Kocrow17 Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Here's the opening for the fanfic I'm writing (See Sig for link to Fanfic). [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wox-8dUgd84]A TURN IN DESTINY - OPENING[/url] SONG: Goemon Shin Sedai Shuumei - Intro Anime and Games Used (20 Total): AirGear Bleach Chobits Death Note Dragon Ball Z Final Fantasy Unlimited FullMetal Alchemist Gundam Wing Gunslinger Girl Hikaru no Go Ichigo 100% Kingdom Hearts 2 King of Bandits Jing Naruto Rurouni Kenshin Slayers Tenjou Tenge Yu-Gi-Oh! Yu-Gi-Oh! Capsule Monsters Yu Yu Hakusho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 First comment and i saw it first anyway on MSN I love it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Looks great :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Ka Ka...Kaze I'm speechless that was Amazing! Rep'd "Tommorow" lol.. I Especially loved the Ending lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted February 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 First comment and i saw it first anyway on MSN I love it ^_^Yes' date=' first comment... again. Do you wait for me to post these things? lol Looks great Thanks^^. Ka Ka...Kaze I'm speechless that was Amazing! Rep'd "Tommorow" lol.. I Especially loved the Ending lol Thanks, I'm glad it left you speechless. I like to think my fanfic is just a good^^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 Damn. That was a freaking awesome AMV. The syncing was perfect, and the feel it gave out was purely fantastic. My only complaint - Clovis only appeared in the beginning and the end >_>. And you could have used a little more action instead of constant character portraying, although how the hell you could do that I cannot guess. I assume you could have used a part where one of the characters sort of points forward in some manner, and then used a monster-appearance scene from Yugioh, but you are also using original cards so... >_>. I know how hard it would be to make something like that, so I'm perfectly satisfied. Because I've turned into a grade maniac: -Sync: 9/10 (Nigh-perfect, only very few spots could have been done better)-Theme: 9.5/10 (It was excellent - the way every character was portrayed and shown, pure ownage)-Music: 8.5/10 (Let's just say I'm not really a fan of that song. Not that it was bad or anything, just... not personal preference)-Clip Choice: 9.5/10 (Excellent. Couldn't have been done better. Although, I half-expected to see CS Sasuke pop up =/)-Anime Choice: 9.5/10 (My top-2 is in there - DN, Bleach - and also other anime that I like, ie Naruto etc. Pretty damn good collection, IMO)-Overall Feel: 9.2/10 (Dayum, pretty awesome job) Now, two questions: Where the hell, in all of this, was DBZ? o_O. I didn't even notice one clip from that. (unless it's that unidentified blast scene) Alexander is Raito, yes? (I didn't really recognize that scene that had Alexander's name, but I think it's him). If so, mega-win. Anyway, that was some awesome stuff. If you plan on making any more of these, I have some awesome song suggestions for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted February 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 Damn. That was a freaking awesome AMV. The syncing was perfect' date=' and the feel it gave out was purely fantastic. My only complaint - Clovis only appeared in the beginning and the end >_>. And you could have used a little more action instead of constant character portraying, although how the hell you could do that I cannot guess. I assume you could have used a part where one of the characters sort of points forward in some manner, and then used a monster-appearance scene from Yugioh, but you are also using original cards so... >_>. I know how hard it would be to make something like that, so I'm perfectly satisfied. Because I've turned into a grade maniac: -Sync: 9/10 (Nigh-perfect, only very few spots could have been done better)-Theme: 9.5/10 (It was excellent - the way every character was portrayed and shown, pure ownage)-Music: 8.5/10 (Let's just say I'm not really a fan of that song. Not that it was bad or anything, just... not personal preference)-Clip Choice: 9.5/10 (Excellent. Couldn't have been done better. Although, I half-expected to see CS Sasuke pop up =/)-Anime Choice: 9.5/10 (My top-2 is in there - DN, Bleach - and also other anime that I like, ie Naruto etc. Pretty damn good collection, IMO)-Overall Feel: 9.2/10 (Dayum, pretty awesome job) Now, two questions: Where the hell, in all of this, was DBZ? o_O. I didn't even notice one clip from that. (unless it's that unidentified blast scene) Alexander is Raito, yes? (I didn't really recognize that scene that had Alexander's name, but I think it's him). If so, mega-win. Anyway, that was some awesome stuff. If you plan on making any more of these, I have some awesome song suggestions for you.[/quote']Glad you liked it. To think this vid has gotten a better grade then any of my chapters, lol. If I do make another, thought it's unlikely I will, I'll make sure to add some of the character actions scenes. Shame you don't like the song. Light is Alexander, I decided at the last second, so I'll have to edit the chapter he shows up, as I say he is an older adult. As for the DBZ, it's hard to tell, but during one of the last "fast pace" scenes where all the images flash, the pink one is Vegeta in oneof those capsule corp. machines. Thanks for the review! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 Glad you liked it. To think this vid has gotten a better grade then any of my chapters' date=' lol. If I do make another, thought it's unlikely I will, I'll make sure to add some of the character actions scenes. Shame you don't like the song. Light is Alexander, I decided at the last second, so I'll have to edit the chapter he shows up, as I say he is an older adult. As for the DBZ, it's hard to tell, but during one of the last "fast pace" scenes where all the images flash, the pink one is Vegeta in oneof those capsule corp. machines. Thanks for the review![/quote'] That's because there are a lot of things that you could improve in your chapters, but this AMV is almost perfect. And of course, they are judged by different standards, because one is a fanfic and the other is a video >_>. Oh, damn. That Vegeta scene must take some attention to notice. I'll re-watch and try to find it. Well, I can already smell the scent of winfulness in Alexander, since his ''avatar'' is such an awesome character. But you didn't ask me who my favorite character was, so that you could make a character out of him in your fanfic thereby raising its awesomeness by multiple levels ;<_<. Nah, just joking, I don't think he'd exactly fit anyway. Well, once every 5-6 reccuring characters are introduced, you could make a small video of them, or wait till you get to a further point in the story and make another major AMV. Outta curiosity, how much time did you take for that? EDIT: Actually making the video, not finding / downloading the episodes and all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Ingo Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 way cool :P I like it :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diasukeuzumaki Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 sweet! OMG sasuke lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted February 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 Ixigo, not sure how long it took me. Most of yesterday and today. Diasuke, thanks for the youtube post, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 WOAH! It ROX!!! IT RULES! IT IS COMPLETELY AWESOME! *passes out*'... *wakes up in the hospital*IT IS AWESOME! I WANNA SEE THE MAKER OF THAT!*and faints again* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen Moon Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 uh um uh um uh um.................................................................................................................................................................................uh. i dont know what to say infinite/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 Looks great Looking good kaze not you the fanfic opening details LOL:lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 Really nice... ^_^ But I don't really like some of the animes.PS. This still gets owned by your Fan-Fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 Very nicely done :] It is quite nice, and it's nice to see all the characters in action! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Thanks for the posts everyone! I added chapter 9 if anyone wants to check it out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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