DarzParadise Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 my first card dedicated to Alexis Rhodes! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 The grammar is off...Good for a first ever card. Welcome to the fourms ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 grammar is off. everything else is pretty good. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarzParadise Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 how is my grammer off? what is it supposed to be or how is it supposed to say? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Grammar and OCG errors, But it doesnt really matter as its pop cultureness lol Would you like me to point out your errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarzParadise Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Yes i would, please and thank you. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 1 not one "Etoile Cyber" "Blade Skator" Deck Deck There you go ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 there are some OCG and grammer errors, but whatever your new, it's better than some other newbie's cards, so 7.5/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarzParadise Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 thanks so much Slash and Dj Osiris but i checked online and blade skater and etoile cyber are spelled right. p.s. do I capitalize "deck"? because i didn't. what else is the problem so i can learn from my mistakes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 they are spelled right but they have to have quotation marks. Not that bad for a n00b. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 No No its not the fact about there spelling its these.. " " Cards must go inside them e.g "Cyber Dragon", "Dark Magician" ^_^ Deck is always capped, same with Graveyard ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarzParadise Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 thanks everyone, i changed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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