Aesirson Posted March 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2011 It should be Atlantean Nation, not Atlantic Empire. Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted March 27, 2011 Report Share Posted March 27, 2011 K, I'll keep that in mind. In the meantime, Imma gettin started Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted March 31, 2011 Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 My guy is gonna be in trouble, and I gave my opinion on the duel. [b]Character's Name:[/b] Haseo [b]Character's Age:[/b] 18 [b]Character's Gender:[/b] Male [b]Character's Appearance:[/b][spoiler=Appearance] Haseo has dark gold eyes and spiky blue green hair like Jesse that has a long thin pony tail at the bottom, he wears an outfit similar to Jessie's when he was posses by Yubel only without the mechanical things on his hips. He uses a mechanical version of the Supreme King's Duel Disk though its Blue and green, he is a left duelist as well.[/spoiler] [b]Character's Origins:[/b] Haseo came to this world using his own method that has yet to be detected. [b]Character's Deck:[/b] Dark Anima, your S/T zones are mine [b]Character's Ace Card(s):[/b] Dark Anima Dragon [b]Character's Pre-RP History:[/b] he came to this world looking for a specific card which he has yet to find, he is also considering fighting the messiah and shaming her just for the fun of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted March 31, 2011 Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 [b]Character's Name:[/b] Deven Hafford [b]Character's Age:[/b] 25 [b]Character's Gender:[/b] Male [b]Character's Appearance:[/b][spoiler=Appearance][b]Height: 5'[/b] [b]Weight: 80 Pounds[/b] [b]Body Type: Skinny[/b] [b]Skin Color: Pale[/b] [b]Hair Style and Color: Style is low cut, military, color is black.[/b] [b]Eye Shape and Color: Eye shape is normal, but always focused, color is a deep blue.[/b] [b]Usual Clothing/Appearance: He wears a camo suit that is like a chameleon in that it can always blend into his surroundings. It can be activated by many ways, and when activated, it also brings up a hood and anything else that need covering. When not in use it is black.[/b] [b]Scars, Tattoos, Unusual Birthmarks etc.: [/b][/spoiler] [b]Character's Origins:[/b] He was born in Atlantis and grew up there, joined the military and rose through the ranks. [b]Character's Deck:[/b] Machine Emperor Skiel [b]Character's Ace Card(s):[/b] [i]Skiel[/i] (interpret that!) [b]Character's Pre-RP History:[/b] He rose through the ranks of the Skiel Division and finally was put in second in command. But he does all the nitty gritty stuff. Right now his prime mission is to destroy Desna, or make sure he won't interfere with the war. But he also has to do his ordinary tasks. Not many know about him, and they would like to keep it that way. But Deven has his on plans for Desna... I am going to have some time coming up, and I think joining one roleplay is good. No time before. Time now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignis avis Posted March 31, 2011 Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 [b]Character's Name:[/b] Aeron Tech [b]Character's Age:[/b] 16 [b]Character's Gender:[/b] male [b]Character's Appearance:[/b][spoiler=Appearance][b]Height:[/b] [b]Weight:[/b] 115 [b]Body Type:[/b] skinny [b]Skin Color:[/b] pale caucasion [b]Hair Style and Color:[/b] Spiky, white hair [b]Eye Shape and Color:[/b] blue eyes [b]Usual Clothing/Appearance:[/b] Aeron wears a black shirt, and blue jeans along with a Red trenchcoat. He rides a red duel runner like bike designed for effecient travel. [b]Scars, Tattoos, Unusual Birthmarks etc.:[/b]He has a gear etched into his shoulder, that glows slightly when dueling[/spoiler] [b]Character's Origins:[/b] [b]Character's Deck:[/b] Meklord (mostly custom) / although he has a synchro deck for when travelling near Muan inhabited areas. [b]Character's Ace Card(s):[/b] Meklord Astro Lemniscate[custom] [b]Character's Pre-RP History:[/b]Aeron was born and raised by atlantean practices. His parents died the day he was born, so he was given to the closest blood relative. His uncle raised him as his own, until the age of 15 when he was given the Infinity Deck that his father had used as a duelist. He then was told that the birthmark on his shoulder was his symbol of power. Only one with the Mark of the Gear could use the Meklord Astro Lemniscate card. He then set out travelling the known world to discover as much as he could about the multiverse by his own rights, instead of what he learned from others. [spoiler=Meklord Astro Lemniscate][img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/830/230256.jpg[/img][spoiler=Lore]This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 Machine-Type Monsters you control. Once per turn you can Remove from Play 1 Card on your side of the field to destroy 1 Face-up card on your opponents side of the field. While this card is Face-up on the field neither player can Synchro Summon.[/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 I didn't want to do a my guy thinks then says okay then we walk over to the spot and then i tell you what he thinks it seems like this would be a lot faster. Also I don't think the Messiah came from another world I feel like it's a fake and thats why they don't want the real thing spoiling the party. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Trimage, could you please use proper grammar and punctuation? I have no idea what your character is saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 [b]Character's Name: Alex Elemental[/b] [b]Character's Age: 18 [/b] [b]Character's Gender: Male[/b] [b]Character's Appearance:[/b][spoiler=Appearance][b]Height: 6' 6[/b] [b]Weight: 115[/b] [b]Body Type: Skinny but fit. [/b] [b]Skin Color: White with a slight tan to it.[/b] [b]Hair Style and Color: Curly and very messy, brown hair which often falls into his eyes.[/b] [b]Eye Shape and Color: Piercing eyes. Eye colour changes to the colour of the ED he summons or communicates with.