Quiksilver Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 No, I said we couldn't. It's (I think) the last post of the first page. [b]Pichu[/b]- Not accepted- yet. First off, the personality and bio contradict- if he isn't talking to his parents or even his girlfriend, how can he "always be welcoming new friends" and "happy more of the time"? Also, as I've said, the Money and Items need to be related- you cannot have the maximum amount of money and all that stuff. Look to the Money and Items part of the first post for info on this. Also, I was originally planning to let people do so, but with so many entrees I've decided to limit it to one character per person. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [spoiler=Austin][center][b]Pokemon Trainer Austin Black[/b][/center] [b]AGE:[/b] 14 [b]GENDER:[/b] Male [b]MONEY:[/b] 700 [b]APPEARANCE:[/b] - Height: 5 Foot 1in - Weight: 92lbs - Body Shape: muscular - Hair Style & Color: ratty and messy. red - Eye Color: green - Complexion: white with a little tan - Clothing: Wears headphones around his neck. has a simple purple sweatshirt on with nothing on under it. Sweatshirt is zipped up. wears blue, faded skinny jeans. has black chucks [b]PERSONALITY:[/b] He act kind of emo because his mother just died. He can have a happy attitude when he wants to but is mostly sad. He doesn't really think before he acts unless he's in a Pokemon battle. Is scared easily and doesn't lie. He act fairly shy but is not scared to speak up and be heard [b]BIOGRAPHY:[/b] Austin's parents met each other at a shop in Sunyshore City in Sinnoh. His father is from Golden Island of the Orange Islands and his mother comes from the Unova region. It was love at first sight and they dated for three years. They got married at a church on Golden Island. Soon they had a son named James Levi Black. He was four when Austin Lee Black was born. They all lived on Mandarin Island South. They were all happy then the accident happened. It was Austin's 14th birthday and his party was on the coast of Mandarin S. Austin, James, their father, and two friends were having cake while their mother was swimming. A strong current got her and pulled her under. She drowned soon after. Austin became really depressed after that. He started acting emo and wouldn't talk to his father, brother, and even his girlfriend, Cierra. All day he would sit on his bed and watch TV. James told Austin how much fun a Pokemon Adventure was. Austin started packing for a Pokemon Adventure and told his dad he was ready. Austin got a Pichu that was living under his house and started off..... [b]EQUIPMENT:[/b] Five Pokeballs and a Potion. [center][b]Pokemon[/b][/center] [b]NAME:[/b] Pichu [b]POKEMON SPECIES:[/b] Pichu [b]GENDER:[/b] Male [b]PERSONALITY:[/b] A small hyper Pichu. Is always happy and loves a battle. But he is very shy. [b]ABILITY:[/b] Static [b]MOVESET:[/b] Charge Volt Tackle Encore Bide [/spoiler] is this better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StealthyTyranitar Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [color="#666600"][[/color]center[color="#666600"]][[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Pokemon[/color] [color="#660066"]Trainer Zero Nerox [/color][color="#008800"][b]AGE:[/b] 13 [/color][color="#666600"][[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color]GENDER[color="#666600"]:[/[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"]Male[/color] [color="#666600"][[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color]MONEY[color="#666600"]:[/[/color]b[color="#666600"]] 2000[/color] [color="#666600"][[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color]APPEARANCE[color="#666600"]:[/[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"]-[/color] [color="#660066"]Height[/color][color="#666600"]:[/color] 6'4"[color="#008800"] - Weight: 200 lb. - Body Shape: muscular - Hair Style & Color: It's spiky, like Yugi's, but just blonde. he wedars a fedora to cover it up [/color][color="#666600"]-[/color] [color="#660066"]Eye[/color] [color="#660066"]Color[/color][color="#666600"]:[/color] [color="#666600"]brown [/color][color="#666600"]-[/color] [color="#660066"]Complexion[/color][color="#666600"]:[/color] [color="#666600"]Olive[/color] [color="#666600"]-[/color] [color="#660066"]Clothing[/color][color="#666600"]:[/color] He wears a button down blue and white shirt, with glasses. he also wears jeans [color="#666600"][[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color]PERSONALITY[color="#666600"]:[/[/color]b[color="#666600"]] Zero doesn't[/color] let anything get in his way, because e is determined to beat his parents. One