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Naruto: The New Generation [Co-Written by Techi/Chapter 5 Added]

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[spoiler=Characters]
[spoiler=SSD's]
Akarui
Batoru
Mystery man (his appearance)
Senshi
Zachery
Yakumo
Sasuke Uchiha
More secret ones planned[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Techi's]
Kenshi
Mystery man (later)
The Hokage (Naruto)
Karrien
Akatsuki Leader
Mystery Akatsuki Man
More secret ones planned[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[u][b]The Fanfic[/b][/u]

[spoiler=Prologue - That Night... So Long Ago...]
Baby Akarui was being carried by child-Batoru as they flee from the Giant Demon Beast, its terror unyielding. Street corners destroyed, whole houses crunch. Terrible shrieks at every turn. Flames burst out and scatter. People dying in the streets. Then, A boy in a hooded cloak appears at the gate of the Hidden Leaf... his eyes glow purple and a giant purple seal appears in front of the boy. It glows, it is about 15 feet wide and it was still expanding. The thousands of people who were crying out for help were silenced in awe as the seal shot out and captured the giant beast in a net-like fashion. The Net and the beast become red charka and they form back into a Giant Seal of Red and black lines. The Seal reverts back into the Boy's eyes as he disappears.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Chapter 1 - Ramen! Ramen!]
A 14-year old Akarui stood at the Hidden Leaf Gate. Remembering that fateful day he saw his parents' murder "Batoru..." he whispered in rage. The iris' around his pupils changed color to red. Followed by three black tomoe around his pupils. "...Uchiha." he finished his rage-whisper. He turned around and jumped off the gate. Landing on a rooftop. He ran from rooftop to rooftop and stopped on a blue rooftop. He jumped off it and entered the house. He walked up to his sideboard by his bed. There stood two framed pictures. One of his squad and the other of a younger him, his parents and a younger Batoru. He looked at the picture with emotions of both sympathetic and rage. He finally stopped and looked out his window "....."

Suddenly, the door bursts open and dust flys everywhere as a shadowed figure leaps into the house. It moves quickly around to achieve a vantage point in the house. Its movements cause it to be able to move from furniture to furniture without being seen. It draws a kunai knife from its back pocket and chuckles softly to itself as its eyes find its target. "Akarui!..." he whispers as the boy leaps from the shadows at Akarui. He falls flat on his face by slipping on a glass that Akarui had left on the floor. "ooooooooow! Akarui! Thats not fair!!" The boy cried. His name was Kenshi and he was 5 years old. His Role-models where any Anbu and Akarui. Since they were young Kenshi had always practiced assassinating Akarui, but failing.

Akarui facepalmed himself "Kenshi, wait until you're out of the Ninja Academy. PLEASE. Heck wait until you're IN it." Akarui stated, helping Kenshi up. Akarui sat on his bed and looked at the picture of his squad. "I haven't seen them for a while... did they go on a mission without me?" Akarui asked. Knowing Kenshi sneaks around the village a lot and knows more about what goes on than Akarui. Being the Uchiha was remade. But was now the smallest clan in the village. No more than 50. Well, now 47. Being Batoru and Akarui's parents were gone.

Kenshi rolled on Akarui's bed and fluffed Akarui's pillow so he could lay down while he talks. Keshi plopped into the pillow and chuckled a little, putting away his kunai. "Well, they were sent on a peace mission with that new village... I don't remember the name of the village, but it's not that far from here. You can see why you were not needed in it. Your skills are great, I'll give you that. But, they are also destructive. Your jutsu wouldn't be vary helpful on a peace mission, so that is why you were not invited, its commen sense." Kenshi recited what the squad and the hokage mentioned to eachother while he was sneaking through air vents to find something fun to do. Kenshi hopped off the bed and attempted to find some toys to play with.

Akarui stood up, thinking, his ego started to kick-in. "Hmph. C'mon Kenshi. We're going." Akarui stated "Hate to admit it, but you're smart for a five-year old." Akarui stated.

Kenshi was ruffling through a box of toys in Akarui's closet when he was told to follow Akarui out. "Okay!" He said with a wide grin on his face. He ran a little to catch up with Akarui and chuckled a little to himself when Akarui actually said something nice, it's just so rare.

Kenshi's tummy grumbled. "Oh, sure, I wanna go. But my mom always said, 'little uchiha's should never travel alone!" Then she just kinda starred at me with her sharingan till I promised that I'll have supervision whenever I leave the gates. You count for that, Right?" Kenshi asked, his tummy growled at him louder. "Can we at least get a bowl of ramen before we go? I heard the hokage said the place here makes the best... I never get to taste it since whenever I'm hungry, I'm home... so Please?" Kenshi asked.

