Night Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 [center] [IMG]http://i882.photobucket.com/albums/ac28/Amirzmom/z98.png[/IMG] Cnc of course. Keep in mind when creating this piece, I had no intentions of implementing any rules or regulations of the usual "Tag". Hence the choice of dimensions.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 I feel you effect spammed when you added the stars/dissolved layer. Colors seem washed out. The only bit of color on the right bother's me, but its a personal feeling. Lighting feels a bit forced to me, but the end result is good. I love the depth, it feels like he's coming at me. 'Ya know? All in all, its a good piece of work.<3 Can i see the stock you used for the "ripple"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted March 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 [quote name='So Legit You Quit' timestamp='1300934804' post='5092815'] I feel you effect spammed when you added the stars/dissolved layer. Colors seem washed out. The only bit of color on the right bother's me, but its a personal feeling. Lighting feels a bit forced to me, but the end result is good. I love the depth, it feels like he's coming at me. 'Ya know? All in all, its a good piece of work.<3 Can i see the stock you used for the "ripple"? [/quote] As I said, I wasn't going for lighting or any of that. Merely expressing whatever it was my eyes felt was right and need, not my mind. This is why you can find MANY things wrong with the piece, I care not of if it is up to par of created standards, but instead if the viewer as well as myself can take something from it, and feel a certain way, as art should be expressed. Thanks though. It will take a while, but surely the showcase section will begin to understand this crucial factor of art in general. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 A good piece of art has to contain all of the fundamental elements of design... Saying you weren't going for them just shows that your piece isn't decent at all. My criticism is: The repeated effects in the background makes the audience feel... uninterested. The washed out effect takes away from the depth... a lot. It doesn't seem good with it. And the sparkles feels too random and over-placed. The colours doesn't seem to be interesting but rather dull. My comment: Work on the fundamental elements of graphic design and practice adding wow-factors to your designs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 [quote name='Hobbit.' timestamp='1300983330' post='5093494'] A good piece of art has to contain all of the fundamental elements of design... Saying you weren't going for them just shows that your piece isn't decent at all. [/quote] *scratch this; get on MSN soon* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 I wanna see it without the sparklies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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