Sploda Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Hilarious, the best yet. @DL I am now broaching the possibility of a 3x RIFFVIEW COMBO! What do you say? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A20thCenturyBoy Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 You got yourself a deal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Excellent, how have you guys been doing this? PM or other means? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A20thCenturyBoy Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Originally, we worked on it via MSN, real time. For this and the Cigar story, we did our own parts separately. I did mine first, he added on. You got any other ways? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 The way you did it this time seems to work out. You do your part first, then I'll do mine finishing with DL (Since he procrastinates the most out of all of us). I'll just need a link/copy of the next project for when it's my turn and I'll be ready to riff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Actually, do you wanna work on Fusion's, or Pichu's? (Pichu's is next, then comes Fusion's) Also, I do not procrastinate...that much D: At least, not in reviews X< But I'd be happy to finalize. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 [quote name='Hayate Ayasaki' timestamp='1299118587' post='5047148'] Actually, do you wanna work on Fusion's, or Pichu's? (Pichu's is next, then comes Fusion's) Also, I do not procrastinate...that much D: At least, not in reviews X< But I'd be happy to finalize. [/quote] I'll do both, and more if things work out well. I'll start with Pichu's though. Honestly as the new guy, my say in the order doesn't matter. It's up to you two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 I think the order you set up is good. And let's hope Pichu's and Fusion's fic reviews work out with all 3 of us then xD 20th CB can start anytime he wishes with Pichu's fic :3 I'll be waitin for the almost-final version to add my part in. Also, after I do my part, I always PM it to 20th CB so he can check for errors. So next time I'll PM it to both of you :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Nah, just him. The only thing I would do is put it into word and click Spellcheck. Also I apologize in advance if I don't have much to say at the end of these things, or that I don't comment on everything. The way you guys do it is funny, but I can't follow it to the dot right away. Basically I won't be reviewing to the point where I have a paragraph or two to add at the end of the riffview. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 That's fine~ :3 Oh, and 20th CB has started on reviewin Pichu's fic, and since it's short, shouldn't be more than a day until you get it :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Cool, I'll be done before friday then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 While the fourth was pretty good, it left a lot to be desired. I didn't laugh that much. But still great. I'll be waiting for number five. Now, about my stor-*Shot* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 We'll do that one after Fusion's. ALso, I personally thought the 4th was our best one by far. I rate them as such: 1. 4th review 2. 1st review 3. 2nd review 4. 3rd review. Tho in levels of pain, 2nd wins. Easily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 fourth was ironic. So your saying, your only means of getting ANY food was to duel. Ever heard of stealing. The adults who live there eat too. Why even duel at all. Take a stick, and while the other kid's not looking beat him to unconsciousness and steal his cards. Oh, wait I must be totally wrong, it's obvious that there is absolutely no way to hurt peple in the world of a card game, and it's obvious that since its a childrens card game, stealing never existed...righhhtttttt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The True Ace Attorney Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 That was awesome. Though I was surprised by the fact that you only criticised the lack of description for Ken. Not once does even say his hair colour... But yeah, this is truly made of awesomesauce. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 This is not funny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 @Chase - XD @Ace Attorney - I suppose we could have criticized his lack of description, but people should know by know to describe their main characters from "One is the Loneliest Number..." so we decided to rant about other things. New review added. Pichu's fic is....bad in a way that just...hurts. Not like Hawk Penitentiary, but it's hard to make fun of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A20thCenturyBoy Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Hey, it was hard for YOU. After CrossRoads, I loved how bad this fic was. It lent itself to a lot of cracks. And the chapter was short, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 True...fine, it was hard to be sarcastic. Damn you joke-specialists ;_; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 I know my fic is bad. But I'm trying out since Crabby stopped my last Pokemon Fanfic. The one about Ash and Dawn.... i lost the link to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 It's not bad. Trust me, we've seen bad. Your's is just...boring. The characters and dialogue lack depth and such. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Hey, can you review my remake of an old fanfic I made? http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/242072-mediaville-adventures/ I know it'll probably suck, but I like feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Pretty funny. Now that people see that they can ask to host this, a lot of people are gonna like, spam asking to host if this gets popular enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Oh. Sorry. I didn't know that I couldn't do that. I'll just... be ashamed then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 @PikMan I wasn't talking about you wanting them to review yours I was talking about people asking to host the reviews Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.