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Username: Caiba
Character name: Daren "Cypher"
Gender: Male
Occupation: Student
Rank: B
Grade: 75%
Age: 13
Appearance: 
Eye:Blue
Hair:Brown
Physical Description: He has an average, not too fit but not too chubby body. (Out of school) He wears a pink T-Shirt with "Hello, My Name Is: None Of Your Business" on it. He wears loose blue jeans. (In School) He wears a uniform Black Rose Red top, and the school shoes and pants.
Mark: Arm sword and shield glove
Personality: He's a cheery person who makes friends easily, he's mostly relaxed.
Bio: Daren comes from the Yuki family, but he keeps it a secret. He was taught to be nice and kind and it would serve him well. When he took up dueling his father gave him an Elemental Hero deck, he declined and created his own. Before he came to he came to duel academy his father gave him a set of 10 card, most of wich were fusion monsters. He asked his dad why, his dad said"I've never been able to use them, but I have a feeling you will." When he came to the Duel Academy he was matched up with the Ancient Fairy Blue instructor. He quickly turned the tables used hee own monsters against her. Later he talked with her and struck up a frienship.
Deck: Nature Hero deck he constantly refines, he includes some masked and vision heroes.
Deck Name: Heroes Grace
Ace card: [Spoiler=Current][img]http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/a/ab/ElementalHeroTerraFirmaPP02-EN-ScR-UE.png[/img][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Later]Soul Force Champion[/spoiler]
Friend: Seren Suki, Yoh Takeshi.
Enemy:(Later) Seren Suki
Extra: If Yusei Is God then is Akiza Sif or Hera?

Username:Caiba
Character name: Seren Suki
Gender: Female
Occupation: Instructor/Shadow Bandit
Rank:D
Age: 22
Appearance: 
Eye:Brown
Hair:Blue
Physical Description: She wears the Ancient Fairy Top, and a blue dress.
Mark: None
Personality: She is fierce and passionite, and will try and get as mamy of her students up a rank.
Bio:She origanilly only beat the instructor with 100 life left, she got a 50. She worked hard on her deck, and by her second year she was at 72%. She worked her way up, and when she gradguated she was given a job. She was staying back late one day when she heard that there were people trying to steal the signer dragons. She ran to tell the principal, when a shadow bandit caught her and told her how powerful her deck could be if she ressurected ce. He told her she could have power beyond her wieldest dreams, if she ressurected Cerrunnos. She created a card entirely of pain. She was given he "Dragonshade - Gadrehan Of Jasper". She rarely uses it, but when she does it's horrific.
Deck: She uses a cure/anti-cure deck.
Deck Name: Nightmare's of Simochi
Ace card: [spoiler=Sefren Godess of Pain][img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/3046/128748.jpg[/img][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing a face-up "Bad Reaction To Simochi" you control during a turn your opponent has taken effect damage. This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the amount of effect damage your opponent has taken during the this card was Summoned. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the effect of increasing your opponent's Life Points is negated and changed to inflict the same amount of points in Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/spoiler][/spoiler]
Friend: Daren "Cypher"
Enemy:(Later)Daren "Cypher"
Extra: At first she doesn't know about Daren's mark
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hmm you need to fix the Apps as in the bio from the both to expand bit more and add a bit more description too, in the second bio, it seem that you didn't understand the plot clearly, you are not to be using the signer dragons as shadow bandit but a Dragonshade monster and there only 2 left which are Earth and Water. in the first bio, the battle must remain in depleting your opponent's LP to 0, it's against the protocol for teacher to surrender which would be costly consequences for them, they also evaluated how much beating they takes in how many turn as well. so Surrender is never an option for the teachers otherwise the higher-up will find it suspicious as well. just be his rare elemental hero Terra firma was revealed that doesn't give a teacher reason to held back, they will still test you of your own potential regardless.
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Username:dragondestroyer
Character name: aaron
Gender: male
Occupation:student
Rank: stardust white
Grade:95%
Age: 13
Appearance:
Eye: brown, sometimes sharpen and become something not unlike a black hole
Hair: a blondish reddish color
Physical Description: he looks like aster pheonix, but with a different head. he normally wears a tux, but hes ok with his uniform.
Mark:
Personality: he can be very serious, but at times can be quite a fun guy.
Bio: aaron lived the rich life. that is, until a meteorite hit his giant penthouse, destroying everything. luckily, he was not home at the time. he searched the rubble for his deck, but instead found the meteorite. with a hiss and some steam, the meteorite cracked open. inside was his deck, plus some new cards.
Deck: this deck relies on your opponent destroying your cards, allowing you to special summon a forgotten dragon.
Deck Name: forgotten dragon deck
Ace card: Forgotten dragon of chaos - yokoshima
Friend: ?????
Enemy: anyone who is a rich overconfident slob. or shadow riders.
Extra: duel runner is like a dragon, only with wings tucked in as if in a dive. (they can open too) the dragons mouth breaths fire. he doesn't use it very much.
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[quote name='dragondestroyer' timestamp='1300895316' post='5091517']
Username:dragondestroyerCharacter name: aaronGender: maleOccupation:studentRank: stardust whiteGrade:95%Age: 13Appearance: Eye: brown, sometimes sharpen and become something not unlike a black holeHair: a blondish reddish colorPhysical Description: he looks like aster pheonix, but with a different head. he normally wears a tux, but hes ok with his uniform.Mark: Personality: he can be very serious, but at times can be quite a fun guy.Bio: aaron lived the rich life. that is, until a meteorite hit his giant penthouse, destroying everything. luckily, he was not home at the time. he searched the rubble for his deck, but instead found the meteorite. with a hiss and some steam, the meteorite cracked open. inside was his deck, plus some new cards.Deck: this deck relies on your opponent destroying your cards, allowing you to special summon a forgotten dragon.Deck Name: forgotten dragon deckAce card: Forgotten dragon of chaos - yokoshimaFriend: ?????Enemy: anyone who is a rich overconfident slob. or shadow riders.Extra: duel runner is like a dragon, only with wings tucked in as if in a dive. (they can open too) the dragons mouth breaths fire. he doesn't use it very much.
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[quote name='BrokenHeart15' timestamp='1300896512' post='5091543']
I'm going to save Y&A some time and say that you won't be accepted bub. That app is terrible.
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lol beat me to the punch, but what he said is correct you need more in bio, the shadow rider are shadow BANDIT, they don't really ride a duel runner nonetheless. may i should add requested amount of lines in the bio and personality or the quality of personality =_=

