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[quote name='Hayate Ayasaki' timestamp='1305060558' post='5201463']
Sure, that's now our next project, after the current one.
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Thank you. But you might actually need to wait, because I just realized what I posted wasn't the REDUX version I had wrote up... So I'm going to have to try and fix it as soon as possible...
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Something to tide you over, as you wait for the next riffview. Me and a friend on skype riff a Blaz Blue fic. Enjoy.

[spoiler=Oh god, why.]
One evening Noel was going around the city to see if anyone has seen Ragna the Bloodedge. As always there was no sign of him.

[B]Dio: And so this story ends GOOD NIGHT.[/B]
[B]Drill: Already you can see this author isn't afraid to make bold choices. Look at them sticking it to proper tenses.[/B]

" Man this stinks. No one has seen him."
[B]Drill: No, what stinks is this story.[/B]
[B]Dio: Not to mention that this author follows the time-honored tradition of reiterating what the text says. No, wait, that's not time
honored, that's despised beyond all measure.
Drill: REDUNDANCY AHOY![/B]

Noel kept traveling until she heard a noise near Litchi's clinic. Jin Kisaragi and Ragna were at it again.

[B]Dio: And so, story conflict solved. THE END? I wish. I truly, truly wish.
Drill: Jin and Ragna at it again indeed. Talkin' bout that FABULOUS BROTHA LOVIN'~[/B]

Litchi on the other hand wanted them to leave. " Listen here you two, this is a clinic not a battleground."

[B]Dio: "Dammit, men, I'm a doctor, not a fight officiant!"
Drill: Personally, I'm enjoying how the author isn't bothering to describe the characters to people not familiar with the series. I can pretend they might suck less than in the canon story.[/B]

Litchi went unheard by the two warriors.

[B]Dio: Much like the voice of reason in the author's mind.
Drill: If only Litchi went unheard in the actual games. Or the author did now.[/B]

" What's wrong Ragna scared you'll accidentally destroy this worthless piece of crap." Litchi was mad. Litchi used her pole and bashed Jin in the head.

[B]Drill: The wonders of futa.
Dio: So, wait, did Jin call the clinic crap or did Litchi?
Drill: There's two answers to that question sir. The first is Jin. The second is to not care and save some of that IQ.[/B]

" Don't make fun of my clinic punk." Seeing this as a opportunity Ragna left." Noel arrived shortly.

[B]Dio: UNNECESSARY QUOTATION MARKS HO
Drill: Noel arrived, now reborn as a 'shortly' midget.[/B]

" Where is Ragna Ms Litchi." " You just missed him but he went that way."

[B]Drill: You also missed the punctuation.
Dio: "And that's DOCTOR Litchi to you!"[/B]

Noel bowed and ran. " I'm coming for you Ragna."

[B]Dio: Whatcha gonna do~Whatcha gonna do when Noel come for you?
Drill: COPS. KAGUTSUCHI EDITION.[/B]

Tired and hurt Ragna took shelter at some abandon house

[B]Dio: PROOFREAD[/B]

when Noel busted through the door.

[B]Drill: "OH s*** ITS THE POPO!"[/B]

"Damn Nol, leave me alone!" Ragna pulled out his blade. Noel got her weapon and got ready.
[B]Dio: So, apparently, there's a guy named Nol at the door with Noel.

Drill: I'm not sure if this is just crappy capitalization (NOL) or crappy spelling (Noel)[/B]

Ragna charged and noel countered. Noel was able to get him with a few good shots but she missed most of them. The missed shots was weakening the building.

[B]Dio: Such intense action.
Drill: This story is officially fiction. Noel actually did something. THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE.[/B]

With one mighty swing Ragna knocked out her weapons. Ragna dropped his weapon and punched her in the face.

[B]Dio: "I AM A MAN! *punch*"
Drill: Take THAT Double Standard![/B]

" Darn you Ragna." Noel charged at Ragna and Ragna tripped her.

[B]Dio: Nyuk, nyuk, nyuk. Slimeball.
Drill: There we go. Noel is being useless again.
Dio: Also note the use of darn when damn was used before quite liberally.[/B]

Then Ragna noticed the house was falling apart. Ragna grabbed his sword and left.

[B]Dio: "b****, Ragna out."
Drill: Bringin' da house down![/B]

Noel tried to follow but her leg gfot stuck. " Help me."

[B]Dio: "I can't spell a three letter word. Help me."
Drill: The author has to create this word, gfot, to prove that they are still an individual in this cold world of conformity we live in today.[/B]

Ragna knew he was going to regret this but he helped her but the rubble came down. Ragna got them out just in time but the rubble knocked Noel out.

