Şäŗôķů Posted February 14, 2011 Report Share Posted February 14, 2011 Here are some of my pokemon splices. [spoiler=Splices]1.[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/2im7r4j.jpg[/IMG] 2.[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/13yjup3.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charon: Ferryman of Styx Posted February 14, 2011 Report Share Posted February 14, 2011 Those are cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted February 15, 2011 Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 Wasn't going to give critique originally, but since I voted, I might as well give my reasoning. I won't go into huge detail or anything and just use bullet points instead. The first one: - The splice is just messy. Too many parts that just don't match in the right locations. - The Wings are tiny and useless on a big metal body. - I've seen the two Steelix heads as shoulders one too many times now. - The shoulder in general are just copy flipped. They should be such perfect mirrors of each other. The textures are all over the place. Cloth coming from head, steel shoulders, rock arms, it all doesn't match well. - Doesn't feel very even of a mix. - The general shape and position of this guy is confusing. The head seems to be floating, the shoulders are huge, the arms seem extra long, short tiny feet. Just all doesn't feel to flow together right. The second one: - The bushes aren't very even. Their placement could be better. - The color scheme isn't too great. Two different green shades and a little bit of red just doesn't work. - You have some unrecolored borders. - The head isn't positioned properly on the neck. - Texture issues again. Porygon2's body is too smooth for something with bug like or plan like skin generally. - Hard to tell what it's suppose to be. Does it fly or float? Is it a bug or a plat? What kind of creature is it? That would be the gist of why I don't like them. They have a lot of room for improvement, and neither can I say I like or think are anything good. You do have potential to be good, but be careful. You can't let YCM's habit of blindly throwing out compliments let your ego inflate too much. Keep on practicing and improving your skills. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Şäŗôķů Posted February 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 O.k. Jappio. I'll keep practicing. Plus these were a result of a long time of not splicing, so I made them and posted them to get some critique. So thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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