[quote name='BrokenHeart15' timestamp='1300896512' post='5091544']
*The hell?*
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*gasp* language please lol JK

[quote name='super-star-silver' timestamp='1300905022' post='5091736']
it turns out i can't be a part of this RP sorry, i've had stacks of work over the past few weeks
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aw, it's okay SSS you do what you gotta do man :) but i shouldn't be here when my time is getting piled up either but oh well I'm a slifer slacker anyway.

OON: I think i shouldn't have used Accel-Stigma if my opponent used a deck consist more number of spell and trap than monsters since their target are spell and trap in first and for most :( maybe I'll have to switch to Dragarity instead since their target are not any of the card-type.

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Username:dragondestroyer
Character name: aaron
Gender: male
Occupation:student
Rank: stardust white
Grade:95%
Age: 13
Appearance:
Eye: brown, sometimes sharpen and become something not unlike a black hole
Hair: a blondish reddish color
Physical Description: he looks like aster pheonix, but with a different head. he normally wears a tux, but hes ok with his uniform.
Mark:
Personality: his personality is mysterious, most know him as cold and efficient, but those he is close to know him as a kind-hearted man, who is willing to do anything to save his friends. thing is, he hasn't made any friends seince that day.
Bio: aaron was special. ever seince he was a little kid, his favorite thing to do was stare at a card. he treated it like it was alive. he talked to it, walked with it, and dueled with it.
over the years, cards just like it started appearing in his deck. one day, there was a fire in his apartment. him and his sister were unlucky enough to be inside at the time. he made it out. his sister didn't. after he was out, he looked for someone to blame. and then a shady figure caught his eye. a shadow bandit. later he searched through the charred rubble, and found a card. he knew it was from his sister. "i will avenge you, sister!" he started training, and training, desperate to defeat the mysterious figure.
Deck: this deck relies on your opponent destroying your cards, allowing you to special summon a forgotten dragon.
Deck Name: forgotten dragon deck
Ace card: Forgotten dragon of chaos - yokoshima
Friend: ?????
Enemy: anyone who is a rich overconfident slob. or shadow bandits.
Extra: duel runner is like a dragon, only with wings tucked in as if in a dive. (they can open too) the dragons mouth breaths fire. he doesn't use it very much. he never really gets to know people, cause he knows if he does, the loss would rip him apart. its not worth it to love.


that better???
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[quote name='Simdoggy' timestamp='1300912165' post='5092000']
Same here but I never stress about things, even though I have 5 2 hour exams between Friday and Tuesday.
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The only thing will stress me out effectively is relatioship I don't get stress from school stuffs because they uninterest me.