[B]Dio: So...they went out, then a random piece of rubble flew at her head?
Drill: Rubble is the most accurate force in the universe. It's the exact opposite of this author's grammar.[/B]

When Noel woke she found out she was in a nice warm bed. Then when she turned her head she saw Ragna by the fire warming up.

[B]Dio: As opposed to cooling down?
Drill: My Porn-senses are tingling~[/B]

"Why am I here Ragna." "I couldn't just leave you there to die. I'm not that evil.

[B]Dio: "No, I'll leave that evil to the writer."
Drill: May the author's computer be cast into the fires of Mordor![/B]

"owwwww." " Whats wrong. "My feet hurt like hell."

[B]Dio: Again with the statement-questions.
Drill: They can't hurt as bad as my BRAIN.[/B]

" Well chasing me all day would do that to you. Want a massage?" Noel was stunned by the request.

[B]Dio: As were we. WAT.
Drill: My Porn-senses never fail! ...what? It's PG-13? GODDAMMIT.
THEN WHAT IS THIS s***?[/B]

" Are you sure?" " Yeah, I have nothing better to do."

[B]Dio: Neither do we, apparently.
Drill: Speak for yourself. I could be looking at ACTUAL porn.
Best part? It probably would have a better plot than this.[/B]

Noel removed her boots and Ragna started the massage. " Man I have to admit your really good." Ragna said this is easy.

[B]Dio: So, the author is speaking here.
Drill: Actually too plain and stupid for a witty comment. Continue.[/B]

During the massage Noel was moaning.

[B]Dio: Ah, quick, before we continue. How old is this chick?
Drill: Appearance-wise, 16. Plot-wise, younger. f*** BB and it's clone bullshit.
Dio: Wow. Pedo author, much?
Drill: Least it's not Rachel. NEXT.[/B]

" Seems like you like this a lot." Noel started to pop her toes. This helped relieve her pain. "Man this feels great."

[B]Drill: The only thing I'm gonna pop is a cap in the author's ass.
HAND ME THE GUNS. WHICH GUNS YOU ASK? ALL THE GUNS.
Dio: PUT YA GUNZ ON[/B]

Ragna popped all her toes and Noel got out the baby oil.

[B]Dio: WHOA, WHOA, WHOA, HOLD UP.
Drill: Bow-chika-wow-wow~[/B]

"Can you spread this on my feet?" Noel asked in a cute smile. Ragna agreed and started to rub it in.

[B]Dio: Awkwaaaaaard.
Drill: Time to Prof. Drill to make the plot even more creepy! Noel is a clone of this dude's kidnapped kid sister.
Actual canon. God, f*** BB.
Dio: ...just...why.
Drill: As they say in Japan, "Incest is best, so put your sister to the test!"[/B]

"Ha ha ha."

[B]Dio: What a funny story, Mark.[/B]

"What's so funny." Ragna asked confused. " Well that tickles." Ragna smiled and when he was done he started to tickle her." HA HA HA HA HA HA HA THIS TICKLES BAD HA HA HA."

[B]Drill: I got nothing to say here. Tidus, Yuna, how about you two?
[color="purple"]"HA HA HA HA H-"[/color]
Drill: You're done.
Dio: There's so much emotion in the words that it needs to be in all caps.[/B]

Noel was pounding on the bed hard.

[B]Dio: ...good God, man!
Drill: Remember kiddos, massaging a girls feet is the equivalent of sex. So always wear rubber gloves.[/B]

With the baby oil on her feet Ragna's fingers were like a figure skater on ice.

[B]Dio: Or, you know, like fingers on baby oil.
Drill: Blades of Glory, EAT YOUR HEART OUT![/B]

Noel's feet were very ticklish and she was helpless against Ragna's assault. After a few minutes Ragna brought out a feather duster and attackek Noels feet once more.

[B]Dio: Attackek. Sounds like a fighting style.
Drill: Behold, the Hammerspace Feather Duster! FEAR IT.
Dio: ATTACKEK STYLE-FEATHERY DOOM![/B]

" ENOUGH ALREADY HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA PLEASE STOP!" Ragna stopped immediately.

[B]Dio: Imagine if this was in a battle.
"PLEASE, STOP!"
"Ok."
"...*KILL* That was an easy win."
Drill: LAUGHALITY.
[color="purple"]"HA HA HA H-"[/color]
Drill: NOT NOW YOU FFX MORONS.[/B]

"Can you go back to massaging please?" Ragna started to massage her feet nicely.

