۞Jolteon۞ Posted February 15, 2011 Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 V1: [img]http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4143/ikething.png[/img] V2: [img]http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/1458/ikething2.png[/img] Have I improved since last time? (Look in my sig for "last time") CnCplz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted February 15, 2011 Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 I liked V2 better, and yes, you have improved. I see there is not too much light, because I CAN see the thing. But what is this ? [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/24ax2kh.png[/img] Thats all I point out. Other than that, good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted February 15, 2011 Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 Kind sir, you have improved by about .3%. (Or 30%.) Two problems, though: I can see the little box [b]War Chess[/b] pointed out, and (something I shouldn't see), I can [b]clearly[/b] see all of your c4ds. I shouldn't be able to. They should blend, not stick out. [b]V1[/b] seems better, though. But then again, I don't like blue very much, which influences my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted February 15, 2011 Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 [quote name='Future Paradise' timestamp='1297731556' post='5009402'] Kind sir, you have improved by about .3%. (Or 30%.) Two problems, though: I can see the little box [b]War Chess[/b] pointed out, and (something I shouldn't see), I can [b]clearly[/b] see all of your c4ds. I shouldn't be able to. They should blend, not stick out. [b]V1[/b] seems better, though. But then again, I don't like blue very much, which influences my opinion. [/quote] I like how you fail at math... LOL .3% is not 30%. Anyway... My first comment on this is... OMG IT'S SO FREAKING HIPSTER... A few more triangles and this could have been a legit hipster piece. Now time for the real CnC. The headband on your render is poorly rendered or became over-sharpened(needs to be fixed asap). Your piece lacks any depth and the overlay of star stocks on the render just destroy it. The lack of depth is not in your favor either. Lastly, your lightning needs work big time, for it is completely butchered, but also destroys the lighting on the render. Personally, I'm not a big fan on this piece but I have tried to judge from a non-biased position. Keep trying though, work hard, read more tutorials, improve your design eye, do some warm-ups and better learn the composition of photoshop so you can work quicker, allowing for you to spend more time on your pieces. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 ^^That's why I'm not an Algebra Major. =D Something I forgot to mention before is that the c4ds look, in a way, like a space BG. I don't know why, it just does....is it supposed to be like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
۞Jolteon۞ Posted February 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 I just noticed I failed to render the half rendered render....FAIL Anyway that explains the little box I hoped nobody would notice Btw, if you can [b]CLEARLY[/b] see my renders, point them out.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 Mmmm... see you've been trying out my nebula technique. I would suggest maybe adding in some C4Ds if you can but otherwise fine. Agree with the others, the box is wrong but you've said what it is so fine. The stocks are far too overpowering and cloud the render. It needs a sense of depth too. Some others' PSDs and tutorials will help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 I said [b]c4ds[/b], not renders. And from what I can see (excuse me if I miss one or two), I can see clouds, maybe a little lighting, possibly some sparkles. And don't worry about the little box, either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 Where is the Sig Concept? I only see a poorly executed rectangular Avatar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
۞Jolteon۞ Posted February 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 Quite a big avatar, you think? Any way, I meant c4d, and you missed- nvm, I'm not getting into this, Thank you all for your feedback.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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