-DOOM Posted February 19, 2011 Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 [center]I spent too much of my (life)time on this... [Spoiler= V. 1] Better Quality: [b]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/7719/exceedcard.png[/b] [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/7719/exceedcard.png[/img] [/Spoiler] [size="3"][u][b]V. 2[/b][/u][/size] [b]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/2861/exceedcarddark.png[/b] [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/2861/exceedcarddark.png[/img] CnC please. Questions I'd like to have answered: -Brightness of Frame ok? -Stars - too bright/too dark? -Effectbox - bright enough?[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted February 19, 2011 Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 The frame looks good from what I see, although I'm not someone who should be called an authority. The problem I see at the moment is that there is no summoning requirement. What is required to summon this card? I would assume 2 Level 4 monsters, but Idk. The effect is pretty clever I think. Overall it looks fine to me. Also, it should be Zombie/Exceed/Effect. As for the card itself, I give it an 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted February 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 [quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1298157353' post='5019094'] The frame looks good from what I see, although I'm not someone who should be called an authority. The problem I see at the moment is that there is no summoning requirement. What is required to summon this card? I would assume 2 Level 4 monsters, but Idk. The effect is pretty clever I think. Overall it looks fine to me. Also, it should be Zombie/Exceed/Effect. As for the card itself, I give it an 8/10 [/quote] Thanks, but actually I wanted to have the card layout criticized, not the effect - this is the schowcase section after all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted February 19, 2011 Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 lol I know, I just always enjoy doing a critique ^^ like I said, I don't see anything wrong with the template, but I'm hardly the expert on it. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 It looks quite nice and pretty realistic I love what you did with the blue streaks in the galaxy background. I love it! Do you by any chance have the template of this that I can buy? Also, on another note, what font do you use for the effect box? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 Thank you^^ When the template is completely finished, I might give it away. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/238263-hd-free-card-template/ the fonts from this site Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wahrheit Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 Your font's off. Quite a bit. The color and blending could also use a fair bit of work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 [quote name='Wahrheit' timestamp='1298191910' post='5020317'] Your font's off. Quite a bit. The color and blending could also use a fair bit of work. [/quote] What are the correct fonts? Which colors? Could you please go more in detail? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wahrheit Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 [quote name='Hp doom' timestamp='1298192166' post='5020326'] What are the correct fonts? Which colors? Could you please go more in detail? [/quote] Matrix Smallcaps with some tinkering in photoshop. It's a paid/licensed font though so I can't upload it legally. With regards to how you apply it, the text is a bit grainy above the effect box and it is very obvious that the title text simply doesn't belong there. Try modifying your blending settings, selecting a different color, using clipping masks, or manually modifying the text after you rasterize it. The copyright and ID code numbers/letters also appear to be out of place. The effect text seems improperly width-set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 [quote name='Wahrheit' timestamp='1298192323' post='5020331'] Matrix Smallcaps with some tinkering in photoshop. It's a paid/licensed font though so I can't upload it legally. With regards to how you apply it, the text is a bit grainy above the effect box and it is very obvious that the title text simply doesn't belong there. Try modifying your blending settings, selecting a different color, using clipping masks, or manually modifying the text after you rasterize it. The copyright and ID code numbers/letters also appear to be out of place. The effect text seems improperly width-set. [/quote] Added a newer version to first post. Better now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wahrheit Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 Much, text is still too sharp though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 The card's shade of black should be a little lighter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The True Ace Attorney Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 That looks awesome. I, personally, think the text box and frame need to be a little darker. Other than that, it's pretty much perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-SJ- Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 I loved everything. It is the most HD Excess Template I have seen until now. Please, I say please, release the template. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [quote name='Essence' timestamp='1298220919' post='5020853'] The card's shade of black should be a little lighter. [/quote] Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 that is a very good job you did there now the details is actually 97% detailed, you just missed out the fact that the textbox is at 85-90% solid and 10-15% transparent and the colour need to be light gray and it will darken slightly from the opacity but even so i love it and someone should kiss you right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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