Akarui rolled his eyes "Tsk, fine. Ichiraku is right over there." Akarui said as he lead Kenshi to the ramen shop. Akarui entered. The owner was now Ayame. She had her back turned and seemed to expect Naruto, the Hokage "Ah Naruto." she started to speak as she turned around and saw Akarui "Oh, Akarui, it's been a while." she stated, then she noticed Kenshi "Aww and who's this cute little guy?" she asked as she looked at Kenshi.

Kenshi leaped on top of the stool without any handles, it seemed to be twice his size. "Hello, My name is Kenshi! I am the son of Karren Uchiha, you might see her around the flower shop if she is working outside. I am really hungry and I heard your ramen was the best! So I begged Akarui to take me here." He said quickly, his mind running so fast that his mouth struggled a little to keep up.

Akarui sat on the stool and ordered for both he and Kenshi. Seemed a bit annoyed though. He ate his ramen quickly due to him being in a hurry. He couldn't remember the name of the new village either. He waited on Kenshi eating his ramen.

Kenshi noticed Akarui eating quickly. He grinned and picked up the bowl, smelling the steam coming off it. Then setting it down and slowly slurping the noodles. He was laughing on the inside a bit because chuckling while your eating is both rude and a good way to choke on your noodles.

Akarui activated his Sharingan and looked at Kenshi, he didn't speak but the ego-vibe he was sending out spoke louder than words.

Kenshi rolled his eyes and munched down the whole bowl of ramen quickly. His eyes widenned. "Th-that ramen... is simpely... ama-zing..." he said to himself, tears in his eyes, partly from the 'Ama-zing'-ness in his tummy and partly because it was to hot and burnt his throat a little.

Akarui was getting.... annoyed, he knew Kenshi would be too stunned to move so he had no choice... he had to piggyback Kenshi "(Crap, why do I always end up doing this stuff?)" Akarui thought as he piggybacked Kenshi out of the village.

Kenshi chuckled as they made it out of the gate. "Try to keep up now!" He said as he leaped off Akarui's back and into the trees. Leaping from one to another, much like a tracking ninja for the anbu.

"Hmph." Akarui stated as he jumped into the trees, easily matching Kenshi's speed, and he just as easily got ahead of him. He was now leading the way. A figure then jumped out of the trees ahead of them. He then stopped Kenshi. The figure then walked into sight. He was wearing a different headband, something Akarui had never seen, as it was the symbol of fire. "The Village Hidden in the Flames." Akarui stated, gritting his teeth. The new village's headband. The man seemed to be a jonin, as he was also eating instant ramen. When he finished his meal he threw the cup and chopsticks at Akarui and Kenshi. Akarui caught the chopsticks but the cup hit Kenshi in the head. As it bounced off his head, Akarui noticed a tag that was slightly on fire on the cup. His eyes widened "Kenshi! Paper Bomb!" he warned. The man chuckled as Akarui noticed his tag.

Kenshi was practicing for moments like this, he Quickly removed it from the cup as he drew his kunai with his other hand, setting the paper bomb on it and tossing it back in less than a few seconds. He droped to his knee and drew his Short-sword his father made him, witch was bit more like a really well made knife. His eyes darted towards his enemy as the bomb went of near his head.

The man smiled as the explosion was only about an inch big. Akarui noticed a second paper bomb on the cup. But he was too late. It went off in Kenshi's hand. The explosion was much bigger than the one that Kenshi threw at the man. Akarui reached for tree to his left. It seemed like he was going for the branch. But he actually pulled on a wire. As he pulled it, wires could be seen moving a tying the man down to the tree behind him. He placed the wire he was holding onto between his teeth. He did many hand-signs "Fire Style: Dragon Flame Jutsu!" He declared, the dragon-shaped flames traveled down the wires and got a direct hit on the man. "Kenshi! Are you alright?!"

A puff of smoke went everywhere as kenshi leaped off of a branch above Akarui. "Clones..." Kenshi said, he smirked at how well he had done a clone in mid-combat and he knew that he was going to be passing school. "I am just fine, should we keep going?" He asked, his voice and body was a five year-olds but his mind was running like an anbu's.

Akarui walked up to the man, his face was burned and Akarui drew a kunai "Who are you?! Who sent you?!" he demanded. The man chuckled "My name is not important, neither is the name of the one who sent me. But your friends who came to our village on that peace mission had very helpful information." The man chuckled as he spoke. He then fell unconscious. Akarui untied him and was able to toss him right under Kenshi's branch "Take him to the Hokage. He will want to hear of this." Akarui stated.

