is agreed. He is not broken.

Oh and BTW, I'm not stopping posting in blue. Call it a calling card if you will.

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[spoiler='Edited Storm monsters'][color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Aquosis|0|SET0|Aqua/Effect|Water|4||1600|1600|When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. During your Standby Phase, gain Life Points equal to this
monsters level x100.|[/color]







[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Flarzaqus|0|SET0|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1800|0 When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. During your Standby Phase, deal damage to your opponent
equal to this monsters level x100.|[/color]







[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Bresalve|0|SET0|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|4||1900|0|
When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. This card can attack your opponent directly. If it does,
half the battle damage.|[/color]







[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Nighatim|0|SET0|Fiend/Effect|Dark|4||1700|0|When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck.. Once per turn if this card has destroyed a monster, this
card can destroy a card on the field.|[/color]







[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Shinseus|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|4||0|2000 When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. Once per turn, this card can negate the activation off a
card which destroys a monster on the field.|[/color]

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[quote name='Cursed Reaction' timestamp='1303473003' post='5158906']
Tempest, while there isn't an effect limit, it's quite hard to read long and complicated effects. And Burning: it's actually SET1 which I'd the next set.
[/quote]

[color="#0000ff"]Right... well I can't really change them to make them any shorter... besides, complicated effects are fun!

Through I guess Fury of the Storm and Riv can be removed from the submission and wait until later... maybe SET5[/color]
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[quote name='Tempest of Reach' timestamp='1303473311' post='5158912']
[color="#0000ff"]Right... well I can't really change them to make them any shorter... besides, complicated effects are fun!

Through I guess Fury of the Storm and Riv can be removed from the submission and wait until later... maybe SET5[/color]
[/quote]

Guess you're quite patient then [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif[/img]

[quote name='~Burning Soul~' timestamp='1303473410' post='5158914']
yea i know that, but i was saying SET2 because of the Priority thing
[/quote]

Every set will have a priority list. It's basically what's most important in that set but, of course, you can submit in SET1 what you like.
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[quote name='.Kowalski' timestamp='1303472393' post='5158875']
3|Set0|Bird of Illusion
3|Set0|Gillman Summoner
3|Set0|Jazoro, Inexorable Assassin
3|Set0|The Destructive Trunk
2|Set0|Mariella, Lost Soul of the Sea
1|Set0|Bore Gore Rage Bull
1|Set0|Inspirited Core
1|Set0|Plasmoid Herculus
1|Set0|Red Lightning Technoni
1|Set0|Spring-a-Sprong

3|Set0|Black Cross
3|Set0|Brimstone Core
3|Set0|Lifesaving Escape
3|Set0|Wondrous Orb
1|Set0|Yellow Calling Spell

3|Set0|Lightning Pact
3|Set0|Sacrifice
2|Set0|Spell Syphon

3|Set0|Auros, Steed of Salvation
3|Set0|Junk Fastgun
3|Set0|Lightning Drake
3|Set0|Emperor Zerozian
3|Set0|Oro the Flare

Space for Neko Dance and Protective Radiance pl0x
[/quote]
Help guys
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[quote name='Tempest of Reach' timestamp='1303472622' post='5158884']
[color="#0000ff"]
Gee, and there isn't already huge ammount off cards that are abusable with wondrous orb, scarifice etc?

[b]And the solution is: Make even more?[/b]

And what do you mean too long? There isn't a card effect limit...

[b]There is, Cursed gave a good explanation.[/b]

Oh and, Fury is not broken, we have discussed him and I have discused him with other people and it is agreed. He is not broken.

Oh and BTW, I'm not stopping posting in blue. Call it a calling card if you will.

[b]STOP posting the YVD codes in blue. And stop making returns. I can't add the cards to YVD when you add returns and blue color (I can, but I'm too lazy to remove all that stuff)[/b]

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[spoiler='Edited Storm monsters'][color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Aquosis|0|SET0|Aqua/Effect|Water|4||1600|1600|When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. During your Standby Phase, gain Life Points equal to this
monsters level x100.|[/color]







[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Flarzaqus|0|SET0|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1800|0 When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. During your Standby Phase, deal damage to your opponent
equal to this monsters level x100.|[/color]







[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Bresalve|0|SET0|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|4||1900|0|
When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. This card can attack your opponent directly. If it does,
half the battle damage.|[/color]







[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Nighatim|0|SET0|Fiend/Effect|Dark|4||1700|0|When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck.. Once per turn if this card has destroyed a monster, this
card can destroy a card on the field.|[/color]







[color="#0000ff"]|Storm - Shinseus|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|4||0|2000 When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. Once per turn, this card can negate the activation off a
card which destroys a monster on the field.|[/color]

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[/quote]

[quote name='.Kowalski' timestamp='1303476303' post='5158942']
Help guys
[/quote]


-3 Lightning pact
-1 Lifesaving Escape

+2 Neko Dance
+2 Radiance

?
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I'm okay with reopening the submissions for SET0, but I'll wait to submit until SET1 or SET2 is up for that. I'll include cards that I've already made but haven't been released in this set. Also, it seems we have only few Synchro monsters...11 at that and hardly and Beast, Dinosaur, Fish, Insect, Psychic, Rock, and Reptile-Type monsters. I'll consider making generic or theme based cards with some of these types in mind.

