Jack Witt Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 This post is for my New Fan Fic ill be working on (35 Episodes) and here are the main charcters: Name: Jack WittashiPersonality: Loves to Play Duel Monsters, and is sometimes very reckless, but Serious when his friends are in dangerDeck: Crystal Beast DeckDuel Style: Straight up Smack um down styleFavorite Card: Rainbow Dragon Name: Quamari RobinsonPersonality: A Goof to no end, but is a happy go lucky guy (and I mean Lucky)Deck: Lucky DuckDuel Style: Bases everything on chance, which causes him to clash with the calm and self-centered Zachary.Favorite Card: Lucky Magician LV10 Name: Maria (Last Name Unknown)Personality: Loves having fun, and is in love with JackDeck: Storm DeckDuel Style: Summons Hurrican, Goddess of the Storm or Simorgh, Bird of Divinty to crush her opponent's downFavorite Card: Hurricana, Goddess of the Storm Name: Zachary ThumbPersonality: Calm and Arrogant, frequently clashes with Quamari on Duel StylesDeck: Science DeckDuel Style: Basis everything on Probability and Chemical Formula'sFavorite Card: Water Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Witt Posted February 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Featured Duels: Jack VS Mrs. Kearns Episode 1: The Beginning Jack Wittashi was an ordinary boy, and he was walking down the street, talking to something on his shoulder who he called Ruby. Ruby was actually a Duel Spirit called Crystal Beast Ruby Carbuncle, one card in a set of highly rare cards, all one of a kind. Jack: Well Ruby its time we were off to school!Ruby: Rulwi!Jack: I know you dont want to have to wait till im done in school! Jack looked at his watch and saw it was 8:19 AM he was susposed to be in school at 8:15. Jack ran as fast as he could but when he got there the teacher Mrs. Kearns said he was late and needed to be punished with detention. Thats when Mrs. Kearns saw Jack's Deck Case on his belt, and quickly said if he could beat her in a duel, he wouldn't get detention, and so Jack set his Duel Dsik up, as did Mrs. Kearns. Jack and Mrs. Kearns: DUEL Jack-8000 LPMrs. Kearns-8000 LP Jack: Ill go first and I summon Crstal Beast Sapphire Pegasus (1800 ATK/ 1200 DEF), who allows me to set 1 Crystal Beast monster from my deck into my Spell and Trap card zones. Sapphire Pegasus: Looks like we're in a bit of trouble, arn't we Jack? Jack: Naw, this is fun, now I choose Crystal Beast Topaz Tiger (1600 ATK/ 1000 DEF). Now to finsih up my turn, I activate Ancient City-Rainbow Ruins, and place it in my field spell card zone. Mrs. Kearns: Finally, now I summon #2 Pencil (600 ATK/0 DEF) which activates its effect, allowing me to summon Pencil Sharpner (0 ATK/0 DEF) which activates it effect, allowing me to summon #2 Pencil, which allows me to summon Pencil Sharpner, which allows her to summon #2 Pencil, giving me 5 monsters. Now I tribute all of them to summon English Upperclassman (3000 ATK/2500 DEF), and now English Upperclassman attack Sapphire Pegasus with English Exam. Jack-6800 LP Jack: When Sapphire Pegasus is destroyed he becomes a Crystal in my Spell and Trap Card zones. Now I actiavte Crystal Tree, and Crystal Beacon. While Crystal Tree is on the field, it gets a Crsyal Counter every time a Crystal Beast is placed in the Spell and Trap Card zones. And Crystal Beacon, allows me to Special Summon a Crystal Beast from my deck if I have two or more Crystal Beast in spell and trap card zones, and I choose Crsytal Beast Ruby Carbuncle (300 ATK/ 300 DEF), and when he's Special Summoned I can summon all Crystal Beast in my Spell and Trap Card zones to the field. Go Ruby Guidance! (A Red glow emits from Ruby's tail, and calls Topaz Tiger and Sapphire Pegasus back to the field) Now I summon Crystal Beast Amber Mammoth (1700 ATK/ 1600 DEF), and activate Pot of Greed to draw 2 cards. (draws two cards from deck) I now activate Rainbow's Blessing and ill pay 3000 life-points to place 3 Crystal Counters on Crystal Tree then ill send my card to the graveyard to place, Crystal Beast Amythest Cat (1200 ATK/ 400 DEF), Crystal Beast Emerald Tortoise (600 ATK/2000 DEF), and Crystal Beast Cobalt Eagle (1400 ATK/800 DEF) in my Spell and Trap Card zones. And now theres only one thing left to do, I summon Rainbow Dragon, which I can only do when all 7 Crystal Beast are on the field or in the graveyard. Rainbow Dragon attack English Upperclassman with Rainbow's Reflection. (The blast hits Kearns' monster reducing her life-points by 1000) And now Topaz, Sapphire, Ruby, and Amber attack Mrs. Kearns directly (all the monster attack Kearn's and she screams, and now Kearn's life-points drop by 5400). I end my turn with