Joshex Posted February 13, 2011 Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 hi everyone these are two cards I made, I plan to do 3D models of the dragons, just have to draw them out first. that process will take a while cause I'm lazy.. though I am a fast modeler so I could have a dragon done by 1 weeks time if I really wanted XD Gold-Eyes heavenly metal dragon You can return to your hand 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Remove-From-Play-Zone to Special Summon this card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster except "Gold-Eyes Heavenly Metal Dragon" from your Remove-From-Play-Zone, Deck or Extra Deck. Green-eyes jealousy dragon At least 1 Dragon-Type Tuner(s) +1 LV10 Dragon-Type monster. This card cannot be taken control of by a player who's deck has 30% or more of, card/monster destruction/remove from play, effect damage or attack prohibition cards. Thrice per your and your opponent(s) turn(s) you may permanently negate the effect of any card(s), Once per turn you may choose to have this card gain the effect of 1 negated card. if this card battles a monster who's ATK or DEF is above it's original value, this card gains that value+1 in ATK or DEF. for longer versions please read down. Link to comment
SunshineSoldier Posted February 13, 2011 Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 Don't post links. Those aren't Written cards. Try reading the rules. Link to comment
Joshex Posted February 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 [quote name='Dingo_is_cool' timestamp='1297579961' post='5006239'] Don't post links. Those aren't Written cards. Try reading the rules. [/quote] I thought the definition of a written card according to the forums was one that had text only and no picture yet. also as for the links sorry, I wanted to do them as pictures but couldn't. Link to comment
.Nu-13 Posted February 15, 2011 Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 But that doesn't mean that you're supposed to put generated cards with blank images. Look at the other topics here and see how a written card should look Link to comment
JoShToFu Posted February 15, 2011 Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 theyre isnt anything on the cards Link to comment
Joshex Posted February 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 ok sorry here let me repost them Gold-Eyes Heavenly Metal Dragon -Divine- LV 10 Dragon/ Effect You can return to your hand 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Remove-From-Play-Zone to Special Summon this card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster except "Gold-Eyes Heavenly Metal Dragon" from your Remove-From-Play-Zone, Deck or Extra Deck. ATK: 2800 DEF: 2400 Green-Eyes Jealousy Dragon -Divine- LV 12 Dragon/ Synchro/ Effect At least 1 Dragon-Type Tuner(s) +1 LV10 Dragon-Type monster. This card cannot be taken control of by a player who's deck has 30% or more of, card/monster destruction/remove from play, effect damage or attack prohibition cards. Thrice per your and your opponent(s) turn(s) you may permanently negate the effect of any card(s), Once per turn you may choose to have this card gain the effect of 1 negated card. if this card battles a monster who's ATK or DEF is above it's original value, this card gains that value+1 in ATK or DEF. ATK: 3000 DEF: 3000 comments please Link to comment
Leirondo Essen Darron Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 Don't you have a photo theyre isnt anything on the cards oh i see it MY JUDGMENT ON THESE CARDS. @Gold-Eyes Heavenly Metal Dragon -Divine EFFECT:100% ATTACK:34% NAME REPLY:46% @Green-Eyes Jealousy Dragon -Divine- EFFECT:23% ATTACK:54% NAME REPLY:78% That's my rating plz fix those Link to comment
Joshex Posted February 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 anyone else have any comments? I appreciate the comments, I made the cards the way they are for reasons gold-eyes is basically red-eyes darkness metal dragon, but it can't special summon from your hand or grave. instead it summons from your deck and remove from play zone. and it is summoned by taking a Dragon to your hand from your remove from play zone (which may be difficult for some to get a dragon there) I suppose the name could be better, what are your suggestions. Link to comment
Bringerofcake Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 [quote name='Joshex' timestamp='1297881724' post='5012327'] Gold-Eyes Heavenly Metal Dragon -Divine- LV 10 Dragon/ Effect You can return to your hand 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Remove-From-Play-Zone to Special Summon this card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster except "Gold-Eyes Heavenly Metal Dragon" from your Remove-From-Play-Zone, Deck or Extra Deck. ATK: 2800 DEF: 2400 [/quote] Before I give my review of this card, I'd like to quote something you said recently: [quote]it is summoned by taking a Dragon to your hand from your remove from play zone (which may be difficult for some to get a dragon there)[/quote] Now, you know about REDMD. Then you can't say that it's difficult to get Reverse!REDMD out, because the primary method of Summoning RDMD is removing a Dragon on your field from play. Now, on to the card itself: Broken. A prime example of too much benefit (summoning a Dragon from almost ANYWHERE) for too little cost (the Summon cost is laughable and it's not even a Nomi or Semi-Nomi). I could pop a REDMD from my Deck, and then pop Blue-Eyes from my Graveyard, and then proceed to win in one turn. Broke and bannable. [quote name='Joshex' timestamp='1297881724' post='5012327'] Green-Eyes Jealousy Dragon -Divine- LV 12 Dragon/ Synchro/ Effect At least 1 Dragon-Type Tuner(s) +1 LV10 Dragon-Type monster. This card cannot be taken control of by a player who's deck has 30% or more of, card/monster destruction/remove from play, effect damage or attack prohibition cards. Thrice per your and your opponent(s) turn(s) you may permanently negate the effect of any card(s), Once per turn you may choose to have this card gain the effect of 1 negated card. if this card battles a monster who's ATK or DEF is above it's original value, this card gains that value+1 in ATK or DEF. ATK: 3000 DEF: 3000 [/quote] ...How on earth are you supposed to calculate that first effect? Do you look through your opponent's deck and count the number of destruction cards and calculate? Either way, you might as well change it to "Control of this card cannot switch", because