of downfalls is that he never gives-up, though it can be helpful to. He feels that way is because he is tired of losing. He had to train with his parent's pokemon, and he still lost. He was ticked. He wasn't gonna get pushed around anymore [color="#666600"][[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color]BIOGRAPHY[color="#666600"]:[/[/color]b[color="#666600"]] His parents met at a national Pokemon Training Championship. They had very High level pokemon, and tied in the final match. They decided he would start with a fighting type, so they gave birth at the same time as a baby Mankey. He was raised around powerful pokemon that weren't his, and got tired of not having his own. He heard of Orange Islands, and wanted to go. His parents, knowing that he needed to go out on his own, sent him out with 3 Pokeballs, and the untrained Mankey that his parents recieved from the Primeapes. His dream is to have a level 100 Primape (Or Mandrial), and beat one of his parents in a battle. [/color] [color="#008800"][b]EQUIPMENT:[/b] 3 pokeballs,2 potions See above (In Bio) [center][b]Pokemon[/b][/center] [b]NAME:[/b] Breaker[/color] [color="#666600"][[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color]POKEMON SPECIES[color="#666600"]:[/[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"]Mankey [/color][color="#666600"][[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color]GENDER[color="#666600"]:[/[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color] Female [color="#666600"][[/color]b[color="#666600"]][/color]PERSONALITY[color="#666600"]: Breaker is very easy to anger. When angered, Breaker will start throwing random items on the ground at the person/pokemon that made him angry [/color][color="#008800"][b]ABILITY:[/b] Vital Spirit [b]MOVESET[b] Covet, Scratch, Leer, Karate Chop[/color] If you have any problems with the application, take a look at my app and see if that helps. If it doesn't, feel free to ask me. Also, I have a Fakemon Idea. Final Evo of Mankey. abilities: Sturdy, Mold Breaker Evo. at lvl. 40 (Does putting something on devianart count as giving me premission to use it?) [img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs51/f/2009/332/1/6/Fakemon__Mandrial_by_nissemann123456789.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [b]Pichu[/b]- It does, just be sure to check your grammar, okay? Try putting it through Microsoft Word before posting, because you have a few mistakes. Accepted. [b]Kingofmuffins[/b]- Is something wrong with your computer? The code doesn't seem to becoming out right. However, that doesn't matter- I can change it for you. Anyways, accepted. Also, as pertaining towards Mandrial- if they have said yes, you can use it, that I will accept it. If not, I cannot, I'm afraid. At this point, we are [b]NO LONGER ACCEPTING[/b]. Any apps that are submitted will be graciously turned away. However, I will make an exception for three people- [b]Warrior_Tal[/b], [b]Xx\Mew/xX[/b], and [b]RadioKirby[/b]. They have until the end of the week to submit or edit an app. After that time, no apps will be accepted. I will post the first post of the RP soon, and when I do, I will both post a link here and inform all accepted members on their profile page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Corgi Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Edited again. Good now? Or do I got to change the abillity? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 KingOfMuffins, just one thing but it's kind of bugging me. Your character is 13, and yet he's 6'4? I'm 14 and 5'8, and I'm one of the tallest in my year(there are inbetween 5 and 10 that are taller, and of them the tallest is 5'11). 6'4 is, well, freaky. Seriously freaky. Mutant freaky. And there's no explanation for it in the Bio or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzoku Kira- Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Magnet your school must be mostly small people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StealthyTyranitar Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 sorry, i meant 5" 8' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [quote name='Magnet Soldier' timestamp='1298310802' post='5023750'] KingOfMuffins, just one thing but it's kind of bugging me. Your character is 13, and yet he's 6'4? I'm 14 and 5'8, and I'm one of the tallest in my year(there are inbetween 5 and 10 that are taller, and of them the tallest is 5'11). 