Also, I'm ready to duel if anyone wants.
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[color="#000000"][color="#0000ff"]What do you mean, returns? And how does having a blue colour stop you from submitting cards?[/color]

[/color][color="#000000"][spoiler='Non-blue cards'][/color][color="#000000"]|Storm - Aquosis|0|SET0|Aqua/Effect|Water|4||1600|1600|When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. During your Standby Phase, gain Life Points equal to this
monsters level x100.|

|Storm - Flarzaqus|0|SET0|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1800|0 When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. During your Standby Phase, deal damage to your opponent
equal to this monsters level x100.|

|Storm - Bresalve|0|SET0|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|4||1900|0|
When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. This card can attack your opponent directly. If it does,
half the battle damage.|

|Storm - Nighatim|0|SET0|Fiend/Effect|Dark|4||1700|0|When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck.. Once per turn if this card has destroyed a monster, this
card can destroy a card on the field.|

|Storm - Shinseus|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|4||0|2000 When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. Once per turn, this card can negate the activation off a
card which destroys a monster on the field.|[/spoiler]
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[quote name='Tempest of Reach' timestamp='1303477144' post='5158969']
[color="#000000"][color="#0000ff"]What do you mean, returns? And how does having a blue colour stop you from submitting cards?[/color]

[/color][color="#000000"][spoiler='Non-blue cards'][/color][color="#000000"]|Storm - Aquosis|0|SET0|Aqua/Effect|Water|4||1600|1600|When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. During your Standby Phase, gain Life Points equal to this
monsters level x100.|

|Storm - Flarzaqus|0|SET0|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1800|0 When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. During your Standby Phase, deal damage to your opponent
equal to this monsters level x100.|

|Storm - Bresalve|0|SET0|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|4||1900|0|
When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. This card can attack your opponent directly. If it does,
half the battle damage.|

|Storm - Nighatim|0|SET0|Fiend/Effect|Dark|4||1700|0|When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck.. Once per turn if this card has destroyed a monster, this
card can destroy a card on the field.|

|Storm - Shinseus|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|4||0|2000 When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. Once per turn, this card can negate the activation off a
card which destroys a monster on the field.|[/spoiler]
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He means linebreaks.
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[quote name='Tempest of Reach' timestamp='1303477437' post='5158980']
[color="#0000ff"]Well, I'm not line breaking. Its just that for some reason when I put things into the spolier, its decides to break it all up...
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The linebreaks between each card.
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[color="#0000ff"]Gaaaa! Why is it so damn hard to just submit a card![/color]

[spoiler='My cards']
|Storm - Aquosis|0|SET0|Aqua/Effect|Water|4||1600|1600|When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. During your Standby Phase, gain Life Points equal to this
monsters level x100.|
|Storm - Flarzaqus|0|SET0|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1800|0 When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. During your Standby Phase, deal damage to your opponent
equal to this monsters level x100.|
|Storm - Bresalve|0|SET0|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|4||1900|0|
When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. This card can attack your opponent directly. If it does,
half the battle damage.|
|Storm - Nighatim|0|SET0|Fiend/Effect|Dark|4||1700|0|When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck.. Once per turn if this card has destroyed a monster, this
card can destroy a card on the field.|
|Storm - Shinseus|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|4||0|2000 When
this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm”
monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this
card to your deck. Once per turn, this card can negate the activation off a
card which destroys a monster on the field.| [/spoiler]

[color="#0000ff"]Is this okay now?[/color]
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[quote name='Tempest of Reach' timestamp='1303477845' post='5159003']
[color="#0000ff"]Gaaaa! Why is it so damn hard to just submit a card![/color]

[spoiler='My cards']
|Storm - Aquosis|0|SET0|Aqua/Effect|Water|4||1600|1600|When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this card to your deck. During your Standby Phase, gain Life Points equal to this monsters level x100.|
|Storm - Flarzaqus|0|SET0|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1800|0 When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this card to your deck. During your Standby Phase, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters level x100.|
|Storm - Bresalve|0|SET0|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|4||1900|0| When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this card to your deck. This card can attack your opponent directly. If it does, half the battle damage.|
|Storm - Nighatim|0|SET0|Fiend/Effect|Dark|4||1700|0|When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this card to your deck. Once per turn if this card has destroyed a monster, this card can destroy a card on the field.|
|Storm - Shinseus|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|4||0|2000 When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster with a different attribute from your Graveyard. If you do, return this card to your deck. Once per turn, this card can negate the activation off a card which destroys a monster on the field.| [/spoiler]

[color="#0000ff"]Is this okay now?[/color]
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Fixed the last bits for you.

Just to let you all know, I'll be making a contest as promised. If anyone wants to help me judge, please let me know (you can still judge if you're planning on joining). A rundown of what will happen:

- A small entry fee, none for members of OCCG.
- [b]Winner's card(s) shall be reserved places for submission in OCCG.[/b]

Can I do this? Just need the permission.
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[quote name='Cursed Reaction' timestamp='1303479951' post='5159012']
Fixed the last bits for you.

Just to let you all know, I'll be making a contest as promised. If anyone wants to help me judge, please let me know (you can still judge if you're planning on joining). A rundown of what will happen:

- A small entry fee, none for members of OCCG.
- [b]Winner's card(s) shall be reserved places for submission in OCCG.[/b]

Can I do this? Just need the permission.
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Sure, why not^^
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