Jolta Posted March 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 All accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted March 15, 2011 Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 Okay, I probably should have mentioned this earlier, but I didn't see it becoming a problem. Ryujin, your character seems a bit overpowered. On the verge of actually making it almost impossible to not God Mod in a fight. Maybe you're more skillful with the use of him than I'm willing to accept, but it does worry me that "Gravity Manipulation" and "Electric Powers (Can manipulate and control at will)" are included amongst your powers, when either one of them alone would lead to a very powerful character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted March 15, 2011 Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 Welcome back to YCM Ketodama. And I agree, not to mention the Copying power. Which basically means he sees someone's power, and then counters it, then wins automatically. Incredibly Oped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ∞Ryujin∞ Posted March 15, 2011 Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 Ok I'll change them and make him less opI adjusted first and second and got rid of 4th Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cozmosus Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 [spoiler=Appearance] Name: John SmithGender: MaleFaction: Enigma CityHuman or Creature: HumanSpecies: (If creature)Powers (Max. 4):Order Magnification-This power has amazing potential if used correctly. The user can drastically reduce the amount of randomness of objects by touch--block towers reassemble, scattered cards come together in the correct order, crumbled walls become pristine. This also works with mixtures and solutions, can serve to prism white light, and spread out heat over a wide area. This ability is not permanent--objects can be degraded--and it is dependent on will.The good: Reassemble shuffled decks or puzzlesWorks on many things--crumbled walls, chemical solutions, light, etc.Incredible potentialThe bad: Cannot increase randomnessEffects are not permanentNot very effective without much practiceIllusion Manipulation-The term illusion refers to a specific form of sensory distortion. Unlike a hallucination, which is a distortion in the absence of a stimulus, an illusion describes a misinterpretation of a true sensation. The good: Make people believe what you want them to believeCan affect any of the senses; ie. Sight, sound, touch, taste, or smellThe bad: You can only do this while you're within seeing distance of the personBio: When John was growing up, he had a growth in his brain. It did no harm, but his parents wanted to get rid of it. He was put on a daily shot of a substance emitted from the Devils Claw plant. The doctors said it would work and get rid of the growth when he was 15. It didn't work. He was told about the growth, and was put off of the shots. Later, after he moved out, he was playing cards one day. He began shuffling the deck. When he finished, he began to count his cards out of boredom. He noticed that they were all in the correct order. He shuffled them again. Same thing. He brought out a puzzle. He mixed up all the parts. He began sorting them and putting the puzzle together. Suddenly, they began to put themselves together. He came to a conclusion that he could put things in 'order'. Later he began doing card tricks for friends. They were all amazed at the tricks, not knowing how he did it. He got into magic, and even learned some new tricks. He even figured out the rabbit in the hat trick. He decided to test the trick with his friends. He was about to pull the rabbit out. all was going smoothly. There was one problem though. He forgot the rabbit. Not knowing this, he pulled on the bottom of the hat. His friends were amazed at the rabbit, even though he noticed that he had pulled on the hat. He began a test. He pretended to pull out other things. They believed it. He found that he could create illusions. He figured that his powers had come from the growth in his brain, and that the injections from when he was a kid were suppressing his powers. He practiced his new powers ever since. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 Don't see any problems with Ed's app. Seems everything is appropriately balanced and what not. Also, I AM waiting for the C.R.I.M.S.O.N. leader to give Astrum his target. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted March 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 Ed accepted. Just a while... I'll be postin'... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 Jolta: i'm going to edit my application as we all find out more and more about Xai, revealing the Unknown portions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 I tend to leave my application the way it is. You'll know more about Nash and his connection with C.R.I.M.S.O.N. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ∞Ryujin∞ Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 I decided on my 4th ability because of my last post in the IC thread. As the RP progresses I am going to slightly improve my characters abilities. Tell me if my powers start getting op. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysterium Tremendum Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 Later on I will probably edit my app when Alden becomes a Shade Master if I can find an ideal point to have Alden be absent. It won't make him super-powerful, but I envision Alden being a little bit stronger and having more than just Darkness Manipulation and Replace Greater Shade Status. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 MS, Ordinary steel can't stand up to something that can stand something that can slice Diamond like a hot knife through butter... BTW: I'm going to reveal Xai's Species soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 Did I say it's ordinary steel? 1) It's a Muramasa, which are a style of Blade forged by Infamous 16th Century Swordsmith Sengo Muramasa, and are reknown for being 'Demon Blades'. There are named so because of the Legends of the Violence in Sengo Muramasa's heart going into the blade, and giving them Demonic Powers. They are supposed to be able to cut nearly anything. 2) Added with that the Fact he have space time Powers, equals Blade that can cut alot of things, probably including your guys skin. Maybe not, but he believes it. That is all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 As per typical, i have to Hinder someone's Plans for my own teehee Yes, if Xai is touching someone when she gets Erased from Existence, They get Erased as well EDIT: Species Revealed, this would be a possible reason why Xai was being extremely agressive towards Akira Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted March 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 Gawd, a lot has happened, I really have to post more often... Well, good thing Xav has her way of going back... Super Saiyan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 lolno, The wipe is temporary for both her and whoever she takes with her, however, Location Placement is actually random... however, whoever Xai takes with her out of existence is also transported to the exact same area Xai gets sent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 And then, as normal, I ruin your character's plans by interfering repeatedly. And with his advanced knowledge of the Space/Time Continuum and the many Dimensions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 ORLY!? BTW: I decided to read your rant, and i lol'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 What rant? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Exodia Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 Not gonna reply until i'm attacked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 -Points at the rant in MS's Sig- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysterium Tremendum Posted March 19, 2011 Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 @ Christian ExodiaAlright then, I'll attack you (lol). Alden needs something to do besides causing chaos using Darkness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted March 19, 2011 Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 Oh, that rant. I prefere the one on my homepage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted March 22, 2011 Report Share Posted March 22, 2011 you may as well take that chance to get to Know Xai... MS, This may be the only chance you may have to do so XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted January 6, 2013 Report Share Posted January 6, 2013 My apologies for not posting. A lot of events had happened much recently. Is my character still good to go? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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