by setting a face-down card. Mrs. Kearns-1600 LPJack-3800 LP Mrs. Kearns: Its impossible, a drop-out like you cant have the Rainbow Dragon card, its just not possible. But enough of that I summon Essay Writer (2000 ATK/0 DEF) (the class gasped that monster was no match for Rainbow Dragon) *Laughing* My Monster cannot be attack be monsters with twice its ATK points or more, so now Essay Writer attack Ruby Carbuncle. Now I end my turn. Jack: With three Crystal Beast in my Spell and Trap card zones, with Rainbow Ruins effect I can halve the damage I take. Jack: 2950 Jack: (draws card at the beginning of his turn) Now with Four Crystal Beast I can draw an extra card with Rainbow Ruins effect. Now I activate my face-down Crystal Raigeki, which allows me to send a Crystal Beast in my Spell Cards zones to the graveyard, like Ruby Carbuncle, to destroy one of your cards, and I choose Essay Writer to be destroyed (The Ruby Crystal Rises into the air and fires a lightning bolt, destroying Essay Writer and clearing the field for Rainbow Dragon to attack), and now I sacrifice the remaining six Crystal Beasts to the graveyard, to activate Rainbow Dragon's effect, hich increases its ATK by 1000 per Crystal Beast sent to the graveyard (Everyone gasps when Rainbow Dragons ATK rises to 10,000), This is for the suffering you caused me and my Crystal Beasts, Rainbow Dragon attack her directly with Ultimate Rainbow Reflection. (The blast knocked Kearns down and wiped out her lif-points) Kearns: 0 LP Jack: That's Game, thanks Kearns for the duel, and now I dont get Detention. *laughs* Kearns: Thanks, and now for your punishment, I cant put you in Detention but you do have to right a 3 page essay on the duel we just had. (The class laughs but Jack falls down and screams its not fair, as the episode ends.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Witt Posted February 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Ok, you Normal Summon twice. Not good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Witt Posted February 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 were most of the summons were Special Summons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen Moon Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 in it you pust Topaz Tiger gets 400 ATK points when it attack. that only if it attacks a monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Witt Posted February 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 There I fixed it PS: That leaves the problem of where this extra summon is, I cant see any other mess ups other than the one you pointed out, and thats fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Witt Posted February 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 Featured Duel: Jack VS Quamari Episode 2: The Lucky Deck VS The Crystal Beasts Jack was doing homework, for Mrs. Kearns, when a student named Quamari came up to him, and said that the principal would like to see him in the playground. Jack agreed but was surprised to discover that Quamari had tricked him out here to duel him. Jack: Alright lets duel, and may the best Duelist win.Quamari: I intend to!Jack and Quamari: DUEL!!! Jack=8000 LPQuamari=8000 LP Jack: Ill go first, I summon Crystal Beast Topaz Tiger (1600 ATK/ 1000 DEF) in attack mode. Then I activate Ancient City-Rainbow Ruins, and play 2 cards face-down, and end my turn. Quamari: I activate Magical Mallet, and return all my cards in me hand to draw 5 new cards, as I returned 5. Now I activate Lucky Summoning, which allows me to Special Summon, 1 Lucky Magician or Lucky Swordsman from my hand regardless of summoning conditions. I summon Lucky Swordsman LV6 (2200 ATK/2000 DEF), who is completly unaffected by Trap Cards or Spell Cards depending on what I get a Heads or a Tails, as when my monster is summoned I flip a coin.(Quamari flips a Quarter and gets Heads) Its Heads so my monster is immune to Spell Cards. Now I summon Lucky Magician LV3 (1200 ATK/300 DEF) and when he's summoned I roll a die and if its a 4, or 6, all cards on your field, are returned to your hand. (Quamari rolls a die, and gets a 4) Now all your cards are returned. Now my Monsters attack him directly. Jack=4600 LP (8000-2200-1200)Quamari=8000 LP Jack: I know your Magician's effect will cause it to evolve on your Standby Phase, and your Swordsman will evolve the moment it destroys one of my monsters. I summon Crystal Beast Topaz Tiger, back to the field, now I activate Double Summon, and summon Crystal Beast Sapphire Pegasus (1800 ATK/1200 DEF) and with its effect place Crystal Beast Cobalt Eagle (1400 ATK/800 DEF), in my Spell Card zones. Now I activate Ancient City-Rainbow