Yu-Gi-Oh! Divine Wrath (Always Accepting/ Started)

[Premier Alexander Romanov]

What have I missed?

[♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫]

nothing really but I do believe it's your turn in the RP duel

[~Nightshade~]

Though I've never actually RP'd before ON THIS SITE, I've figured I'd return to my Internet roots and once more visit the land of RP'ing. Where better to start then on my very on YCM?

[b]Name: Evan[/b]
[b]Age: 20[/b]
[b]Gender: Male[/b]
[b]Appereance: Ezio. From AS. Without the damn awesome handblades. [/b]
[b]Personality: Completely insane, laughing at everything execpt pain. He cannot stand the sight of his own blood, and it pierces through the self-illusionary shields surronding him to remind Evan of the things he has done. When in a duel, Evan concentrates very hard and a Duel is one of the only times Evan can remain still for long.

Pluto, alter-ego of Evan, is also insane and loves slaughter and murder, being the God of Death. Sorrow and Suffering are his Sphere, and none will stand in his way.

DEATH FOR THE DEATH GOD[/b]
[b]Bio:

It all started with the duel. That one duel; the singular duel that changed Evan's life forever.

Evan; a simple duelist of Neo Domino, was dueling against a good friend of his, Drew. Midway through the Duel, the top card of Evan's deck glowed as he drew. He was facing down the legendary Signer Dragon, Stardust, and only controlled 2 cards; both monsters; Inverzes Cell, Shard and Caller. Drew had 1000 Life Points, while Evan had 2500. If he didn't draw something soon, Evan would be wiped out by Stardust.

And so, with these thoughts, he drew. A entirely new card he drew, one named Pluto- Lord of the Abyss. Not questioning it, Evan began to open his mouth. However, what came out of it was not what he thought to say.

"Are you ready to face the power of my new boss monster, Drew?" Evan said in a smooth voice, completely unlike his own, more rough one.

"I Release Inverzes Cell, Caller, and Shard!"

"B-but there are no 3-Tribute Inverz! What are you trying to do, Evan?!"

"I am not Evan! He is but my host! Now let me get on with my move!" snapped the "Evan", though it was obvious it was not he. "I also remove from play Inverzes Horn, Giristag, and Gatekeeper! Special Summon!"

Unknown to the duelists inside the gameshop, this was the very moment the tablets of the Gods opened. The spirit of Pluto, dark Lord of the Abyss, who was very prepared for this release, burst from his tablet, and, following the cries of his mortal followers, found a suitable host in Evan.

The kids in the shop had better things to worry about, however. The sky began to darken, the ground shook, and rocks began to fall from the ceiling. One of the children shrieked and all of them began to run.

"Get out of my way!"
"No, I refuse!"
"What the hell is happening?!?"
The confused cries of Evan's friends cut through the room and bounced around the town. Drew, too, began to move, shaking, but two tendrils of shadow sprouted from the ground and grabbed him.

"I'm not done with you, dearest Drew. As I was saying before those kids RUDELY interrupted me, I Special Summon this monster! The very avatar of Death and the Reaper of Souls! God Summon, Pluto, Lord of the Abyss!"

The screams began to increase in pitch drastically. Several of the children actually fainted at the sight of a huge, devil-like snake sprouted from the ground, bearing a red mask with horns. Blue energy faintly clustered about its purple hands, and brown streamers ran from its back. And hovering gently before it was a black, horned shield, symbol of the great Inverz tribe. "Pluto can't attack directly, as you can see. But I can do this! I activate Pluto's effect; removing from play Inverzes Scout and Cell in my Graveyard to deal damage to you equal to the amount of removed from play Fiends!"

Shadowy images of five beetle-like beings gathered before the great horned beast. The blue aura around its hands light up, covering the room with the soft glow.

"Pluto! [u]Death Judgement![/u]" Immediately, the five beetles rushed out at Drew as both the Pluto Avatar and Pluto the monster laughed insanely, knowing that the sheer power of the God would kill Drew.

Drew collapsed to the floor as the beetles surrounded him, chewing at his skin and ripping and clawing as blood flew around the room. The image of the great Pluto slowly faded away, but the Inverz spirits remained, feasting upon the blond-haired boy's body.