[B]Drill: Say it with me...
BIG LIPPED ALIGATOR MOMENT~
Dio: A BIG LIPPED ALIGATOR MOMENT! *HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!*[/B]

Thanks alot Ragna." "Welcome." After a quick massage

[B]Dio: Cut off sentence? Is the story over yet?
Drill: We can only dream Dio... we can only dream. *manly tear*[/B]

Noel came up with an idea.

[B]Drill: NO.
NO.
Dio: "Ragna, are you pondering what I'm pondering?"
Drill: NO STOP THE STORY ITS DONE WHY MUST YOU CRUSH MY DREAMS?![/B]

"Do you want to go grab a bite Ragna?" "Sure Noel." The pair left to the Diner.

[B]Dio: Oh man, I love going to the Diner! Same with the Mall and the Bar.
Drill: Jam Kuradoberi is gonna be mad at them.
[color="red"]"WHY YOU NO EAT AT JAM'S RESTUARANT!?"[/color]
Drill: And thus began a rampage claiming both of their lives. THE END.[/B]

"Ragna can you not tell Jin about this?" "Your secrets safe with me." The two spent all evening with each other.

[B]Dio: No need to elaborate, author.
Drill: Why would Noel worry about Jin finding out? Ragna would be the cheating bisexual lover.
Dio: ...it's over? OH THANK YOU O GREAT LOKI, IT'S OVER!
Drill: Well... I for one welcome my newfound brain aneurysms due to this retarded plot. Really, all it was missing was time travel bullshit.
Dio: Bad grammar? Check. Horrible plot? Check. Wasted time I'll never get back? CHECKAROONIE.
Drill: Well, they somehow managed to take the crap characters of Blazblue and make them CRAPPIER. Achievements in failure right here folks. But seriously, f*** Blazblue, f*** time travel, and f*** THIS FIC.
Dio: One last word on the matter.
I WILL NEVER PLAY BLAZ BLUE BECAUSE OF THIS, SO HELP ME GOD.
Drill: I'm no reviewer in particular. I read the bullshit because I'm apparently a masochist. GOOD NIGHT EVERYBODY, TIP YOUR WAITRESS!
Dio: PEACE[/B][/spoiler]

Also, apologies. The swears get automatically censored. WE SWORE A LOT.
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And, at the risk of double posting, another.

[spoiler=Dead Fiction]

[b]Dio: Hello people of YCM! I'm Dio, this is Drill (s'up?)-and this is-

[color=#ee4a2d]I can introduce myself, thank you very much! Name's Wade Wilson, but you can call me Deadpool. Not Deadpoo. GOD DAMMIT, PEOPLE, THERE WEREN'T ENOUGH NUMBERS!
[/color]
Drill: And tonight, we got something special for ya! TWO RIFFS IN ONE! Yes, we riff two Deadpool fics with the Merc himself here as we try to answer an ancient question: Can we make a riff more retarded than the actual fics?

[color=#ee4a2d]I say-yes.
[/color]
Drill: So, sit back, relax, and pray to your respective false deities that this will be as painless as possible. I for one, am hoping this makes Satan go easy on me. I've suffered enough.

Dio: PRAISE BE TO LOKI![/b]

Deadpool saves christmas...

[b]Dio: We're boned.

Drill: No. CHRISTMAS is boned.[/b]

Deadpool a mercenary whose clinicaly insane, and knows he's in a comic book, he also uses katanas, and guns, is putting up stockings in his headquarters, "a christmas the perfect time of the year" said deadpool, all hapy like. he is there with his friends, like outlaw, bob, agent-x, and weasel.


[b]Dio: Longest. SENTENCE. EVER!

[color=#ee4a2d]WHOSE clinically insane? What? Is my katana insane? ...that would explain why it's telling me to burn things.
[/color]
Drill: Run-on sentence, spelling errors, grammar errors... I'm waiting for the error error.[/b]

they are all getting ready for christmas, deadpool is excited for santa clause.

[b]Drill: Also, nice to see Deadpool is a fan of that Tim Allen movie as well!

[color=#ee4a2d]Of course! Man, when he kills Santa-reminds me of my first ever Christmas.
[/color]
Drill: And you're supposed to SAVE Christmas this time! Ain't that a hoot?

Dio: His idea of saving it is buying a reindeer, painting its nose red, and breaking its back while trying to make it fly.[/b]

"umm wade, santa isnt real?" said weasel. "yes he is, if santa's real in DC comics, he's real in Marvel".

