Yugioh - Age of War

[1SDAN]

[spoiler='Chapter 1: The Beggining'] It all started one day; it was the first day of summer. A boring, usual, uninteresting summer. My friend Kelbo found a new deck for me, he searched a couple hundred online stores for as much discounts possible. I was walking to the store; he said he knew the best deck for beginners. (He says that to all his customers) Of course he was on break when I got there. So, I started towards the New Domino City city center, something was always happening there. And boy was I right.
When I got there, a huge crowd was gathering around two duelists. The guy in the red looked very familiar. Spiky brown hair, where have I seen him before? So, a demonic figure just swallows two rocks (face-down monsters) and just waits there. The opponent was a Ra Yellow student I met a few years ago. I think his name was Dawson. He was round and very aggressive. He Released a Koa’ki Mueru Speeder to bring forth a Rooklord to destroy the demon. But instead, the demon just got even more deformed. Dawson was about to attack when a B. Eyes Dragon smashed the Kaibi-Corp building. The citizens ran as the red guy jumped on his duel glider and soared into the sky. Shooting his cards out of a military-issued duel disk. I ran as fast as I could. Hoping to make it to TeeCee‘s Gee Shop.
When I got there, I found Kelbo at the front door. “Hey little dude, where’s the fire?”
“Well, probably at Kaibi-Corp.” I said. “Now, got the Deck?”
“Only if you have 20 buckaroos.” But as we exchanged items, a shadow was cast over me. It was the Rouge-Trolls.
“So pipsqueak,” rouded Chuck, their leader. “Yous’ gotch ma’ cards yat?”
“No Chuck, I don’t have [font="Arial Narrow"]your[/font] cards, I have mine.
“Ah, but what if yous’ tole dem? Den wat!”
“Why don’t you just go home and watch Dora?“
“Cause’ den Ah’d be a lozah.”
“You already are.” I said, thinking I finally broke him.
“Wanna’ knuck sandwich?” He said, defiantly steaming. Actually, I think I actually did see some smoke coming out of his ears.
“How about we just duel, okay?”
“Against a twelve? Good luck beatin’ ma.” He said slyly, Opening his duel disk. “If ah win, those cards be mine. If ya win, ya can have ma duel board, I’m too handsome fors it anyway.”
The duel started as I drew my first card, Spell-Charmed Ace. I threw him in attack position, and used his special power. A picture of the next card of my deck appeared on the ground, Spell-Charmed Queen. A purple light appeared in back of ace. I threw down an Unbound Curse as the light turned to the Queen.
“Now get ready, because here is my Spell-Bound King!” I said as Ace and Queen monsters turned into Blue and Purple lights respectively and then combined, creating a surge of light. And out of it emerged Spellbound King, my first Synchro.
“So what, ah can do dat in mah sleep!” Chuck sang.
Then two orbs of light appeared before the King. “Now, watch as I release my Blue orb!” I yelled, full of enthusiasm. The orb shot at my opponent. But instead of just knocking my opponent’s Life Points by 500, it also shot him into a tree.
“Wh- wha’d ya’ do ta’ me! You- You can keep dose evil cards!” Chuck yelled, as his gang took him away.[/spoiler]

[valliant12]

Please use spoilers and paragraphs. A wall of text isn't very nice on the eyes.

[1SDAN]

I did use paragraphs, it's just that the stoopid editor won't let me. And, how do u use spoilers?

[valliant12]

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[1SDAN]

Oh txs, I'll get right on it

[Twig]

You'll have to do paragraphs differently. You double space after each paragraph.

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It all started one day; it was the first day of summer. A boring, usual, uninteresting summer. My friend Kelbo found a new deck for me, he searched a couple hundred online stores for as much discounts possible. I was walking to the store; he said he knew the best deck for beginners. (He says that to all his customers) Of course he was on break when I got there. So, I started towards the New Domino City city center, something was always happening there. And boy was I right.

When I got there, a huge crowd was gathering around two duelists. The guy in the red looked very familiar. Spiky brown hair, where have I seen him before? So, a demonic figure just swallows two rocks (face-down monsters) and just waits there. The opponent was a Ra Yellow student I met a few years ago. I think his name was Dawson. He was round and very aggressive. He Released a Koa’ki Mueru Speeder to bring forth a Rooklord to destroy the demon. But instead, the demon just got even more deformed. Dawson was about to attack when a B. Eyes Dragon smashed the Kaibi-Corp building. The citizens ran as the red guy jumped on his duel glider and soared into the sky. Shooting his cards out of a military-issued duel disk. I ran as fast as I could. Hoping to make it to TeeCee‘s Gee Shop.

When I got there, I found Kelbo at the front door. “Hey little dude, where’s the fire?”

“Well, probably at Kaibi-Corp.” I said. “Now, got the Deck?”

“Only if you have 20 buckaroos.” But as we exchanged items, a shadow was cast over me. It was the Rouge-Trolls.

“So pipsqueak,” rouded Chuck, their leader. “Yous’ gotch ma’ cards yat?”

“No Chuck, I don’t have your cards, I have mine.

“Ah, but what if yous’ tole dem? Den wat!”

“Why don’t you just go home and watch Dora?“

“Cause’ den Ah’d be a lozah.”

“You already are.” I said, thinking I finally broke him.

“Wanna’ knuck sandwich?” He said, defiantly steaming. Actually, I think I actually did see some smoke coming out of his ears.

“How about we just duel, okay?”

“Against a twelve? Good luck beatin’ ma.” He said slyly, Opening his duel disk. “If ah win, those cards be mine. If ya win, ya can have ma duel board, I’m too handsome fors it anyway.”

The duel started as I drew my first card, Spell-Charmed Ace. I threw him in attack position, and used his special power. A picture of the next card of my deck appeared on the ground, Spell-Charmed Queen. A purple light appeared in back of ace. I threw down an Unbound Curse as the light turned to the Queen.
“Now get ready, because here is my Spell-Bound King!” I said as Ace and Queen monsters turned into Blue and Purple lights respectively and then combined, creating a surge of light. And out of it emerged Spellbound King, my first Synchro.

“So what, ah can do dat in mah sleep!” Chuck sang.

Then two orbs of light appeared before the King. “Now, watch as I release my Blue orb!” I yelled, full of enthusiasm. The orb shot at my opponent. But instead of just knocking my opponent’s Life Points by 500, it also shot him into a tree.

“Wh- wha’d ya’ do ta’ me! You- You can keep dose evil cards!” Chuck yelled, as his gang took him away.[/spoiler]