Kenshi nodded and dragged the man the short distance to the leaf village. He kept draging the man even when his legs started to hurt.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Chapter 2 - The Village Hidden in the Flames]
Akarui sped through the trees, heading towards the Village Hidden in the Flames. "(Yakumo. Senshi Sensei. Zachery. I'm coming.)" Akarui thought as he drew closer to the village...

The door to the Hokage's room bursted open as Kenshi drags the beaten man into the room. The hokage Jumps up. "Kenshi, what is the meaning of this?" Kenshi looked up at the Hokage.

"Well You see..."

Akarui finally made it to the Hidden Flame Village, he was breathing heavily. The village gates were a site to see. Braziers with roaring flames right by it. "This will be fun." Akarui stated as he jumped down from his tree. He walked towards the gates. He was noticed by lookouts who nodded at each other. The lookouts then jumped from the top of the gates and stopped Akarui from going any further. The two drew kunai...

"GWAAAAAAAAH!" a voice screamed from the gates...

Kenshi Explained everything about the situation that he could understand and the Hokage nodded. He stood and began to drag the man down a hallway and Keshi followed. They entered a room and The Hokage had strapped the man down on to a bed. "Karrien, Get me the interrigation squad!" He shouted at a door as a younger woman came out and ran out the door they just came into.

Akarui smiled as one of the two ninja fell. He eyed the second one and used one of the abilities of the Sharingan. Placing a thought into the ninja's head. The ninja began doing the hand-signs of the Fireball Jutsu. "Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu!" the two declared. Akarui's flames pushed back the Flame Ninja's, setting him ablaze. "GWAAAAAH!" the ninja screamed in pain. Falling down unconscious. Akarui smiled and ran down to where he saw three familiar chakras....

Kenshi looked back at the door as it opened and three men walked in. The first was Kenshi's uncle, Obitoru the other two men Kenshi didn't know. The stepped in beside the hokage and began to do what they were called for. The Hokage turned and left the room with Keshi. "Lets go get some ramen..." The hokage said. Kenshi nodded and followed more quickly.

Akarui burst through the doors of what seemed to be a kage mansion. The man in the desk smiled a bit. "Well. Another Leaf Ninja." he stated, amused. "Where are they!" he demanded. "A-Akarui?" a familiar female voice stated. "Yakumo?!" Akarui demanded. He finally noticed a second room. He barged in and realized it was some kind of arena. He saw his team hanging by a rope. "Ugh." he stated. A voice from behind laughed. "Now it's your turn." the non-official kage stated. "I am the Flamékage." he stated. Akarui had deactivated his Sharingan a little while back. He then reactivated it. "Ah, an Uchiha of the Hidden Leaf. Unlike those three there." the Flamékage chuckled as he removed his kage cloak to reveal bulging muscles. "Hmph." Akarui stated...

A man walked into the Hidden Fire Village's Kage room. He wore a black cloak with red clouds on it. His hair was spikey and black, his eyes were all baby blue with purple orbs in the center. A short green monster that walked on all fours had followed him in. It wore the same robe but it the creature was only about two feet tall, about half a foot tall while it stood on all fours, its tail slipping out below the bottom of its cloak. Its ears were long and pointy and its nose was the same as its ears. Its eyes were pure red. It had three piercings in its left ear. It had three fingers on each hand and a thumb, its feet were hands. It spoke first. "Ah-hum!" It sounded of, like it was clearing its throat. "We need to speak with the Kage..." It said the Man's face didn't show any emotion at all while the little creature's face had a wide sick grin.

The door to the arena was closed and the Flamékage was inside it. Fighting Akarui. Akarui noticed the man and the creature enter. "Looks like you've got visitors- NO!" Akarui started then cried out as he saw a familiar chakra walk in the Flamékage's office. "No. Not him. Anyone but him." Akarui stated, holding his ears down with his head down. His fear was then replaced by hatred. "Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu!" Akarui declared, catching the Flamékage off guard, blowing him right through the door to the arena while set ablaze. The second man who walked into the office smiled. His Sharingan active as he saw Akarui's chakra. "Batoru." Akarui whispered, still in the arena. "Akarui." Batoru whispered as well.

The First man looked at Botaru Then back at Akarui. He closed his eyes then opend them as white lines shot out into a large Chakra seal and the flames flew inside it. The Seal became Red and went back into his eyes, the whole procces took less than a few seconds. The Green monster turned and walked away and the man did as well but stoped to speak, it was too low to be heard from Akarui and his lips were not in view. "Kill the flame Kage and no one else..." The man said as the Creature and himself dissapeared.

Kenshi Noticed The Hokage finishing his last bowl and talking to the nice lady. She kept calling him naruto, but Kenshi could only think of him as the Hokage.

