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[quote name='NoBeginning' timestamp='1299995671' post='5070325']
I must say that I did like the story. It was interesting to say the least. I want to see more and I want to see it soon...or else
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awww fauk 2 more books out of 3
manga artist mode: no cant do this by dead line, ill never be good enough *cries blood*
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[quote name='Twosday' timestamp='1300212535' post='5075252']
That was great Just read the first one. Ha ha ha he was.. all along FUNNY s*** man. good On to number two..
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finnally a comment from someone thats not a sponser after are success rush 10 million years ago..... your words are like orgasm to my ears..... "that was great" omg that was just.... *jizz*
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[quote name='Twosday' timestamp='1300214084' post='5075298']
Okay okay So Neko is a human..That is awesome if he is.. When will I get more on this..or is it just ended like that... I love'd it. On to the next one's later.... (Yes I will post the next comments together so I don't spam..)
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yes neko is a human, and these are short stories, so there most likly wont be a continuation of "neko" but i do take requests all the time, so if you want a short sequal i could pull it off.

also the trilogy isnt finished XP
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The Bunker review.

Pros: Reminds me a lot of "The Thing". You'll probably know it by the Kurt Russell movie, which was a good movie. Anyway, the plot twist was a little noticeable, but not too bad.

Cons: -Punctuation is your friend. End every sentence with a period or other suitable punctuation.
-You have numerous spelling/grammar mistakes. For example, "Finnally" is "Finally", "your" is sometimes "you are" (just try to say you are every time you see your. If it fits perfectly with the sentence, change it).

Overall, not too bad. There are a lot of small mistakes, but it isn't so horrible that I can't read it. It is basically where Terminator meets The Thing.
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[quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1300215998' post='5075400']
The Bunker review.

Pros: Reminds me a lot of "The Thing". You'll probably know it by the Kurt Russell movie, which was a good movie. Anyway, the plot twist was a little noticeable, but not too bad.

Cons: -Punctuation is your friend. End every sentence with a period or other suitable punctuation.
-You have numerous spelling/grammar mistakes. For example, "Finnally" is "Finally", "your" is sometimes "you are" (just try to say you are every time you see your. If it fits perfectly with the sentence, change it).

Overall, not too bad. There are a lot of small mistakes, but it isn't so horrible that I can't read it. It is basically where Terminator meets The Thing.
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saw both movies i dont know how i forgot "the thing" reference
probably should stick all my stories into word before i post it, everything you see here was done on the spot X/
but thank you soooo much for a progressive reveiw, critique is really something we need more of
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[quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1300221357' post='5075584']
Word would help, but what it really needs is an editor with a good amount of skill. Word won't detect the lack of correct punctuation and it won't detect the difference between your and you're.
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atleast not yet

[quote name='NoBeginning' timestamp='1300221254' post='5075577']
I told you you should have stuck it in word. :/
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we have comments f*** yeah
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None for me. :/

[quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1300221357' post='5075584']
Word would help, but what it really needs is an editor with a good amount of skill. Word won't detect the lack of correct punctuation and it won't detect the difference between your and you're.
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*Facepalm.* Yeah I just facepalmed you. And of course I know that. It's just good to get rid of mistakes you might not have noticed. Maybe not perfect though.
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[quote name='Twosday' timestamp='1300313214' post='5077505']
I just read No's story thing in the second one. Cool I was mentioned...and the fighting was totally no and I was expecting it.
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NB is predictable you say, well in the 3rd story the one NB made was a little less predictable thank you for your support, as always it really makes my day
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as always mega delays are mega.... okay that was a bad one

the point is s*** been slow so for one "I BUMP THEE"
and two more of like a message for NB: sondance might also contribute as much as you now *lots of editing work required*

after i finish my god damn trilogy which im still trying to figure out how to end in the most bad ass way possible, im already thinking up other projects soooo...
things to look foward to

girl/guy walks into a bar:
can be simply another fan fic shortstory collab as always OR i was thinking of turning this into a contest. atleast 5 contestants, yugioh does not need to be involved (thats the best part). pretty much any story you want to throw up about a bar. it could be a bar fight, a hilarious drunken story or even just a true story about a crazy time you went to your local bar. ill have judges and winner gets like idk 2000 points 10 reps and a cookie or some s*** idk yet. no requirements you dont need to chip in points to join is completly free, you have nothing to loss but time (and maybe brain cells)

YCM the yellow journalism story:
This one is unique from what ive looked into so far
a collab project again, where you just write a short rant, where the victim is YCM the site itself. of course its not a short story with just that damn ranting. But your gonna make a story out of it. Your story is about the sites reaction to your rant; comparison like a political theorist to a clueless society. You get to control and create the effect protion of your cause. How fun it would be to read the generalizations and steryotypes of members in the YCM society thought up by those who just wish to.

other mediums other than fan-fics you may be interested in that are soon to come

<--[s]generation#1[/s]---:
this RP project is f***ing ridiculous i dont wanna go for any spoilers, but its specifically designed as social experiment, for those ages 23 and under so anyone over the age line, who may have been interested im dearly sorry
specific reasoning is specific
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[quote name='NoBeginning' timestamp='1301770389' post='5108481']
Sheesh. You guys are keeping me busy this week.

Me and SSD had a challenge as to who could write a better story of our fight with eachother. As I already told you. It's like an RHG. We were thinking of posting it here.
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yes we are

actually RHG sounds f***ing awesome but not something that belongs here, and should be a whole nuther topic
*making character already*
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