Sotos Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 My first landscape made with Cinema 4D. All from scratch, apart from the clouds and rock texture...[url="http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/037/d/5/c4d_first_landscape_by_seths49-d38yfhc.png"]Landscape[/url] [url="http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/038/b/7/2_by_seths49-d390d8j.png"]Landscape V.2[/url] [url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eG2MFnQRS2w"]Animation with the first landscape[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 The f is considerably blended it. It's hard to read. you want text to be a focal in some sort of way, you want it to be noticed, but pleasurably. This does neither. My suggestion is you work on text separately until you mastered it. Then try to apply it into smooth surfaced pieces, then go for the rough edged ones. Good job though, you're on your way to improvement. Another thing I might suggest is that you fix the lighting of the landscape here and there. Cinema 4D doesn't do the best job in doing it for you. Practice practice practice love! You'll get there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted February 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2011 Thanks for the advice, updated I think it is a little better now...[img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/huh.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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