Batoru nodded. He walked up to the knocked out Flamékage and drew a kunai. Slitting his throat. Batoru killed him. Now in Akarui's view. Akarui's hatred and rage grew even more as he saw him "Batoru... Uchiha." Akarui stated. Yakumo's eyes widened. She saw Akarui's reaction to Batoru "Akarui..." she stated. Zachery looked at her and chuckled at something unknown. Senshi looked at Akarui, remembering when the first time the squad met "(Batoru Uchiha. S-Rank criminal of the Akatsuki.)" Senshi thought "Akarui. Forget your brother for now." Senshi stated. Akarui's eyes widened at that "Ugh." Akarui stated as he threw a shuriken at the rope holding the three in the air. Akarui then seemed to disappear in a cloud of smoke and leaves. Seeming to reappear at the gates of the Hidden Flame. Senshi, Zachery and Yakump did the same.

Kenshi was finished his first bowl of Ramen when he noticed how slowly and quitely Naruto and the nice lady were talking. Kenshi knew it was something important, but he promised himself he wouldn't spy on the Hokage's internal affairs. So he sipped down the Juices or broth left after the noodles and others were eaten.

The four began to head back to the Hidden Leaf Village. Going at speeds triple that of what they used to get there and ended up at the village in no time. "Alright, I have to go file a report to the Hokage. You three rest up." Senshi stated. "Tsk." Akarui stated, obviously irritated. He began to walk towards Ichiraku and Yakumo followed. Ignoring her. Akarui walked into Ichiraku and sat beside Kenshi. Yakumo stayed outside....

"AKARUI!!!" Kenshi shouted as he hugged his 'Big-Brother' figure. "You lived? Thats amazing!" he shouted more in a happy way. He turned back to find his bowl was replaced with seconds and he munched it down slowly.

...


The man with the strange eyes from before stood before a large crystal formation. Many other dark figures were there while others continued to pop up. Botaru was there. The green monster thing was eating a piece of the crystal, holding it between his two hands like a hamster, his eyes glowing. The man addresed each robed member as they appeared. "Fellow Akatsuki, this is meeting has been called apon by your leader, but I will speak tonight!" One man said, he had short black hair and wore goggles, his mouth was covored by his cloak. "We are drawn here for a purpose, does any of you have an idea for what this purpose is?" He asked.

Batoru remained silent. Not caring about the purpose of the Akatsuki for now. But when no one answered, he sighed "To take on the task of the former Akatsuki; to capture the jinchuriki and extract the Tailed Beasts from within them. We hold three out of nine as it is." Batoru explained "But, with the exception of the Demonic Beast sealed within out leader." Batoru added.

The man who spoke smiled at Botaru and silently thanked him. "Yes, that is our goal, now... does anyone here have something to say before your missions are handed out?" Some of the people's eyes looked torwards The man with strange eyes and people began to whisper and some people spoke over other obvious things, then the mission's were handed out.

Batoru received his mission "The Nine-Tailed Demon Fox eh?" Batoru stated "That's the Hokage of the Leaf..." Batoru added "Aww, feel bad about getting the jinchuriki of your own village?" a kunoichi from the Hidden Sand asked sarcastically "No Reikokuna." Batoru replied.

Back at the Hidden Leaf, Senshi ran into Ichiraku "Lord Hokage!!!"

Naruto looked over at Shenshi from behind the counter. He grinned and just looked at him for a moment. "...yes?" He asked, his teeth showed through his smile.

"Lookouts have reported of Hidden Flame ninja coming on the attack!" Senshi replied. Akarui stood up, leaving his ramen untouched and ran towards the Main Gates. "Akarui! Wait for me!" Yakumo yelled, running after him. "And that's not all." Senshi continued "Lookouts have also spotted Akatsuki!"[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Chapter 3 - The Elemental Puppeteer]
Batoru walked up to the Hidden Leaf Gate. His Sharingan spotted Akarui at the top quickly before Akarui saw him. When Akarui finally noticed him. He was about to jump and fight him when he heard a voice "You're not strong enough to fight him." as he heard this voice, Akarui froze in place. The figure that said that appeared afterwards, he wore an Akatsuki robe and had Uchiha-black hair. "I am Sasuke Uchiha." he stated.

The Green monster thing was running around rampent in the leaf village, he was invisable and he was knocking over a whole lot of stuff and doing a whole lot of crazy acts. He picked up and orange and had it 'float' slowly across the village to distact the villagers and their fellow ninja. He left the leaf in a whole haze of confusion that gave Botaru a clear path to the Hokage.

Batoru also used genjutsu on the villagers, which made him invisible to their eyes. He walked around the village until he saw a large amount of chakra in Ichiraku. He walked in and released the genjutsu. Making him visible to the village.