[b]Dio: FUN FACT! Santa is, in fact, in DC Comics. He's shown to get past the defenses of freaking APOKOLIPS to deliver a lump of coal to Darkseid.

[color=#ee4a2d]He is my hero. Or, was, till I killed him.[/color]

Drill: You hearing this *insert practically every modern ninja here*? That's called stealth. Take notes.
[/b]

"you all just dont bleave hard enough" said deadpool poninting. weasel continued working on his computer, while eveyone else did other christmas stuff.

[b]Dio: Yes, if only they BLEAVED.

[color=#ee4a2d]Bleave is a perfectly cromulent word! DON'T STOP BLEAVING! SRETT LIGHTS, PAEPOL, OHHH~
[/color]
Drill: I bleave this author deserves to feel pain. New game! Everytime the author can't spell a simple word correctly, they deserve one punch to the dick!

[color=#5a70b3]Second.
[/color]
[color=#ee4a2d]SCRUFFY, MY MAIN MAN!
[/color]
Drill: Wow, a fourth man. This riff has officially entered retarded seas. Still on the first fic too![/b]

"you'll see santa's coming tonight, tonight, santas coming tonight !" ^-^.

[b][color=#ee4a2d]I love making that kawaii desu face. Freaks Weasel right the hell out.[/color]

Drill: Didn't know you were a Spongebob fan there Wade.

[color=#ee4a2d]He who tires of Spongebob is a dead man.[/color]

Drill: Or anyone who watches Nick for more than two hours a day.[/b]

later at night, while deadpool waits for santa, he hears someone outside, "OMG ITS SANTA!"

[b]Dio: OMG LIEK I GOTTA TXT MAH BFF JILL

[color=#ee4a2d]HEY, HEY! YOU STOLE MY LINE!
[/color]
Dio: I-I'm sorry-

[color=#ee4a2d]IT'S CLOBBERING TIME! WITH KATANAS![/b]
[/color]
deadpool crashes out of the window, and lands on the floor. he looks up to see santa, as he grabs on a sword, the person attempting to gut santa, the person was dressed like a ninja with red eyes.

[b]Drill: If this line made any sense, I could make a witty remark. Instead, just pretend there's a dick joke here.

Dio: At least he's not the Ultimate Warrior.

[color=#ee4a2d]DO NOT...SPEAK OF HIM...OR HIS ELIPSES...EVER...!
[/color]
Drill: So many Unquestioned Answers... in this fic...
[/b]
"huh what the hell's going on?" asked deadpool. he teleports to the roff and grabs his katana

[b]Drill: RAISE DA ROFF! RAISE DA ROFF!

[color=#ee4a2d]The Roff is actually a bar. Great place, get drunk easily.
[/color]
Drill: When I want to get drunk, I just add a drinking game to these fics. Incorrect spelling usually puts me near death quick enough.
[/b]
"hey buddy LEAVE HIM ALONE!" yelled deadpool. as he jumps ontop of the red-eyed ninja. and begans sword fighting him.

[b]Dio: To make a LEAVE HER ALONE joke or to comment on the periods...hmmm...

Drill: It's funny because they both can relate to Brittany.

[color=#ee4a2d]I obviously. Do things. In sequential order.[/color][/b]

"hey leave him alone!" yelled deadpool. the ninja said noting and kicked deadpool. deadpool tripped and fell as the ninja ran towards the unconciouse santa.

[b][color=#ee4a2d]The Night~Santa got knocked out~And I fought a red ninja dude~[/color]

Drill: Well, the author obivously isn't helping Deadpool save Santa. We need Weird Al so Santa can save himself.

Dio: Know who we need? Johnny Bravo.

Drill: Yeeeea-no.[/b]

deadpool snuck up from behind and stabed him. the ninja vanished into dust.
"umm" said deadpool as he looks at santa. whose unconciouse in the ground. "please you must help me" said santa. "or else christmas is ruined!" thunder shock. "oh thats not good, tell me whats wrong" said wade.

[b][color=#ee4a2d]Want me to tell you in list form or just random problems you have? Cause, buddy, YOU MAKE ME LOOK PERFECTLY SANE![/color]

Drill: I'm just going to mention that Santa is talking WHILE UNCONCIOUS and leave the stupidity of it all at that.

Dio: SANTA CLAUS IS TELPATHIC
[/b]
" the evil ninja clan, known as the ninjas of dust, are kidnapping mystical beings to use us to unleash the dead vampire ninja ruler" said santa.