Evan laughed one more time before shadows enveloped him and he was spirited away. Later, far away in the ruins of Rome, Evan came to terms with what he had done. Knowing he would never be accepted by any human again, Evan willingly became the true host of the Divine, Pluto. When the time for the assualt on the rebels came, Evan marched at the forefront.[/b]


[b]Affiliation: Demigods[/b]
[b]Deck Name: Raid of the Inverz!!![/b]
[b]Deck Type: Inverz, with a little boost from some created cards..[/b]
(Monster Types)
[b]Ace Card:[spoiler][img]http://i756.photobucket.com/albums/xx203/Sawoe/LofA-P-1.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/b]


amidoingitrite? Evan's text will be black in RP, but it's bolded so I can't do that here.

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

[quote name='Nexus Prophet-Evanm7' timestamp='1299635162' post='5061560']
Though I've never actually RP'd before ON THIS SITE, I've figured I'd return to my Internet roots and once more visit the land of RP'ing. Where better to start then on my very on YCM?

[b]Name: Evan[/b]
[b]Age: 20[/b]
[b]Gender: Male[/b]
[b]Appereance: Ezio. From AS. Without the damn awesome handblades. [/b]
[b]Personality: Completely insane, laughing at everything execpt pain. He cannot stand the sight of his own blood, and it pierces through the self-illusionary shields surronding him to remind Evan of the things he has done. When in a duel, Evan concentrates very hard and a Duel is one of the only times Evan can remain still for long.

Pluto, alter-ego of Evan, is also insane and loves slaughter and murder, being the God of Death. Sorrow and Suffering are his Sphere, and none will stand in his way.

DEATH FOR THE DEATH GOD[/b]
[b]Bio:

It all started with the duel. That one duel; the singular duel that changed Evan's life forever.

Evan; a simple duelist of Neo Domino, was dueling against a good friend of his, Drew. Midway through the Duel, the top card of Evan's deck glowed as he drew. He was facing down the legendary Signer Dragon, Stardust, and only controlled 2 cards; both monsters; Inverzes Cell, Shard and Caller. Drew had 1000 Life Points, while Evan had 2500. If he didn't draw something soon, Evan would be wiped out by Stardust.

And so, with these thoughts, he drew. A entirely new card he drew, one named Pluto- Lord of the Abyss. Not questioning it, Evan began to open his mouth. However, what came out of it was not what he thought to say.

"Are you ready to face the power of my new boss monster, Drew?" Evan said in a smooth voice, completely unlike his own, more rough one.

"I Release Inverzes Cell, Caller, and Shard!"

"B-but there are no 3-Tribute Inverz! What are you trying to do, Evan?!"

"I am not Evan! He is but my host! Now let me get on with my move!" snapped the "Evan", though it was obvious it was not he. "I also remove from play Inverzes Horn, Giristag, and Gatekeeper! Special Summon!"

Unknown to the duelists inside the gameshop, this was the very moment the tablets of the Gods opened. The spirit of Pluto, dark Lord of the Abyss, who was very prepared for this release, burst from his tablet, and, following the cries of his mortal followers, found a suitable host in Evan.

The kids in the shop had better things to worry about, however. The sky began to darken, the ground shook, and rocks began to fall from the ceiling. One of the children shrieked and all of them began to run.

"Get out of my way!"
"No, I refuse!"
"What the hell is happening?!?"
The confused cries of Evan's friends cut through the room and bounced around the town. Drew, too, began to move, shaking, but two tendrils of shadow sprouted from the ground and grabbed him.

"I'm not done with you, dearest Drew. As I was saying before those kids RUDELY interrupted me, I Special Summon this monster! The very avatar of Death and the Reaper of Souls! God Summon, Pluto, Lord of the Abyss!"

The screams began to increase in pitch drastically. Several of the children actually fainted at the sight of a huge, devil-like snake sprouted from the ground, bearing a red mask with horns. Blue energy faintly clustered about its purple hands, and brown streamers ran from its back. And hovering gently before it was a black, horned shield, symbol of the great Inverz tribe. "Pluto can't attack directly, as you can see. But I can do this! I activate Pluto's effect; removing from play Inverzes Scout and Cell in my Graveyard to deal damage to you equal to the amount of removed from play Fiends!"