"Sasuke Uchiha?" Akarui asked "I've heard of you." Akarui continued "Yes. Your brother reminds me of mine. He too, had the Mangekyo Sharingan." Sasuke stated "Which means, you're too weak." Sasuke finished.

Before Botaru saw it coming, a large orange fist knocked him out of the ramen shop and into the street. Naruto was on him in seconds, far to quick for Botaru's eyes. Sage mode was on instinct now. Orange chakra flowed everywhere as the Hokage literally beat the piss out of Botaru.

Batoru was now on the ground. Blood everywhere. But he then separated into dozens of crows. "The Akatsuki leader taught me the jutsu of Itachi Uchiha." Batoru stated from behind Naruto. "Mangekyo Sharingan." Batoru stated. Batoru's left eye was bleeding as he closed it, then opened it. Black flames surrounded the Hokage and trapped him in what seemed like a closed-off prison.

Naruto Roared and massive winds blew out in all directions. Botaru was blewn of his feet and sent flying into a wooden box of oranges, disorienting him. Naruto leaped through the air and landed on Botaru, knocking his air out. Naruto quickly focused more than a thousand hits to Botaru's chest in a second and never looked into his eyes.

To most villagers, it seemed like the Hokage seemed to be randomly attacking an orange crate. As Batoru managed hand-signs before Naruto attempted to blindly kill him "Uzumaki Sensei. It's useless." Batoru stated in the genjutsu he had Naruto in.

Naruto grinned as he forced the Nine Tail's chakra and escape from the genjutsu. He griped Botaru's ancle and threw him out of the villige.

As Batoru flew in the sky, he split into dozens of crows once more "Amaterasu." he stated, placing Naruto in an inescapable prison of black flames.

Naruto grinned as he pointed behind Botaru, and Botaru looked to find Naruto behind him. In one steady blow, Botaru was seemingly sent flying to the ground.

Taking the hit, Batoru hit the ground but bounced back by hand-springing. His Sharingan picked up on Naruto's chakra "Almost out of Sage Chakra, Uzumaki Sensei." he stated, his eyes returned to normal Sharingan, he looked Naruto in the eye and placed a thought inside his head Rasengan.

Naruto Grinned and made a shadow clone, both grinning eagerly at Batoru. Snapping out of the suggestion, Naruto threw his Shadow Clone at Batoru.

Knowing it was coming. Batoru began to throw many shuriken and kunai at the flying clone.

The clone flying roared, sending the shuriken and kunai back at him as the clone continued to fly at him.

Batorus ducked, the Naruto flying knocks himself into a building and disappears. Batoru began his hand-signs "Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu!" he declared, flames would have been enough to incinerate the Ichiraku Ramen Shop.

"Please, take me as your student." Akarui asked Sasuke.

Suddenly, in a flash, Botaru is covered in Naruto Clones and they dissapear. Leaving behind a larged smoke cloud. A large Orange chakra hand reached out and grabbed Botaru and seemed to slam him into the ground. Naruto was on top of the real Botaru in seconds, slamming the man's face into the ground. Large cracks quaked the earth around them as blood was seemingly flying.

The real Batoru disappeared in a cloud of smoke, leaving behind many paper bombs which blew up in Naruto's face. Being a clone made of paper bombs instead. "You've won for now, Uzumaki Sensei." a voice echoed.

"Very well." Sasuke stated.

Naruto fell to the ground as nearly every Anbu from the village gathered around him. He chuckled as Kenshi ran towards him. "I've still got it!" He said to Kenshi as he raised his hand to pat the boys head.

"Naruto, your only 50!" Kenshi said catching the hand with both of his.

Batoru's hologram appeared in the Akatsuki hideout. "I've failed." he stated "He has gotten stronger since the time he was my sensei."

Akarui and Sasuke left the village. Going at incredibly fast speeds. They stopped when they reached a river. "I guess you'll want to start here." Sasuke stated. "Yes." Akarui replied.

The man with the strange eyes looked up at Botaru, his eyes glimmered like he was happy, but his face didn't change one bit. "It ... is... okay..." He said, his voice cutting back on him for not letting out his full power all the time.

Batoru nodded, then his hologram disappeared.

Sasuke showed Akarui the hand-signs to the Chidori multiple times until Akarui got it right. "Destroy those boulders with a single hit." Sasuke stated, pointing to a large formation of boulders. "Okay." Akarui stated as he charged toward the boulders with incredible speed.

The man looked at the guy who stood in the middle of the clearing, alone. "Sakarukki, your orders are to assassinate Akarui on his training mission... Do... you... got... that?" The man said, he started to talk much slower near the end.

"Yes, master, you will be pleased!" Sakarukki said as he leaped into the air and vanished.