[b]Dio: ...you know, this COULD be awesome, IF THE STORY DIDN'T SUCK!

[color=#5a70b3]Second.[/color]

Drill: Santa went to the wrong hero for this. Should've went to Finn and Jake. Beat those ninja using DUSTOMANCY!

[color=#ee4a2d]I met the Dead Vampire Ninja Ruler before! We played a couple rounds of beer pong. Nice guy.[/b]
[/color]
"oh cool, but weird" said deadpool getting his katana ready. " do you wish to help?" asked santa. "hellz yeah i would!, lets do this thing" deadpool goes and hugs santa. while santa carrys him to his slay looking at him like. "wate the hell?"
to be continued...

[b][color=#ee4a2d]Yes, Santa carried ME to his sleigh. AND I SLAUGHTERED THEM. GET IT? SLEIGH? SLA-aw, humor's lost on you people.[/color]

Drill: This is one HELL of a talented unconcious man. ANYHOW, the only continuation here is our riff as we go right into the next Deadpool fic and YES, it DOES manage to be more retarded!

Dio: Ladies and Gentlemen, Deadpool Vs.!
[/b]
Deadpool woke up 'ah what happened now, some stupid writer landing me in something dangerous now' as he looked a round he was in the middle of a remake of a Colosseum but more futuristic and with no holes 'we present you the champion of earth!'

[b]Dio: And here we see a common trait in Deadpool fics. RUN-ON SENTENCES.

[color=#ee4a2d]That's more insane than me! Wait, no it isn't, IT'S JUST STUPID!
[/color]
Drill: I for one am enjoying this fic already. Look at the use of punctuations besides quotation marks for dialogue. Also notice the complete lack of indication when it comes to who is talking. This author has officially gone free-form. THEY ARE A REBEL DAMMIT. f*** YOUR STANDARDS.

Dio: This, surprisingly, is someone DIFFERENT. I think it's a sockpuppet account.

[color=#ee4a2d]The only good sockpuppets I've seen are those Muppets.[/color][/b]

a voice boomed and Deadpool looked a round 'what me' as he pointing to him self 'wait is this punked oh am I on TV can I punch the annoying guy..' as a loud 'SHUT UP YOU MORON!' the voice of the started up flying duck tape appear other Deadpool mouth and hands

[b][color=#ee4a2d]This is boring. Chimichanga, anyone?[/color]

Dio: Don't mind if I do.

Drill: Pass. I've got a Quesadilla.[/b]

may I present the Villains who will be facing the one of the champions of earth, JASON VOORHEES!' as the hockey mask wearing, machete welding mass murder appear out of no where 'what why am I fight a movie villain I am from a comic book, the mov..' as the voice interrupted him 'GET MORE DUCK TAPE!' as more duck taped wrapped round Deadpools mouth mumbling something that no one wanted or could understand.

[b]Dio: HE'S A CHAMPION?!

[color=#ee4a2d]Jason! I freaking love this guy, how've you been, buddy? Kill Rebecca Black yet?[/color]

Drill: I find the funny part is the author says nobody wants to understand what Deadpool is saying. Thing is, Wade here is more entertaining than this author. CAN WE TAPE THE AUTHOR'S HANDS SHOVED 6 INCHES DEEP UP THEIR OWN ASS PLEASE?

Deadpool: Oh, Ultimate Warrior~[/b]

'the next villain LEATHER FACE!' as a loud rusty chain saw was hared, and the cannibalistic Leather face stepped forward holding the chainsaw making that rusty Cain saw sound 'oh god I'm going to get eaten!' Deadpool yelled once agine getting out of the Duck tape

[b][color=#ee4a2d]Jeez. I'm a wuss. I SHOULD KILL ME![/color]

Dio: Not the best of ideas, D-

[color=#ee4a2d]THEN I'LL KILL DIO![/color]

Dio: Shutting up now.

Drill: Twenty bucks on Deadpool in that fight. Dio buddy. Leave me something nice in your will.

Dio: I'll leave you my entire estate of BOOT TO THE HEAD!

Drill: Wha-*KER-BOOT*
[/b]
'oh for the love of GET SOMETHING STRONGER THEN DUCK TAPE!' as a dropped a sperm whale dropped on top of Deadpool and a loud cheer was hear from the crowd, and a blow of petunias dropped next to the whale, before the petunias dropped It was thinking 'oh no not a..' as it was interrupted from smashing in to the ground it was said that if any one could tell why the petunias were thinking that we would know a lot more about the universe then we do now. Deadpool was being needless crushed by the whale trying to push up but it not moveing a bit.

