♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 [center] [size="7"][b][color="#FF0000"]Inferno[/color] Archetype:[/b][/size] [size="3"]This will be a burn set. It will include [color="#FF0000"]FIRE[/color] Effect Monsters with effects that inflict damage, use counters, and support each other. The archetype will also be supported by Spell and Trap Cards.[/size] [size="5"][b]Criticize On:[/b][/size] [size="3"]Picture, OCG, and Card Concept.[/size] (NOT THE CARD TEMPLATE!) [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/nwzble.jpg[/IMG] [b]Lore:[/b] Once per turn, you can destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card. If you destroyed a Spell Card, inflict 300 damage and place 1 Inferno Counter on this card (max 3). When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card, you can remove 1 Inferno Counter from this card to negate the activation of 1 Spell or Trap Card and destroy it. [i][u][b][size="5"]-Monster Cards-[/size][/b][/u][/i] [spoiler=Inferno Knight] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/73orw3.jpg[/IMG] [b]Lore:[/b] When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, inflict 200x the destroyed monster's Level and place 1 Inferno Counter on this card (max 3). Once per turn, you can remove 1 Inferno Counter from this card to attack twice during the same Battle Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Inferno Sorcerer] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/3582v06.jpg[/IMG] [b]Lore:[/b] While this card remains face-up on the field and your opponent activates a Spell Card, inflict 400 damage to your opponent and place 1 Inferno Counter on this card (max 3). When this card is destroyed or removed from play, inflict 200 damage for each Inferno Counter on it. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Inferno Ninja] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2zqhclh.jpg[/IMG] [b]Lore:[/b] Once per turn, place 1 Inferno Counter on 1 monster your opponent controls. A monster with an Inferno Counter on it loses 200 ATK and DEF. During your Standby Phase, inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each monster your opponent controls with an Inferno Counter placed on it. [/spoiler] [size="5"][i][u][b]-Spell & Trap Cards-[/b][/u][/i][/size] [spoiler=Inferno Counter Increase] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2airfr9.jpg[/IMG] [b]Lore:[/b] This card can only be activated if you control 1 "Inferno" monster. While this card remains face-up on the field, increase the damage caused by all "Inferno" monster's Inferno Counters by 300. Once per turn, you must pay 500 Life Points or remove from play 1 "Inferno" monster from your Graveyard. If you do not pay 500 Life Points or remove from play 1 "Inferno" monster from your Graveyard, send this card to the Graveyard. [/spoiler] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abe - Demonic Sammich Guy Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 I don't see any OCG errors. The effect may seem overpowered to me but it still is really good at limiting your opponent's actions. 10/10 ¡Buen trabajo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Why thanks for you kind comment sir and I appreciate your +rep very very much (: Y gracias mucho! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 New card added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysteryman429 Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 speakin from experience, these would be nice additions to burn/heavystall decks... which are very effective anyway.. because not many decks have responses to burn effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Correct my friend for those are the sets I'm also trying to support for I use them a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abe - Demonic Sammich Guy Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Love the new card I think that these cards actually can work on a lockdown mechanic, forcing your opponent to play more conservitavley. That's what I like about these awesom eburn cards. I also like how the art is similar. +repped again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Thank you man! I'm glad you loved them, and thanks for the 2nd +rep. I will now give you a +rep for your curiosity (: And yeah burn sets are the best in my opinion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 New card added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abe - Demonic Sammich Guy Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 last one is very abusable in warrior/arament decks still great as always not as good as the first two though. a littl ebit more generic. 9/10 oyu should try to stick with the lockdown burn strategy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Yeah you gotta point. I will change it when I get back from my girl friend's house though. I will change it to were it will have counters to because that's what I want to do with all effect cards really, and thanks for you support bro (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abe - Demonic Sammich Guy Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 yea counters are also very fun to use and trollololol with Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Heck yeah; so I'm bout to change the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abe - Demonic Sammich Guy Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Wording fix here When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, inflict 200x the destroyed monster's Level and place 1 Inferno Counter on this card (max 3). Once per turn, you can remove 1 Inferno Counter from this card to make this card attack twice during the same Battle Phase. still great card. you should make a card that supports inferno counters next Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 I just looked up the OCG that i did, and it says it's correct so I'll keep it like that for now, and do you mean make a Spell or Trap Card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abe - Demonic Sammich Guy Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 yeah! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Well I'm not to good at Spell and Trap Cards, but here's a Spell Card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abe - Demonic Sammich Guy Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Excelent card. another rep for you is on the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Then I did excellent? Yeah And I really do appreciate the +rep again! Anyone else willing to comment and rate (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 These cards are pretty good and looks legit, except for the fonts of the texts, did you use MTG set editor to make these cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Thank you good sir, and by MTG; do you mean MSE? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abe - Demonic Sammich Guy Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Loving the other card 10/10 maybe you should increase the attack to 2000 though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Thanks man! And I think I will do that and make a Spell or Trap Card that protects the Inferno Monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Near Rivers Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Inferno Magician errors: First of, you said "If you destroy a spell card, deal 300 damage" but didn't specify who's taking said damage. You've probably made similar mistakes on your other cards, so I would check those to make sure if I were you. Other then that great job, and nice image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 Well of course the opponent is going to be taking the damage because I'm sure you wouldn't want to be taking yourself out, and thanks though. Will change the effects though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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