Akarui had managed to destroy the boulders, but ran out of shots with the Chidori "Your limit is three." Sasuke told Akarui. "Now that you have learned the Chidori. I will teach you its Derived Jutsu. But as you cannot use them today." Sasuke stated.

Sakarukki Appeared on top of a tree and activated some strange jutsu where his eyes become all white with a black cross hair in the middle of his right eye. He closses his left eye and zooms in on Akaruki.

Akarui smiled. His Sharingan quickly picked up on Sakarukki's chakra. Seemingly disappearing, but actually running at seemingly impossible speeds, he seemed to reappear behind Sakarukki. "I don't think so." Akarui stated as he kicked the Akatsuki member out of the tree to Sasuke's feet.

Sasuke walked over to check on Sakarukki, but he exploded on them. Smoke going everywhere as more than 20 poisen needles hit Sasuke, taking him down instantly. One needle was close to hitting Akaruki in the shin.

Akarui quickly drew a kunai and deflected the senbon that nearly hit his shin. He then got Sasuke out of the smoke and proceeded to flee with him. Taking him into a cave and started to do some basic-healing that he learned in the ninja academy. Removing the needles and examining their poison. It wasn't a fatal poison. A paralysis poison.

Four Sakaruikki's drop from the air and kneel in front of the cave. One look up and scans it with his eyes. Spying the boy and his teacher in there, he stands and walks into the cave entrace. The others stand outside.

Akarui had a trap set which Sakarukki triggered a few feet in the cave. Causing a dozen of each kunai, shuriken, demon wind shuriken and giant shuriken to come at him in all directions "No escape." Akarui stated with a smile.

The First Sakarukki grinned as all the weapons hit him. The weapons set of a metallic click sound as they each hit and fell to the ground. He laughed as two blades slide out of the top of his arms and he charged into the middle of the cave where Akaruki and his teacher were hiding.

"Metal huh?" Akarui asked "That means Fire." Akarui finished with "Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu!" Akarui declared while doing the hand-signs, sending the giant ball of fire towards the Sakarukki.

A large wave of water rushed up on The first Sakarukki's right side, slamming into the fire ball. A few more waves came in and combined to become the Second Sakarukki. With a menecing grin, another smaller wave rushed up and became a water whip in his hand.

"Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Jutsu!" Akarui declared, attempting to evaporate the Water Clone and melt the Metal Clone "(What is this guy!?!?)" Akarui thought, throwing kunai within the Phoenix Flower Jutsu.

The Water Sakarukki slapped his Water whip and a large wave of water hits the incoming fire attacks, evaporating them. The Metal Sakarukki raised his hand as the weapons came to him and got knocked off. The two cuckled at the same time as they came near.

"Shadow Clone Jutsu!" Akarui declared, 10-20 Akarui clones appeared "Fire Style: Dragon Flame Jutsu!" they all declared, sending roughly between 20-21 dragon-shaped fireballs at the two clones, each fireball combined and created an even bigger dragon which covered the whole cave in front of Akarui and the clones. Melting each and every one of the weapons from Akarui's trap.

One of the Sakarukki's standing outside become a large dragon and explored the cave till he found the others and hit the fire attacks and formed back into a Sakarukki. The additional fire he sucked up had became 30 medium sized fire balls that floated around him as they continued to step torward Akaruki.

"Only one way..." Akarui stated as he grabbed the sword from the knocked-out Sasuke "Chidori!" Akarui declared, he somehow exceeded his three-shot limit and conducted it through the blade. He ran up to the three clones and cut them all with it. The Water Clone became electrified and fell into a puddle of water. The Metal Clone was cut in half and was no longer usable. And the third dissipated in a cloud of smoke. "One left." Akarui stated.

Sasuke opened his left eye, the eye that was facing Akarui, he saw what he did and did a small smile.

Akarui concluded the Chidori Blade but kept his guard up "Very well." he stated. Keeping the sword ready to attack. "(Another Akatsuki member.)" Akarui thought.

[center][u][b]-Flashback-[/b][/u][/center]
"The Akautsuki is a group bent on conquering the world by capturing the Nine Jinchuriki. It was defeated years ago, but is now remade. With your brother, as the only Uchiha." Sasuke explained to Akarui "Each Akatsuki has a cloak such as mine." Sasuke finished "But, if my brother's the only Uchiha, then why do you carry that cloak?" Akarui asked. "Heh." Sasuke didn't answer.

The man stood taller than akaruki, and his face never seemed to change expresion, like a rock that could talk. "I... Am sorry...That I can't talk normal right...now... but, I have... come to take Sakarukki, the elemental...Pupputier, with me... to do a different... Mission, it would appear....That you have won...This...Round..." The Man managed to say before turning around and walking in the direction of the real Sakarukki.