[quote name='Ba'al' timestamp='1300912282' post='5092004']
I think I don't have time for this either. Sorry.
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No worry you also have your own rp to deal with I guess xD

[quote name='dragondestroyer' timestamp='1300914676' post='5092070']
Username:dragondestroyerCharacter name: aaronGender: maleOccupation:studentRank: stardust whiteGrade:95%Age: 13Appearance: Eye: brown, sometimes sharpen and become something not unlike a black holeHair: a blondish reddish colorPhysical Description: he looks like aster pheonix, but with a different head. he normally wears a tux, but hes ok with his uniform.Mark: Personality: his personality is mysterious, most know him as cold and efficient, but those he is close to know him as a kind-hearted man, who is willing to do anything to save his friends. thing is, he hasn't made any friends seince that day.Bio: aaron was special. ever seince he was a little kid, his favorite thing to do was stare at a card. he treated it like it was alive. he talked to it, walked with it, and dueled with it.over the years, cards just like it started appearing in his deck. one day, there was a fire in his apartment. him and his sister were unlucky enough to be inside at the time. he made it out. his sister didn't. after he was out, he looked for someone to blame. and then a shady figure caught his eye. a shadow bandit. later he searched through the charred rubble, and found a card. he knew it was from his sister. "i will avenge you, sister!" he started training, and training, desperate to defeat the mysterious figure.Deck: this deck relies on your opponent destroying your cards, allowing you to special summon a forgotten dragon.Deck Name: forgotten dragon deckAce card: Forgotten dragon of chaos - yokoshimaFriend: ?????Enemy: anyone who is a rich overconfident slob. or shadow bandits.Extra: duel runner is like a dragon, only with wings tucked in as if in a dive. (they can open too) the dragons mouth breaths fire. he doesn't use it very much. he never really gets to know people, cause he knows if he does, the loss would rip him apart. its not worth it to love.that better???
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I guess it's better than before, sem to me that you will be adding a shadow bandit as well. Just one detail need to be added in the bio, since you a student you must put a summary of about your entrance exam duel, try reading some of from me, simdoggy, brokenheart, etc.
And the initial in the rule to prove that you abide the rule
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Username:dragondestroyer
Character name: aaron
Gender: male
Occupation:student
Rank: stardust white
Grade:95%
Age: 13
Appearance:
Eye: brown, sometimes sharpen and become something not unlike a black hole
Hair: a blondish reddish color
Physical Description: he looks like aster pheonix, but with a different head. he normally wears a tux, but hes ok with his uniform.
Mark:
Personality: his personality is mysterious, most know him as cold and efficient, but those he is close to know him as a kind-hearted man, who is willing to do anything to save his friends. thing is, he hasn't made any friends seince that day.
Bio: aaron was special. ever seince he was a little kid, his favorite thing to do was stare at a card. he treated it like it was alive. he talked to it, walked with it, and dueled with it.
over the years, cards just like it started appearing in his deck. one day, there was a fire in his apartment. him and his sister were unlucky enough to be inside at the time. he made it out. his sister didn't. after he was out, he looked for someone to blame. and then a shady figure caught his eye. a shadow bandit. later he searched through the charred rubble, and found a card. he knew it was from his sister. "i will avenge you, sister!" he started training, and training, desperate to defeat the mysterious figure. he soon realized that d-momentum academy would help him sharpen his skills further, so attended an entrance exam. quick work really. the opponent was using a deck that focused on annihilating the opponents field. sucker. this allowed him to special summon various forgotten dragons, and in the end, finished with three direct attacks, adding up to a total damage of 10000. one word: overkill.
Deck: this deck relies on your opponent destroying your cards, allowing you to special summon a forgotten dragon.
Deck Name: forgotten dragon deck
Ace card: Forgotten dragon of chaos - yokoshima
Friend: ?????
Enemy: anyone who is a rich overconfident slob. or shadow bandits.
Extra: duel runner is like a dragon, only with wings tucked in as if in a dive. (they can open too) the dragons mouth breaths fire. he doesn't use it very much. he never really gets to know people, cause he knows if he does, the loss would rip him apart. its not worth it to love.