Ruins. Then I play 1 card face-down. And finally my Topaz Tiger will attack your Lucky Magician LV3 (Topaz slashes Magician as its ATK goes up by 400) . Jack=4600 LPQuamari=7300 LP (8000+1200-2000) Jack: Now I end my Turn. Quamari: Arg!! You’ll pay for what you did! Jack: I activate my trap, Crystal Raigeki which allows me to tribute my Cobalt Eagle, and destroy your Lucky Swordsman. (The Cobalt Crystal rose into the air and fired a Lightning Bolt, destroying Lucky Swordsman LV6) Quamari: Curse you!!! I summon another Lucky Magician LV3 which activates its effect (Quamari rolled a 5). Arg!! Oh well I activate Level Up! which evolves my Lucky Magician LV3 into LV5 (2400 ATK/600 DEF), and when its summoned I can discard a card from my hand, and roll a die, if it’s a 5 or 6, all your monsters are destroyed. (Quamari rolled another die and got 4) ARG!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh well I have another plan, I activate another Level Up! which evolves my monster into Lucky Magician LV7 (2800 ATK/900 DEF), which when he’s summoned I can discard my hand, to roll a die and if it’s a 1 or 6, all cards on your field are destroyed. (Quamari rolled again and got a 5) ARG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lucky Magician attack his Topaz Tiger with Lucky Sceptor (A magical blast emmited from Lucky Magician LV7’s sceptor, destroying Topaz Tiger and turning it into a crystal.) Jack=3400 LP (4600+1600-2800)Quamari=7300 LP Jack: My turn, I draw! Now I activate Pot of Greed, to draw two more cards! Now I summon a Monster in defense mode, and switch Sapphire Pegasus to defense mode. Now I end my Turn! Quamari: HAHA! Now I attack with Lucky Magician LV7, and it’ll destroy your defense monster (The Monster was Crystal Beast Emerald Tortoise (600 ATK/2000 DEF)). Now I end my turn.Jack: I activate Crystal Tree, and Rainbow’s Blessing, with Rainbow’s Blessing I pay 3000 life-points to place 3 Crystal Counters on Crystal Tree, which I now send to the graveyard, to place Crystal Beast Amythest Cat, Crystal Beast Ruby Carbuncle, and Crystal Beast Amber Mammoth (1700 ATK/ 1600 DEF) into my Spell and Trap Card zones. Jack=400 LP (3400-3000)Quamari=7300 LP Jack: Now I summon my Rainbow Dragon (4000 ATK/0 DEF)! Now Rainbow Dragon attack with Rainbow Reflection, destroy Lucky Magician LV7! (The Blast from Rainbow Dragon, sent Quamari down to the ground) Jack=300 LPQuamari=6100 LP (7300+2800-4000) Quamari: NO!!! NOT MY LUCKY MAGICIAN LV7!!! Jack: I end my turn! Quamari: I summon a monster in defense mode and end my turn. Jack: I activate Stop Defense, which switches your monster to attack mode (Quamari’s monster was revealed to be another Lucky Magician LV3). Now I send all 6 Crystal Beast I have on the field, to the graveyard to power Rainbow Dragon’s ATK power by 1000 for each one, that makes 6000 extra ATK points. Rainbow Dragon (10000 ATK/0 DEF) attack his Lucky Magician with Ultimate Rainbow Reflection! Jack=400 LPQuamari=0 LP (6100+1200-10000) Jack: That’s Game! Thanks for the sweet duel Quamari! Jack prepared to leave, but Quamari stopped him and asked him if he could be Jack’s new friend, cause he thinks that Jack is the best duelist in the world, if he had a Crystal Beast Deck. Jack: Alright Quamari, you got yourself a friend! Both laugh as the sun sets, showing how long they had been dueling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Witt Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 BUMP PS: Need Ideas on how to introduce Maria Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted February 12, 2008 Report Share Posted February 12, 2008 sees jack & quamari walking or dueling then she wants to duel jack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Witt Posted February 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2008 okay, but how does she know about him, she's not a part of Mrs. Kearns class, which is what Ill state in the story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koolkiddale Posted February 12, 2008 Report Share Posted February 12, 2008 you m normal summoned twice...but otherwise great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Witt Posted February 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 WHERE??? Ive already told people I never Normal Summoned Twice, and if your talking about in Episode 2, I used Double Summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Witt Posted February 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 Alright I still have no idea for what to do for episode 3, so im holding a contest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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