-DG- Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 [center]I'll post a few of my Real-life artwork for you guys to comment on. Iguana Painting (Background's kind of plain, but the actual one didn't have a BG xD): [img]http://images.artsonia.com/art/large/11721594.jpg[/img] Gorilla Scratchboard (Personal favorite ): [img]http://images.artsonia.com/art/large/11337589.jpg[/img] Frog Multimedia: [img]http://images.artsonia.com/art/large/10699693.jpg[/img] Grapes (Modified Cross Contour - Actually got to look at this one ): [img]http://images.artsonia.com/art/large/10496435.jpg[/img] These were all done this year. Please comment and criticize as you feel necessary.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 I'm not one to criticize much, 'cause these look great. Loving the gorilla piece. KIU. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Tokyo Duel Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 I <3 them all, but the Iguana scares me. It's not staring at me, it's staring [i]through[/i] me D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 Not bad. For the paintings work on outlining more and giving more shades and a variety of colour mixtures, lets not forget that you need more details. Also you need to work on your lighting haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 I agree with the lighting part, but that's not all. Art is something that I could never grade easy on. Real life art at least. I would say your form needs work, and so does your negative and positive space when mimicking a drawing. Lack of watching for that causes disproportion, which I can see in your frog picture. You need to add more gradual value change, and not make it so high contrast, for example the shading you did on your lizard piece. Your Anti-Shading, which you did on the gorilla piece, needs more structure as well. The movement from one part of the gorilla to the next is hard to tell without actually looking at the piece for a good while. That's about it, I hope this helps. You're doing fine... But practice practice practice and you'll be great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 I have high personal respect for the Gorilla scratch, because i personally have done one in the past, It isn't as easy as it looks. I are impressed. A job well done DG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Thanks for the comments guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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