Username: dragondestroyer
Character name: jake
Gender: male
Occupation: shadow bandit
Rank: a
Grade: 95%
Age: 14 1/2
Appearance: has a bunch of strange tattoos, you can see a pencil sticking out of his pocket if you look carefully
Eye: they used to be bright green, the color of life, but now they are purple and soulless and radiate hate.
Hair: just like zanes
Physical Description: sleek and agile, like a ninja, he can leap great distances and is a master of the art of stealth
Mark:
Personality: a shady character, he is greedy and wants nothing but power. he intends to steal the signer cards to control the king of the underworld. he wasn't always like this.
Bio: jake, as a kid, was a happy go lucky guy. he started dueling at age 9. ever seince, he hasn't been the same. he became power hungry, found ways to get money that were untraceable by sector security. his quest for power didn't stop there, for he heard about the king of the underworld. unimagineable power. he would have it for himself. little did he know, the king of the underworld cant be controlled.
Deck: sketch deck. revolves around swarming and summoning the creator or the creators pencil.
Deck Name: the eraser of life points
Ace card: the creator
Friend: he works alone
Enemy: aaron
Extra: yes, he did kill aarons sister.

yusie is god, so who is satan???
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[quote name='dragondestroyer' timestamp='1300921336' post='5092351']
srry im still accepted right????
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the first one is good and accepted but not the second one
shadow bandit doesn't include grade since he not a student, but well he seem kinda young for being a shadow bandit but whatever xD. just adjust a bit the other detail for jake's personality, i like his personality because i guess we need someone who is power hungry, although i just felt there a disconnection.
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Username: dragondestroyer
Character name: jake
Gender: male
Occupation: shadow bandit/student
Rank: a
Grade: 95%
Age: 14 1/2
Appearance: has a bunch of strange tattoos, you can see a pencil sticking out of his pocket if you look carefully
Eye: they used to be bright green, the color of life, but now they are purple and soulless and radiate hate.
Hair: just like zanes
Physical Description: sleek and agile, like a ninja, he can leap great distances and is a master of the art of stealth
Mark:
Personality: a shady character, he is greedy and wants nothing but power. he intends to steal the signer cards to control the king of the underworld. he wasn't always like this.
Bio: jake, as a kid, was a happy go lucky guy. he started dueling at age 9. ever seince, he hasn't been the same. he became power hungry, found ways to get money that were untraceable by sector security. his quest for power didn't stop there, for he heard about the king of the underworld. unimagineable power. he would have it for himself. little did he know, the king of the underworld cant be controlled.
Deck: sketch deck. revolves around swarming and summoning the creator or the creators pencil.
Deck Name: the eraser of life points
Ace card: the creator
Friend: he works alone
Enemy: aaron
Extra: yes, he did kill aarons sister. and he has grades and is a student because he is the one that has been selected to eliminate the new signers before they come to grips with their power.



(hes actually being possesed by a major greed spirit. thus, when he is defeated, shall become a good guy. just thought you should know.)
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[quote name='dragondestroyer' timestamp='1300922879' post='5092420']
Username: dragondestroyer
Character name: jake
Gender: male
Occupation: shadow bandit/student
Rank: a
Grade: 95%
Age: 14 1/2
Appearance: has a bunch of strange tattoos, you can see a pencil sticking out of his pocket if you look carefully
Eye: they used to be bright green, the color of life, but now they are purple and soulless and radiate hate.
Hair: just like zanes
Physical Description: sleek and agile, like a ninja, he can leap great distances and is a master of the art of stealth
Mark:
Personality: a shady character, he is greedy and wants nothing but power. he intends to steal the signer cards to control the king of the underworld. he wasn't always like this.
Bio: jake, as a kid, was a happy go lucky guy. he started dueling at age 9. ever seince, he hasn't been the same. he became power hungry, found ways to get money that were untraceable by sector security. his quest for power didn't stop there, for he heard about the king of the underworld. unimagineable power. he would have it for himself. little did he know, the king of the underworld cant be controlled.
Deck: sketch deck. revolves around swarming and summoning the creator or the creators pencil.
Deck Name: the eraser of life points
Ace card: the creator
Friend: he works alone
Enemy: aaron
Extra: yes, he did kill aarons sister. and he has grades and is a student because he is the one that has been selected to eliminate the new signers before they come to grips with their power.



