RPG King Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 [size="1"]Dis is whut i do in mah free time.[/size] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/2mceidi.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/wu10le.png[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ω Link Ω Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 Umm well it has a good basic format.I think you should take of the glasses and make his mouth smaller. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted March 19, 2011 Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 You should try practicing grammar more often during your free time. Please. A few things: -His hands do not seem to attatch to the arms correctly. The arms should connect more towards the middle of the hand. -I'm not sure what exactly is happening with his right eye, but it needs to be redone. The glasses seem to just disappear on that side. -As stated above, his lips are far too...bloated. Try cutting them down to size. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted March 19, 2011 Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 Well, if realism is your aim, then try again. And again. However, this struck me as a cartoonish attempt. Personally, I love cartoons. OLD cartoons, and not the new crap on CN. Anyways, good try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted March 19, 2011 Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 [quote name='Fuzzie' timestamp='1300501336' post='5082092'] You should try practicing [b]grammer[/b] more often during your free time. Please. A few things: -His hands do not seem to attatch to the arms correctly. The arms should connect more towards the [b]moddle[/b] of the hand. -I'm not sure what exactly is happening with his right eye, but it needs to be redone. The glasses seem to just [b]dissapear[/b] on that side. -[b]As stated above, his lips are far too...bloated. Try cutting them down to size.[/b] [/quote] You should try practicing grammar as well as spelling during your free time. And you stated something, yet I don't see where. Why? This is because it was never stated. You can work on that too. And since we are adding to the list, your cnc could be better. Work on this. Please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted March 19, 2011 Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 God people, the sprite is awesome. It's just a new style, and I think it's f*cking awesome. Good work dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted March 21, 2011 Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 [quote name='NightWalker' timestamp='1300507682' post='5082308'] You should try practicing grammar as well as spelling during your free time. And you stated something, yet I don't see where. Why? This is because it was never stated. You can work on that too. And since we are adding to the list, your cnc could be better. Work on this. Please. [/quote] Thank you for helping me with my typos! [quote name='Smeargle' timestamp='1300533792' post='5082617'] God people, the sprite is awesome. It's just a new style, and I think it's f*cking awesome. Good work dude. [/quote] While it may be a new style, I was just attempting to help by giving tips on what could be done to make it appear more anatomically correct, and more clearly define the subject. That's all. I never said it wasn't good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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