6'4 is, well, freaky. Seriously freaky. Mutant freaky. And there's no explanation for it in the Bio or anything. [/quote] Magnet, I have a friend who is fourteen and is about that size, so...yeah. She's pretty tall, but she's no mutant. But if you still want to change it, kingofmuffins, you can. [b]Xx\Mew/xX[/b]- Nope, Tyrogue's ability can be Vital Spirit, so it can stay. Congrats. You're accepted. [b]Kingofmuffins[/b]- Actually, I must revise my decision. I cannot accept your app- the Money & Items need to be changed. Look to the Money and Items spoiler for more information. Also, if you could, please copy down the real app- without the colors- so that it is easier to read. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StealthyTyranitar Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [size="3"][font="Calibri"][center][b]Pokemon Trainer Zero Nerox[/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"]AGE: 13[/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"][b]GENDER:[/b] Male [/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"][b]MONEY:[/b] 1550[/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"][b]APPEARANCE:[/b] - Height: 6'4" - Weight: 200 lb. - Body Shape: muscular - Hair Style & Color: It's spiky, like Yugi's, but just blonde. he wedars a fedora to cover it up [/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"]- Eye Color: brown[/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"]- Complexion: Olive [/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"]- Clothing: He wears a button down blue and white shirt, with glasses. he also wears jeans[/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"][b]PERSONALITY:[/b] Zero doesn't let anything get in his way, because e is determined to beat his parents. One of downfalls is that he never gives-up, though it can be helpful to. He feels that way is because he is tired of losing. He had to train with his parent's pokemon, and he still lost. He was ticked. He wasn't gonna get pushed around anymore[/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"][b]BIOGRAPHY:[/b] His parents met at a national Pokemon Training Championship. They had very High level pokemon, and tied in the final match. They decided he would start with a fighting type, so they gave birth at the same time as a baby Mankey. He was raised around powerful pokemon that weren't his, and got tired of not having his own. He heard of Orange Islands, and wanted to go. His parents, knowing that he needed to go out on his own, sent him out with 3 Pokeballs, and the untrained Mankey that his parents recieved from the Primeapes. His dream is to have a level 100 Primape (Or Mandrial), and beat one of his parents in a battle.[/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"]EQUIPMENT: 3 pokeballs,2 potions See above (In Bio) [/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"]Pokemon[/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"] NAME: Breaker [/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"][b]POKEMON SPECIES:[/b] Mankey[/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"][b]GENDER:[/b] Female [/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"][b]PERSONALITY: Breaker is very easy to anger. When angered, Breaker will start throwing random items on the ground at the person/pokemon that made him angry[/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"]ABILITY: Vital Spirit [/font][/size] [size="3"][font="Calibri"][b]MOVESET[b] Covet, Scratch, Leer, Karate Chop[/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [b]Kingofmuffins[/b]- Better, but total amount is incorrect. 3 Poke Balls and 2 Potions don't add up to 450, they add up to 1000. Almost accepted. Brb. Need to take a shower, that I'll finish the IC Thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StealthyTyranitar Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 consider this a edit Money: 1000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 You lot must live in places full of tall people. Here in england, the average height for a 13-14 year old is about 5'6. 6 foot 4 is very-very tall in England. As in, taller than a tall man(My grandad's considered very tall, at 6'3, and he's fully grown.) Anyway, as I said it was just bugging me is all. I not bother about anyone changing or sommat, just wanted to get it of my chest(Metaphorically) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 This may not help, Magnet, but when I was 13/14, I was just around 6 feet tall. Of course, I was one of the tallest people at my school. So...6' or more seems a little...tall to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [quote name='Luxray' timestamp='1298303017' post='5023507'] [b]Pichu[/b]- It does, just be sure to check your grammar, okay? Try putting it through Microsoft Word before posting, because you have a few mistakes. Accepted. [/quote] Thanks Luxray! I'll spell check more often! