The White Wolf Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 #1 knucklehead ______ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 added chapter 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Lulz... hey, SSD,you lier!!! You did write that part with Akarui and Botaru during the attack!!!!! And you copied something from Naruto the show!!!! >.< ... I'm angry!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 .....Huh? What did I copy? What did I exactly say I did? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 You said you didn't do that scene with Akarui and botaru... when you did... And according to Zex(Witch I may consider to be the nicest and smartest person I know) it is almost exaclty like the Itachi carrying Sasuke scene...0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 You're the one who WROTE the prologue >_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 No SSD... we worked on it together... remember? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 You wrote it, I gave it the past-sense type of writing^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 SSD, you wrote that scene... I didn't... Deal with it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 ...What are we talking about, I'm talking about the Prologue >_<[quote name='^v^Techi^v^' timestamp='1296788993'] Now... Let us describe that scene... Baby Anarui is being carried by child-Bakoru as the flee from the Giant Demon Beast, its terror unyeilding. Street corners destroyed, whole houses crunch. Terrible shreiks at every turn. Flames burst out and scatter. People dying in the streets. Then, A boy in a hooded cloak appears at the castle walls... his eyes glow purple and a giant purple seal appears in front of the boy. I glows, its about 15 feet wide and its still expanding. The thousands of people who were crying out for help were silenced in awe as the seal shoots out and catpures the giant beast in a net-like fashion. The Net and the beast become red charka and they form back into a Giant Seal of Red and black lines. The Seal reverts back into the Boys eyes as he dissipears.[/quote] [quote name='Shooting Star Dragon' timestamp='1296789261'] I'll edit it to make it better Bakoru or Batoru? Which is a better name? Batoru is the original Baby Akarui was being carried by child-Batoru as the flee from the Giant Demon Beast, its terror unyielding. Street corners destroyed, whole houses crunch. Terrible shrieks at every turn. Flames burst out and scatter. People dying in the streets. Then, A boy in a hooded cloak appears at the gate of the Hidden Leaf... his eyes glow purple and a giant purple seal appears in front of the boy. It glows, it is about 15 feet wide and it was still expanding. The thousands of people who were crying out for help were silenced in awe as the seal shot out and captured the giant beast in a net-like fashion. The Net and the beast become red charka and they form back into a Giant Seal of Red and black lines. The Seal reverts back into the Boy's eyes as he disappears. Spell-checked and made it more in a past-like fashion[/quote] I win^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 YOU, SSD, ARE A[u]([s]Replace this part with any noun that would mean: Unthoughtful, mean, stupid/Meddlesum[/s])[/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 You're the one that lied and I showed the truth, oh and you might want "EVIL" there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTFauKorean Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 came back and read chapter 3 lol naruto is 50 XD so sauske is still actng cool at 50 XD and naruto is still brutal and rush XD love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Techi wrote the fragment^^ We're currently working on Chapter 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 Read and I'll give a cookie rep^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2011 Anyone gonna read? We're working hard on this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 Read and get a cookie rep^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 READ THIS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 Read? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 Lawl, ask nicer, Moron! Please read our elegant Fan-fic. A reply isn't neccesary, but will be appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 Yes it will be appreciated with a cookie rep^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Please read and you'll get a cookie rep^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 I see your still taking my advice. Good SSd, With my cunning book writing skills and your... your?... Uhm.... >.<.... Nevermind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Better writing? Better RPing skills which aid in fanfic writing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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