Yu-gi-oh 5D's: In love with the moon PG-13

[Ignis avis]

This story is set four after the series. Luna and leo are now 16, Yusei is 23, Aki is 21. I'm not up to date on everything in the anime so this will be based on what I HAVE seen. Such as Leo being a signer, and such.


[spoiler=Chapter one][b]Luna's POV[/b]
"Class this is our new student Braeden Yuki. He's recently moved here from the satellite." Ms. Suzuki said introducing the new student. He had brown hair that was slightly spiky, but still not out of control. His blue eyes seemed caring, yet distant. Instead of the traditional blue boys uniform, he wore a red one with slightly different design. I decided to ask about it so I raised my hand.

"Yes Luna?" the teacher asked kindly.

"Why are you wearing a red uniform? Aren't red uniforms for girls?" I asked feeling kinda intrusive. Before the teacher could reply Braeden spoke out for the first time.

"Yes, and no. This is a slifer red uniform from another duel academy. It belonged to my grandfather Jaden Yuki." he explained.

There were a few gasps, and you could hear people ask questions like "The Jaden Yuki? The one with the Elemental Hero's?"

"Yes, and here's the proof" He said laughing. Pulling Elemental Hero Neos from his pocket everyone awed over the card.

My twin brother Leo asked "Do you use his deck?" from across the room.

"No I prefer a deck more similar to the one the new king Yusei Fudo uses, but I still do use the E-Heros" He said.

"Now class that is enough with the questions." MS. Suzuki said, "Braeden take the seat next to Luna. The girl with the greenish hair."

[b]Braeden's POV[/b]

She's kinda cute I thought sitting down next to the girl Luna. "Hey" I said. Luna looked over and gave me a quick smile.

"Today will be a quiz on the archetype we've been studying the last few days the Elemental Hero's. Quite a surprise we'd have the grandson to the very duelist who made them famous joining our class on the day of the test." Ms. Suzuki said handing out the the tests.

"You may start now" She said.

'What two Elemental heroes fuse to become Flame Wingman, and what is the other fusion that they can form' I read, before I knew it my hand started to fly. 'Burstinitrix, and Avian. They can also form Phoenix Enforcer. Wingman was typically used by Jayden, while Enforcer was used by Aster Phoenix. Evil Hero Inferno Wing is also summoned by fusing those 2 cards.'

'1 down, 19 to go' I thought to myself.

[b]Luna's POV[/b]

"Here miss." I said handing my test in.

"Here is mine too" I heard Braeden say walking up to the desk. He stepped beside me, and placed his test on top of mine.

"You two can leave now." Ms. Suzuki said, and only a second later Braeden was out the door.

"Wait" I yelled chasing after him. even though he was only walking he seemed to go at a pace that was impossible. When we got outside he stopped, and spun around.

Putting his hands in his pockets he asked "What?." With a smile he looked at me, and waited for an answer.

"Would you come over to my house later? You mentioned Yusei Fudo earlier, if you want I can introduce you to him." I said started to blush.

"Sure." He said climbing onto a red Duel Runner with streaks of black, and white. After a few minutes of just staying there he started it and asked "You coming?"

"Oh, okay" I said nervously getting on behind him. I'd only been on a duel runner a few times before, and it always scared me.

[b]Braeden's POV[/b]

"So where do you live" I asked as we reached the end of the road in front of the school. She explained it step by step, and before I knew it we were there.

"This is where you live?" I said amazed. She nodded her head and headed into the mansion. The place was huge, and had a circle drive up to the door. On the side of the house you could see an old fashioned duel arena.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Chapter Two]
[b]Braeden's POV[/b]

"So why did you invite me over for real?" I asked following her inside. The house was huge, yet simple. On a shelf near the TV sat a picture of what looked like a younger Luna, and a boy that looked like her with Yusei Fudo wrapping his arms around them.

"I know everybody else in the class, and have for years. You are different. A mystery, and I don't really like that." She answered sitting down on a couch.

"Sounds like something I'd expect from the number 2 Psychic duelist. Behind the infamous Black Rose of course." I said with a smile sitting down across from her.

"Aki doesn't like that name" She said with a little fire behind it. why would a girl like her be mad over a little joke over Aki Izinski?

"Wait, She's a friend of yours isn't she" I said remembering a picture of Aki, Yusei, Crow, Jack, and 2 young children with greenish hair on the front of a magazine a couple of years ago advertising Team 5D's win during the Grand Prix.

"Yeah" She replied calming down.

[b]Luna's POV[/b]

"So? What is life in the Satallite like now?" I asked curiously leaning foward.

"Nothing big" He replied looking into my eyes. His eyes seemed to be looking deep within me. Shaking loose of his gaze I noticed someone walking in out of the corner of my eye.

"Where did you dissapear to?" the voice said. "I was looking all over for you after school"

"I took a ride from Braeden" I told Leo motioning to Braeden across from me. Leo took off his blue jacket, and threw it on the coat hooks.

"Braeden huh" he said with a tone that could only mean one thing.

[b]Braeden's POV[/b]

"I challenge you to a duel" Luna's Brother Leo said pointing towards me.

"Come on Leo he just moved." She said pleading with him.

"So?" he replied "A duelist is always ready to duel."

"It's okay with me." I said standing up. Leo grabbed his duel disk, and headed outside. Runing out front I grabbed my Duel Disk, and headed out back where Leo was preparing for the duel.

"Let's Duel" We said in unison both drawing five Cards.[/spoiler]

[Squidward Tentacles]

hmm... not bad... but 1, you're forgetting the punctuation marks after the and of character dialogue... and 2... they're a little short.