[b]Dio: ...wait, WHAT?

[color=#ee4a2d]Makes sense to me.
[/color]
Drill: I'm torn between the enjoyment of seeing a Hitchikers reference besides the number 42, and my sheer hatred of this story due to terrible plot, spelling, and more.[/b]

'now the 3rd villain FREDDY KRUGER!' at that point Jason turned to Freddy and there was a steel wall put a round him 'no fighting the other villains' the voice growled as Freddy smiled evilly seeing Deadpool crawling out from under the whale in a painful way 'oh wait Kruger how came up with this' he says pointing to the sky 'your pushing me ya stupid writer and you read person, thank you for reading this but still why did you bring me here' he yelled to where ever the voice was coming from 'you are hear to make sure the earth isn't taken over by Loki' as Deadpool looked up 'wait Loki Norse god claiming to be Deadpools own daddy' as he started to get confused

[b]Dio: You put Jason Vorhees, Leatherface, and Freddy Krueger in a fic, and you RUIN IT. YOU SOMEHOW RUIN IT.

[color=#ee4a2d]Why would I fight these guys? I IDOLIZE THEM.[/color]

Drill: I have my own idea for a story. It involves all three of these villains, but we replace Deadpool with this author. Spoiler alert: The author dies.

Deadpool: Then he becomes a zombie, and Headpool eats him! I LOVE IT![/b]

'there are still more people for you to fight, the 2nd to last ONAGA EMPEROR OF OUT WORLD!' as deadpools jaw dropped 'how many villans are in this!' as the dragon king stepped closer looking evil his tail swinging from side to side.
'there is one more and may I present Lady Deathstrike' as Deadpool looked up from the floor drooling under his mask 'oh wow, she is the moive version' as she looked down at him in angrily 'you can try and kill him 1st' the voice says as she smiled creaking her knuckle's.

[b][color=#ee4a2d]Wow. An actual comic character. Whoda thunk it?[/color]

Dio: And thus ends the first chapter of this fic. No, really, that's it. THAT'S HOW IT ENDS.

Drill: Time for Prof. Drill's funtime riff wrap-up! Both fics were crappy! Spelling was punched in the lady parts until it finally died a painfull death! Deadpool managed to be less insane than the circumstance of the second fic, IN the second fic!

[color=#ee4a2d]In short, look out, writers, cause I'm gunning for ya! With guns. That shoot things. Painfully. To you, not to the guns. KILL TIME.[/color]

Dio: Thanks for reading folks, and remember, we're in Cartoon Hell, all for your entertainment.

Drill: I'll leave you with one final question: Can a meta-riff of our riff be more retarded than our riff itself? MY MONEY IS ON YES. DON'T DISAPPOINT ME, INTERNET. Anyhow, I'm Drill, that's Dio, and that's Deadpool. We await your slash fiction of us. GOOD NIGHT EVERYBODY![/b]
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[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1307086363' post='5250495']
OOOH, BUUUUUURRRRRNNNNNN.
DL, Dio, you gonna take that?
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Just saw this.

WE

DON'T TAKE LONGER THAN KS.



TAKE THAT MOTHERF*CKERS.


But yeah, go pester Dio if you want to see the Riffview of Black's fic >>

I already finished MY part.
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Funny stuff.
I'm just recently been attracted to reading the reviews of fan-fics in this section.
I like how you guys work. I mean the team-based [s]reviews[/s] riffviews with a few extra characters from other stories. I don't actually dislike the Major's comments as a guest xD

So far I've read all reviews in this thread, about half of foe-fic's, and pichu's (which counts as this thread's because of the review's riffview)
I think I might have too much free time lately >.<"
Next in my list is Roxas' and maybe I can find Dr. Cakey's reviews somewhere later, which I just heard about in some past comment here.

Hmmmm.. maybe I should take my time to read actual fan-fics too...

~Keep up the work~
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Thank you =3 It means a lot to see that our time has been [s]wasted[/s] wisely spent entertaining someone else ;D

And yeah, Cakey and Roxas are definitely epic at reviewing. Though [s]not as good as us[/s] I'd have to say better than us xD
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Ah, my old friend Dark Link, just the man I was looking for!

Are you accepting [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/255231-pokemon-lapislazuli-obsidian-journey-through-the-wheyseem-region/"]Review Requests[/url]? My Fanfic needs a lil', expertisque reviewing.
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