(hes actually being possesed by a major greed spirit. thus, when he is defeated, shall become a good guy. just thought you should know.)
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unfortunately if you have read the RP section beforehand we already proceed the plan of stealing the tablets as none of us are students to begin with, it would be too late change plan as to include someone who is part of the school though. unless he a student that become a shadow bandit afterward
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yes, he is a student that becomes a shadow bandit afterward


Username: dragondestroyer
Character name: jake
Gender: male
Occupation: shadow bandit
Rank: a
Grade: 95%
Age: 14 1/2
Appearance: has a bunch of strange tattoos, you can see a pencil sticking out of his pocket if you look carefully
Eye: they used to be bright green, the color of life, but now they are purple and soulless and radiate hate.
Hair: just like zanes
Physical Description: sleek and agile, like a ninja, he can leap great distances and is a master of the art of stealth
Mark:
Personality: a shady character, he is greedy and wants nothing but power. he intends to steal the signer cards to control the king of the underworld. he wasn't always like this.
Bio: jake, as a kid, was a happy go lucky guy. he started dueling at age 9. ever seince, he hasn't been the same. he became power hungry, found ways to get money that were untraceable by sector security. his quest for power didn't stop there, for he heard about the king of the underworld. unimagineable power. he would have it for himself. little did he know, the king of the underworld cant be controlled. his entrance exam was with a staff member that used a burn deck. jake fusion summoned the creator, and had sketch city, sketch forest, and sketch beach on the field. (yes, three field spells) he also successfully summoned the creators pencil, and summoned quite a bit of sketch monsters, immobilized spell and traps, and attacked for game. also overkill.
Deck: sketch deck. revolves around swarming and summoning the creator or the creators pencil.
Deck Name: the eraser of life points
Ace card: the creator
Friend: he works alone
Enemy: aaron
Extra: yes, he did kill aarons sister.
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[quote name='dragondestroyer' timestamp='1300924532' post='5092476']
yes, he is a student that becomes a shadow bandit afterward


Username: dragondestroyer
Character name: jake
Gender: male
Occupation: shadow bandit
Rank: a
Grade: 95%
Age: 14 1/2
Appearance: has a bunch of strange tattoos, you can see a pencil sticking out of his pocket if you look carefully
Eye: they used to be bright green, the color of life, but now they are purple and soulless and radiate hate.
Hair: just like zanes
Physical Description: sleek and agile, like a ninja, he can leap great distances and is a master of the art of stealth
Mark:
Personality: a shady character, he is greedy and wants nothing but power. he intends to steal the signer cards to control the king of the underworld. he wasn't always like this.
Bio: jake, as a kid, was a happy go lucky guy. he started dueling at age 9. ever seince, he hasn't been the same. he became power hungry, found ways to get money that were untraceable by sector security. his quest for power didn't stop there, for he heard about the king of the underworld. unimagineable power. he would have it for himself. little did he know, the king of the underworld cant be controlled. his entrance exam was with a staff member that used a burn deck. jake fusion summoned the creator, and had sketch city, sketch forest, and sketch beach on the field. (yes, three field spells) he also successfully summoned the creators pencil, and summoned quite a bit of sketch monsters, immobilized spell and traps, and attacked for game. also overkill.
Deck: sketch deck. revolves around swarming and summoning the creator or the creators pencil.
Deck Name: the eraser of life points
Ace card: the creator
Friend: he works alone
Enemy: aaron
Extra: yes, he did kill aarons sister.
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TBH it's mess up the timeline between your first and this. so is he going to become one during in the RP? I'm sorry but i did not anticipate this because i assume people will be choosing one of the three occupation, in the beginning the shadow bandits shouldn't be currently a student while being a shadow bandit otherwise i believe that would be too easy in some way. Simdoggy's char: Mark was a student but no longer attend because of a defeat from the final and he become a shadow bandit. well I guess I'll also let Simdoggy and Brokenheart state their observation as well.
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I'm going to say, why in the lord's good name did you accept the first app?

[quote]Physical Description: he looks like aster pheonix, but with a different head. he normally wears a tux, but hes ok with his uniform.[/quote]

One look at that and you should be telling him to bugger off, especially to go and improve his grammar. Do you even know what a capital letter is? I'll tell you, they go at the start of a sentence and when naming something.

I won't go into the second app, because all the criticizing would make my jaw seize up.

You should really be telling him to bugger off until he gets more of the rich filling called originality.
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[quote name='BrokenHeart15' timestamp='1300932461' post='5092747']
I'm going to say, why in the lord's good name did you accept the first app?



One look at that and you should be telling him to bugger off, especially to go and improve his grammar. Do you even know what a capital letter is? I'll tell you, they go at the start of a sentence and when naming something.

I won't go into the second app, because all the criticizing would make my jaw seize up.

You should really be telling him to bugger off until he gets more of the rich filling called originality.
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I guess the people has spoken and yes you're right, I'm quite a bit distracted and been doing this since in classes. This is why I need a co-host for this cos i'm not strict and harsh enough though oppression can be quite a backstabber. Well I believe you specialize better in char apps more than I do or rather a leader.I'm a bit more a follower than leader type, I only made 2 RP but participate countless RP.
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