As the man and Sakarukki left, Akarui was breathing heavily. He used all his Chakra in that last Chidori. His vision went blurry due to exhaustion. And he passed out, dropping the sword which slid across the cave floor, causing sparks to fly.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Fragment - a Glimpse of the Past]
A tall and dark young man sat at a table in a dark and musty inn. The place had only a few people on this night, like the usual. He grunted at the old man who was sitting opposite of the young man who had just sat in the wooden chair. "I believe you and I have business to take care of..." The older man had said. Setting his hand on the young boy in the taller chair beside him. The boys eyes glowed, he was kept under a dark hood and cloak. The only other clothes the boy had was some underwear, the shorts he wore and a pair of sandals. The clothes he didn't wear was left in a bag that was tied to the back of his cloak. The boys lips opened slowly and the words that came from him had came from the center of his being.

"I believe your name is Jack, you must take me to the Hidden Leaf Village soon... In a matter of months, the Demonic beast will rise..." The words didn't even seem to match the boys lips.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Chapter 4 -The Two... New and Improved!]
A woken up Sasuke left the cave with Akarui still in it. Leaving behind three things. A spare sword, a letter and a cloak which were all by Akarui's unconscious body. Akarui woke up soon after Sasuke left. Reading the letter. It stating he only needed to teach Akarui Chidori, and let him in on Sasuke's most powerful lightning technique "Kirin..." Akarui stated "Shape Manipulation and Nature Manipulation of Chakra. I can train solo now." Akarui stated with a smile.

Sasuke walked into a large clearing as several men leaped from the forest. A few hundred more leaped out, all wearing akautski robes. The man with the strange eyes had leaped out last. "Sasuke... we are here for you..." The man said, his voice seemed to be getting together again.

"I told you. I left the Akatsuki years ago." Sasuke stated as he threw off the Akatsuki cloak which revealed another cloak "Now stay out of my way...." Sasuke stated as he activated his Mangekyo "Or I'll kill you." he finished.

The man's eyes had slight tinge of blue glow in it. "Bring it on... you stand no chance at my force!" He looked to the sky as a fist of clouds lands on Sasuke. Disipating into clouds on the earth, slowly rising as the other robed men and women leap in. A large fight scene goes off, weapons were rendered usless by metal Sarukki, other elements were taken out of the equation. A large seal appeared in front of The strange-eyed man and it sucked in the chidori that Sasuke had planned.

Sasuke drew his sword, not a normal Chidori. "Chidori Blade!" Sasuke declared, instantly slicing the Metal Sakarukki in half. Ceasing the Chidori Blade he instantly destroyed the clone which rendered other Elements useless "It's over." Sasuke stated as he blinked his left eye "Amaterasu!" Sasuke declared.

The Amaterasu was instantly sucked into the large seal in front of the strange-eyed man. He grinned as a large man covered in rocks had leaped out of the ground and slammed Sasuke in the back of the head. Sasuke fell forward as several other people sent jutsu in his direction.

As Sasuke got hit by every jutsu... or so they thought, he was actually behind a tree as the jutsu were viscously attacking a log. "Why do you want me in the Akatsuki again?" Sasuke declared as his voice seemed to echo from every direction, keeping him hidden.

The strange-eyed man appeared behind Sasuke quitely. "We just don't want you around to use your strength anymore... a man of your talents would be dangerous to leave unchecked... you don't stand a chance Sasuke... you have already told me that there... is no change it!" He said, a kunai was stuck firmly in Sasuke's back. The whole blade was soaked in Paralyzing poisen. As Sasuke fell, the strange man closed his right eye and a three foot by four foot seal appeared to suck Sasuke in. The man had absorbed the portal into his left eye and closed it. He opened his left eye as several other Akautski made it to his position and helped him get back to base.

Akarui had put on the cloak and hid the sword up his sleeve. He exited the cave and went to the area where he and Sasuke began training. It began raining, it had been a day since they were training. So Akarui could use Chidori four times in that day. "Chidori!" Akarui declared as he thrust the Chidori into the ground and it spread throughout the ground, but barely. "(Each day I'll save two shots in case of an ambush like yesterday.)" Akarui thought.

Day 2: "Got it. Chidori Stream!" Akarui declared, sending the Chidori through the ground and at a faraway specific tree which was uprooted and turned into a pile of ashes. "Yes!" Akarui stated as he checked off a Chidori jutsu off a list which Sasuke left behind. "Next up. Chidori Sharp Spear eh?"

Day 3: "Almost. UAAAAGH!" Akarui declared as he attempted the Chidori Sharp Spear, but it fell straight down from his hand. "Ugh, nope." Akarui stated.