[/b] [b]Usual Clothing/Appearance: Alex often wears blue jeans, a sleeveless shirt and a pendant with 7 crystals. He is friendly but has a serious face.[/b] [b]Scars, Tattoos, Unusual Birthmarks etc.: Mark of the Elemental Dragons. Glows when an Elemental Dragon is summoned and changes colour depending on which is summoned.[/b][/spoiler] [b]Character's Origins: Muan. Loyal to his gods who blessed him with the Elemental Dragons and the ability to see spirits.However, Alex was never religious like the other Muan people. He travelled from his own dimension to others and found there is much more than three all powerful cards. He serves his Gods and also a strange, unknown source. He also searches the Multiverse. His mother was Muan, but his father was from another dimension. A dimension parallel to ours. He was atlantean. It is possible this was the same dimension of Kalern. [/b] [b]Character's Deck: elemental dragons (synchro, fusion, ritual etc.)[/b] [b]Character's Ace Card(s): Origin/Secondary/ Supreme/ Fused Elemental Dragons.[/b] [b]Character's Pre-RP History: At a young age his parents were killed by atlanteans. He found the Elemental Dragon cards and was marked as the guardian and user of them. It shows that he is the guardian of them and that he is the one they chose to be their user, to find justice for his empire. The Elemental Dragons are similar to the Signer Dragons but represent an Element (Water, fire, wind, earth, light, dark etc). As soon as Alex touched the Elemental Cards, there was a blinding flash, and a burning sensation in his arm. The mark is black and burnt into his right arm. It looks like a dragon with a sun on one side and a moon on the other. It allows him to communicate with his Dragons. He finally learnt to communicate to them and briefly to the Egyptian Gods who told him he must fight the atlanteans and save his nationality. He sets out to abide his gods wishes and to folow his destiny, which he believes will bring him face to face with the person who killed his parents.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 ...What? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yorukin Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Yeah... This forum does seem to have some poor spots of grammar. If you need to, use MS Word for spellcheck. Also, @Dragon your app is incomplete. Needs more description on body type and clothes, and what does 7 stone mean for weight? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Edited. Stones is a unit of weight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Everyone accepted, except ED. Sorry dude, but there were too many faults in your app for it to be accepted. For example, your grammar is a bit off, letters are missing and stuff. And you can't have two Signer Dragons, and if these eds, as you so beautifully call them (/sarcasm) are also legendary, then having them + two Signer Dragons would insta-Mary Sue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 If i improved grammer and stuff will i be accepted?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 [spoiler=Ba'al being an @$$]"Welcome to the limbo, young man! I see here on these papers that you died by being shot in the head! Is that true?" "Yes sir." "Well, honestly, do you think that you're going to heaven or hell?" "Can I get another chance?" "What?" "If I improve my speed I may be able to shoot him first." "..."[/spoiler] No. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 I'v edited it again. If this is not accepted could you tell me why, in more detail, it isnt accepted please. Many thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Okay. I know I said no, but if you can really improve on these points I'll accept you. 1. Stop naming the Elemental Dragons as eds. Pretend that you're writing a book when writing your bio. Would you enjoy reading Harry Potter if the main characters' names were shortened to hp, rw and hg? 2. Explain a bit more about how he got his mark, and who were the gods that spoke to him? You would have to specify since there are quite a lot of Gods in the Muan Empire (Crimson Dragon, Muan Gods, Sacred Beasts, Aesir etc) 3. Get rid of the "stones" in your app. It's ridiculous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Right okay then. Thanks.Edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Looks okay now. I'll accept you for now, just don't go berzerk with the Dragons. God I'm soft >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Thanks. The dragons are not all powerful. You can only summon them one step at a time. Young-elemental-secondary-fused-supreme-origin. I'll look at ic post now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted April 2, 2011 Report Share Posted April 2, 2011 Well Raven is in trouble and I'm like 90% sure that he was right about the duel and 50% sure that that chick is from this reality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 2, 2011 Report Share Posted April 2, 2011 Then Alex Elemental challenges Di Tra or the knight to save Raven...... I'm just wondering who Alex will duel? A 2-2 might be interesting. Raven and Alex vs Di Tra and the knight? Just a thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted April 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2011 ED, you just short-posted. Fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted April 2, 2011 Report Share Posted April 2, 2011 ^Actually he just did it twice BTW, you need an absolute minimum of FOUR lines per post, not three. This goes for everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 2, 2011 Report Share Posted April 2, 2011 Okay. Sorry. I will try to get used to this section of YCM. Anyway, a tag duel has commenced but who is the knights ally in the duel? This should be rather interesting..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted April 2, 2011 Report Share Posted April 2, 2011 Well, he did tell your guy to choose his ally, so yeah... your choice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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