most everyone runs cards of that variety in spades. Then both players can negate 3 cards per turn. Well, if I were facing down this card, you know what I'd negate? The monster itself! (Well, not before stopping 2 of your cards, making it more broken that Shi En.) Then, we have a Majestic effect, which isn't all that bad, considering the rest of what's here. The final effect is a ruling nightmare. Think about it. I have The Wicked Avatar, whose ATK is constantly the highest on the field. It has no original ATK, so its ATK is always higher than ?. These 2 cards battle. Your monster increases to Avatar's ATK +1, then Avatar goes 100 beyond that, then jealousy goes 1 beyond that, then Avatr goes 100 beyond that...it's an infinite loop. Not to mention that 1 calculations make Life Points difficult to calculate (even more than normal). I should also mention that this is easily summoned with that monster you have above this one: Use its effect to Special Summon a Level 2 Dragon Tuner from your Deck. All in all, I don't like these. They make Dragons stupidly fast with stupid amounts of beatstick power for little to no cost. I mean more so than usual. Link to comment
Joshex Posted February 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 [quote name='A Veritable Truth' timestamp='1297965800' post='5014576'] Before I give my review of this card, I'd like to quote something you said recently: Now, you know about REDMD. Then you can't say that it's difficult to get Reverse!REDMD out, because the primary method of Summoning RDMD is removing a Dragon on your field from play. Now, on to the card itself: Broken. A prime example of too much benefit (summoning a Dragon from almost ANYWHERE) for too little cost (the Summon cost is laughable and it's not even a Nomi or Semi-Nomi). I could pop a REDMD from my Deck, and then pop Blue-Eyes from my Graveyard, and then proceed to win in one turn. Broke and bannable.[/quote] if it's broke it needs fixing; I can already think of a decent fix for this; Gold-Eyes Heavenly Metal Dragon -Divine- LV 10 Dragon/ Effect You can return to your hand 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Remove-From-Play-Zone to Special Summon this card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster except "Gold-Eyes Heavenly Metal Dragon" or "Red-Eyes Darkness Meltal Dragon" from your Remove-From-Play-Zone or deck (these monsters summoned this way may not be used for fusion or synchro summons with-in 2 turns of their summon). ATK: 2800 DEF: 2400 [quote name='A Veritable Truth' timestamp='1297965800' post='5014576']...How on earth are you supposed to calculate that first effect? Do you look through your opponent's deck and count the number of destruction cards and calculate? Either way, you might as well change it to "Control of this card cannot switch", because most everyone runs cards of that variety in spades. Then both players can negate 3 cards per turn. Well, if I were facing down this card, you know what I'd negate? The monster itself! (Well, not before stopping 2 of your cards, making it more broken that Shi En.) Then, we have a Majestic effect, which isn't all that bad, considering the rest of what's here. The final effect is a ruling nightmare. Think about it. I have The Wicked Avatar, whose ATK is constantly the highest on the field. It has no original ATK, so its ATK is always higher than ?. These 2 cards battle. Your monster increases to Avatar's ATK +1, then Avatar goes 100 beyond that, then jealousy goes 1 beyond that, then Avatr goes 100 beyond that...it's an infinite loop. Not to mention that 1 calculations make Life Points difficult to calculate (even more than normal). I should also mention that this is easily summoned with that monster you have above this one: Use its effect to Special Summon a Level 2 Dragon Tuner from your Deck. All in all, I don't like these. They make Dragons stupidly fast with stupid amounts of beatstick power for little to no cost. I mean more so than usual. [/quote] first effect, yes it was supposed to be that you went through thier deck, but yeah why not fix the first effect with "it can;t switch control" second effect, no only the controlling player can negate effects 3 effects per thier and thier opponent's turns (total) so if they negate 3 during thier own turn they can;t negate anything during their opponent's. final effect, yeah well if wicked avatar has that effect than it would be unfair for it to be the only card with an effect like that. infinite loop? no in that case the ruling would be the battle between them is a draw. but in this case instead of them both being destroyed, neither is destroyed and maybe both players take 1 damage or something to avoid it being a road block.. Link to comment
Joshex Posted February 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 Updates: Green-Eyes Jealousy Dragon -Divine- LV12 Dragon/ Synchro/ Effect At least 1 Dragon-Type Tuner(s) +1 LV10 Dragon-Type monster. this card cannot switch control and cannot be used in a deck with 33% or more card/monster destruction/remove from play, attack prohibition or effect damage. Thrice per your and your opponent(s) turn(s) you may permanently negate the effect of any card(s), Once per turn you may choose to have this card gain the effect of 1 negated card. if this card battles a monster who's ATK or DEF is above it's original value, this card gains that value+1 in ATK or DEF. ATK: 3000 DEF: 3000 Gold-Eyes Heavenly Metal Dragon -Divine- LV10 Dragon/ Effect You can return to your hand 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Remove-From-Play-Zone to Special Summon this card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster except "Gold-Eyes Heavenly Metal Dragon" or "Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon" from your Remove-From-Play-Zone, Deck. Monsters summoned this way cannot be used for fusion or synchro summons with-in 1 turn. ATK: 2800 DEF: 2400 Link to comment
Joshex Posted April 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2011 More card Ideas we all saw the card Negative Energy Generator used in the anime http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Negative_Energy_Generator so for dragon decks I came up with: Dragon Grace Generator Spell- Equip Spell Target 1 Dragon type monster you control and double it's ATK and DEF, other equip, continuous or field spells or traps may not be used on the equipped monster. Link to comment
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