Shadowy images of five beetle-like beings gathered before the great horned beast. The blue aura around its hands light up, covering the room with the soft glow.

"Pluto! [u]Death Judgement![/u]" Immediately, the five beetles rushed out at Drew as both the Pluto Avatar and Pluto the monster laughed insanely, knowing that the sheer power of the God would kill Drew.

Drew collapsed to the floor as the beetles surrounded him, chewing at his skin and ripping and clawing as blood flew around the room. The image of the great Pluto slowly faded away, but the Inverz spirits remained, feasting upon the blond-haired boy's body.

Evan laughed one more time before shadows enveloped him and he was spirited away. Later, far away in the ruins of Rome, Evan came to terms with what he had done. Knowing he would never be accepted by any human again, Evan willingly became the true host of the Divine, Pluto. When the time for the assualt on the rebels came, Evan marched at the forefront.[/b]


[b]Affiliation: Demigods[/b]
[b]Deck Name: Raid of the Inverz!!![/b]
[b]Deck Type: Inverz, with a little boost from some created cards..[/b]
(Monster Types)
[b]Ace Card:[spoiler][img]http://i756.photobucket.com/albums/xx203/Sawoe/LofA-P-1.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/b]


amidoingitrite? Evan's text will be black in RP, but it's bolded so I can't do that here.
[/quote]

hmm well it is at the point of being not accepted because for some details, need full name, the appearance need to be detailed either in description or a pic. the personality seem fine, but the bio mean to be a summary of main point of his past or ongoing history, it's very long and mostly about the happening of this duel between your char and a friend of his.it should talk about what happen to him in the past before he wield Pluto, you should read other member's character posts here to get ideas. so for the rest seem fine. just fix those.

[~Nightshade~]

THE CONTENTS OF THESE POSTS ARE NOT TO OFFEND

I looked at the first post's app, and frankly, it was terrible. Evan was a KID before he was taken over by Pluto, so there's not much interesting to write about a 10-year-old.

A bio is short for biography; let me define that for you.

[i]a written account of another person's life: the biography of Byron by Marchand.[/i]

Evan's life, was, basically, DUEL WHERE HE KILLS HIS BEST FRIEND WITH A GIANT SLUG and then derp a herp he's possessed by a f***ing god and he CARD GAEMMMSSS.

Evan/Pluto are basically one person, so if you want me to c+p the entire Roman myth of Pluto into here, I will. :3

The appearence; it is detailed. Just use google and type in Ezio .

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

[quote name='Nexus Prophet-Evanm7' timestamp='1299703483' post='5062958']
THE CONTENTS OF THESE POSTS ARE NOT TO OFFEND

I looked at the first post's app, and frankly, it was terrible. Evan was a KID before he was taken over by Pluto, so there's not much interesting to write about a 10-year-old.

A bio is short for biography; let me define that for you.

[i]a written account of another person's life: the biography of Byron by Marchand.[/i]

Evan's life, was, basically, DUEL WHERE HE KILLS HIS BEST FRIEND WITH A GIANT SLUG and then derp a herp he's possessed by a f***ing god and he CARD GAEMMMSSS.

Evan/Pluto are basically one person, so if you want me to c+p the entire Roman myth of Pluto into here, I will. :3

The appearence; it is detailed. Just use google and type in Ezio .
[/quote]

i guess there no point of this, Golden and the rest seem to have not come back after a week, so I guess Golden will deal with this then, though I'm a co-host, his validation must present as well.

[♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫]

Well I have been trying to post in the IC but I can't do back to back post and no one else will post but yeah I agree with Y&A just post the pic here

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

[quote name='♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫' timestamp='1299723189' post='5063657']
Well I have been trying to post in the IC but I can't do back to back post and no one else will post but yeah I agree with Y&A just post the pic here
[/quote]

yay you're back, i can post but it been almost a week and the others could have post though, is it on a verge to be dead? :S I'm acutually waiting for you be at the point at that we cross path, right now my char is outside of a hotel and getting on the duel runner, he not left there as well. just add kuro's action to your previous post then i will initiate it.