Renzoku Kira- Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 I like it Pichu, and you should keep writing it. It is nice you don't have it sticking to the normal PMD openings you did throw your own twist on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazooie Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [quote name='legolover09' timestamp='1298252963' post='5022000'] I really feel like you guys are being sarcastic, but know, I don't know. If you aren't being sarcastic, then that is just sad. [/quote] Dear sir, are you implying that this masterpiece is of a lower quality then what we make it out to be? Hogwash. This story is the most engaging and entertaining story to ever been seen on the internet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Thanks guys! check my profile for a sneek peak of chapter 2! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [quote name='legolover09' timestamp='1298252963' post='5022000'] I really feel like you guys are being sarcastic, but know, I don't know. If you aren't being sarcastic, then that is just sad. [/quote] That is the most preposterous accusation I've heard had to come read with my naked eyes! Do you doubt the great gift that is Pichu? [i]Twig, stop being an ass. He can write better than you, so stop being an annoyance.[/i] Why I was only complimenting! What's wrong with that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [quote name='Twig' timestamp='1298237645' post='5021519'] What is this? A fanfic praised by YCM's finest members? It must be a must read! [/quote] Haha. Yes, Twiggeus, the story is low quality. But its a story nonetheless. While you are in your right to criticize it, not all fanfics need to be all touched up and pretty. >:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 I must be in the minority. The minority of people of people that think this fic sucks. Unfortunately, it can't be locked for being script format. Because as it is terrible with putting pictures of the pokemon up, it isn't a script. Script-like, but that isn't against the rules. Ah well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [quote name='legolover09' timestamp='1298264731' post='5022480'] I must be in the minority. The minority of people of people that think this fic sucks. Unfortunately, it can't be locked for being script format. Because as it is terrible with putting pictures of the pokemon up, it isn't a script. Script-like, but that isn't against the rules. Ah well. [/quote] How dare you request this glorious buffet of words to be locked! You must be an illiterate if you can't see the glory in this marvelous, godlike fan fic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Why lock this! Im trying to start and finish a fan fic here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 bumped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 I love how you gave away the dark figure's appearance immediately. Great writing tactic, Pichu! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 +rep for you. I love MD. It's my favorite style of Pokemon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 ...... [b]A wise person once said if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all. In the sarcastic posters case, don't say anything.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 No, no, no, no, no! This cannot be. I have not read Chapter 2 yet. Please refrain a day or two before posting Chapter 3 so I have time to catch up on your lengthy and long-winded chapters. I just do not have the time today to read Chapter 2, and I hate when I am behind two or more chapters on a fiction I really enjoy. [quote name='legolover09' timestamp='1298252963' post='5022000'] I really feel like you guys are being sarcastic, but know, I don't know. If you aren't being sarcastic, then that is just sad. [/quote] You're retarded. [quote name='legolover09' timestamp='1298264731' post='5022480'] I must be in the minority. The minority of people of people that think this fic sucks. Unfortunately, it can't be locked for being script format. Because as it is terrible with putting pictures of the pokemon up, it isn't a script. Script-like, but that isn't against the rules. Ah well. [/quote] Why lock this? The storyline is good, the grammar is excellent, and the author pumps tone and figurative language everywhere. Who gives a damn if it is script-format? It's better than anything you can piece together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 thanks Dark and don't worry. I haven't even started chapter 3 yet! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 And the mysterious dark figure of mysteriousness was revealed in the second chapter, one chapter after his mysteriousness. In fact, this mystery pokemon was a Pikachu. Seriously, though, it wasn't any sort of legendary, it was a stinking Pikachu. The next thing you know, the pickachu's aims are to evolve ever pichu in the world. But, by reading and commenting on this fic, I reward his laziness and stupid writing. This thing is so worthless. It is just dialogue, with perhaps one piece of description. But know I shall give pichu some advice. Not to leave, or to stop writing this, but one thing that would make this better is if you stopped putting the pokemons' heads before them when they talk. But I shall probably never comment here again, unless this, the most glaring of all the flaws, is fixed. But I probably won't post again anyways. Your team of fans has scared me off. *runs away* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzoku Kira- Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 I see no part in there where it states Pikachu is the bad guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 [quote name='legolover09' timestamp='1298353398' post='5025638'] And the mysterious dark figure of mysteriousness was revealed in the second chapter, one chapter after his mysteriousness. In fact, this mystery pokemon was a Pikachu. Seriously, though, it wasn't any sort of legendary, it was a stinking Pikachu. The next thing you know, the pickachu's aims are to evolve ever pichu in the world. But, by reading and commenting on this fic, I reward his laziness and stupid writing. This thing is so worthless. It is just dialogue, with perhaps one piece of description. But know I shall give pichu some advice. Not to leave, or to stop writing this, but one thing that would make this better is if you stopped putting the pokemons' heads before them when they talk. But I shall probably never comment here again, unless this, the most glaring of all the flaws, is fixed. But I probably won't post again anyways. Your team of fans has scared me off. *runs away* [/quote] *watches you run away* Dont come back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 bumpie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I am Fate. Embrace me. Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 You mean the dark figure is a...? That's not possible![quote name='legolover09' timestamp='1298353398' post='5025638'] And the mysterious dark figure of mysteriousness was revealed in the second chapter, one chapter after his mysteriousness. In fact, this mystery pokemon was a Pikachu. Seriously, though, it wasn't any sort of legendary, it was a stinking Pikachu. The next thing you know, the pickachu's aims are to evolve ever pichu in the world. But, by reading and commenting on this fic, I reward his laziness and stupid writing. This thing is so worthless. It is just dialogue, with perhaps one piece of description. But know I shall give pichu some advice. Not to leave, or to stop writing this, but one thing that would make this better is if you stopped putting the pokemons' heads before them when they talk. But I shall probably never comment here again, unless this, the most glaring of all the flaws, is fixed. But I probably won't post again anyways. Your team of fans has scared me off. *runs away* [/quote] You stupid little...! This is writing of only the finest caliber! How dare you insult the great pichu?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 No don't call me the great Pichu. we are all equal and one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I am Fate. Embrace me. Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 Ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Dark Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 I apologize for not posting as actively as I should. I have just read Chapter 3 (it took a lot longer to process the deep symbolic overtone you used in this chapter), and I must say you are really one for cliffhangers. Even though a major plot progression was revealed, you still left us yearning for more. As I have said before, I am hooked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 Thank you Dark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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