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Well I'll be. I'm small. I thought I was tall.Anyway, lets get back on topic. Start the Rp already! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 The RP Thread needs to be posted! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzoku Kira- Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Give the guy time he isn't even online ATM. He said he would post when he gets back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 I know. It'll be posted later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [center][b]Pokemon Trainer Kusajin Owato[/b][/center] [b]AGE:[/b] 25 [b]GENDER:[/b] Male [b]MONEY:[/b] [img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/8/8c/Pok%C3%A9monDollar.png[/img]0 [b]APPEARANCE:[/b] - Height: 6'4" - Weight: 130lbs. - Body Shape: Tall and lanky. - Hair Style & Color: He has somewhat moppy brown hair. He takes no care to fix his hair, or even shower at that. He has dandruff, but often succeeds in hiding it. He also sports facial hair. All over his face. - Eye Color: Kusajin is heterochromic; his right eye is blue, while his left eye changes color with his emotion. Under normal conditions, it's brown. - Complexion: [s]Rainbow[/s] Somewhat tan, mocha colored. - Clothing: Kusajin wears a tattered cowhide jacket, with tears in the sleeves. On the left collar, he wears a hand-me-down badge that his mother won from the Natsukan Gym when she was young. His faded blue jeans are also well-worn, with a multitude of tears here and there. [b]BIOGRAPHY:[/b] Kusajin lived with with his single mother on Mikan Island. Unable to keep a job, she tried to win some money through battling. She managed to make a small income, but not enough. After about two years, they were both evicted from their small home, and were forced to live on the streets. After about four months, his mother fell terminally ill. Unable to afford treatment, Kusajin seek help from the others he met in the ghetto, and even the native Pokemon. One that was specifically helpful was a Betbeter that frequently came by. The other people and Pokemon would shun it, due to it's stench, but it returned during the night, when no one was there. Neither Kusajin nor his mother minded Grimer's odor. Despite the many treatments, his mother still passed. Kusajin ran away, and snuck onto a boat leaving the island. Unbeknownst to him, the Grimer followed him. They both landed on Hamlin Island. Both Kusajin and Grimer, whom he named Better, for short, live on the streets of the island, living off of whatever they can manage to acquire. [b]PERSONALITY:[/b] Kusajin tends to be very isolated, due to the fact that, well, he stinks. He and Better share pretty much the same scent. And no one likes Better's scent. They both sit in alleys, but occasionally will battle visiting trainers, attempting to gain some money through wagering. He is also very crafty, able to make use of nearly anything. [b]EQUIPMENT:[/b] 1 Pokeball [center][b]Pokemon[/b][/center] [b]NAME:[/b] Better [b]POKEMON SPECIES:[/b] Grimer [b]GENDER:[/b] Male [b]PERSONALITY:[/b] Better loves food. Whether it be rotten, half-eaten fish sandwiches, he'll eat it. Also, like his trainer, he is isolated, not interacting much with other Pokemon or Trainers. [b]ABILITY:[/b] Stench [b]MOVESET:[/b] Acid Armor, Acid Bomb, Minimize, Flamethrower Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 [b]RadioKirby[/b]- Not accepted, for two things. One- I need all characters to start on Hamlin Island. Two- I'll need you to stop referring to things by their Japanese terms, just for convenience's sake. Until you change these things, I cannot accept you. In other news, [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/240663-pokemon-high-seas-miracle-ic-threadstartednot-accepting/"]we have started![/url] Hooray! Sorry it took so long, but I found out I had so many chores to do, in so little time. In this post, just establish yourself on the island somewhere, and don't worry- we'll get to the action soon enough! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzoku Kira- Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Yeah first post in the IC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Fix'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Just posted my first IC. Man, it's tiring playing a kid with a bunch of energy, but I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Haha, I know, right? [b]RadioKirby[/b]- Thanks! Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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