Day 4: "Birthday Luck!" Akarui declared as he attempted the Chidori Sharp Spear once more and succeeded. "Chidori Sharp Spear, check, Chidori Senbon, check and last one is... Kirin... I'll do that one later." Akarui stated as he began creating his own Chidori Jutsu.

Day 5: "Chidori Strike!" Akarui declared as he raised his hand into the air and a Chidori Sharp Spear flew into the air. He used Shape Manipulation and it changed directions straight and did the same again, but going down and struck a tree cutting it in half.

Kenshi stood in front of the three posts that Kakashi used to use for training his young students. He concentrated hard on the three points. He closed his eye's shortly before opening them widely and throwing three senbon in a straight line up the post he wast facing on the far right. He did a quickl leap to the left and landed on his feet. He sent another set of senbon in the same line on the middle post. He leaped to his left one more time before he withdrew all the senbon left in his holder. His fingers almost couldn't hold all twenty. He took a deep breath and threw on hand full. The ten senbon thrown hit in a exact circle. He took five from his left over ten and threw them in another circular patarn. He concentrated harder as he threw four more and then the last. The first four hit in a diamond-like shape as the last hit in the center. "Wheeew....." He made a noise as he ran up to grabe the senbon and do it again.

As Kenshi trained, Yakumo was sitting behind the middle training post "...Yesterday was Akarui's birthday." she stated to show Kenshi that she was there. "Senshi Sensei, Zachery and I were planning on a birthday celebration at Ichiraku after our mission." she stated.

Kenshi turned around and picked up the demon wind shuriken that he got for his last birthday. He grinned and he winded his arm back and concentrated on several points. He took a deep breath and opened his eyes, quickly thowing his Deamon wind shuriked and it went flying. Bouncing around in several areas before it stuck in the side of the post that he placed the bulls eye in with senbon.

She sighed at the fact Kenshi wasn't even listening "Aren't you worried about Akarui, Kenshi?" Yakumo asked. "He left on a simple training mission with Sasuke and has been gone for nearly a week..." she continued.

Meanwhile, Akarui discovered a abandoned village. Akarui had recently discovered his third Chakra Element: Water. "Water Style: Great Rain." Akarui stated as the water from a nearby pond flew into the sky and became a cloud "Lightning Style: Great Thunder." he continued as he raised his left hand and what seemed like a Chidori formed in his hand but was launched into the sky. Causing the rain clouds to make thundering sounds. "Now to test the final jutsu..." Akarui stated as he raised his left hand "....Kirin."

Kenshi just sighed and left. He just walked away. He didn't want to talk about Akarui.

The man with strange eyes sat on a stone seat, pearing off the ledge and into the eyes off his followers. He stood, people cheared and praised. "Tonight will be the last night we wonder alone, today we rise together in hopes of a new future. Us whom have our own goals and ideas, we whom have our own morals. Alone, we are outcasts. Together, we are Akautski!" He shouted. His eyes flaring with intent as the men and women alike began to build a camp. This camp being their new home, the first place they will look to.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Chapter 5 - The Bird of Prey]
The construction of the camp took the rest of the next day. Men or woman who did not think they could do the building, had left to find supplies or food. The man with strange eyes, had sat in the chair the whole time. His face did not change once bit. The only on him that was moving was his hair and the ripples on his cloak, the wind brushed them back and forth. If the troops got tired, they were only allowed to sleep on the floor.

The strange man's eyes seemed gleam slightly as he woke up from his day-nap. His eyes traced over the camp as it was being created. He grinned.

Wind picked up in the Hidden Leaf. Leaves were spinning in front of Kenshi in a vortex-fashion. It continued until it was a vortex of pure leaves. No outside of the vortex could be seen. The leaves then flew away. Revealing Akarui "Hey, Kenshi." he stated. Akarui looked.... slightly older, he had gotten taller in the short time.

Kenshi sighed and looked up at Akarui. "Hey..." He said in his little kid voice. His hair was a little limp from all the sweat in it. He was breathing heavy.

The man with strange eyes leaped off his little cliff, he landed on top of the large square block of iron. The iron seemed fortified with many other alloys. He chuckled at how great this camp is forming.

"Eh?" Akarui stated as he began to walk away. Only to stop to allow his sword to fall down his sleeve and into his hand. He turned around and faced Kenshi and pointed the sword at him "Transform into someone.... older and we'll have a taijutsu match, sound good?" he asked.

Kenshi just breathed heavy and his breath slowly started to turn normal. His face dropped another bead of sweat. "I... am really tired. I don't know if I can..." He said around his eavy breathing.

The sword seemed the fly back into the sleeve as Akarui asked "Somethin wrong Kenshi? Usually you're full of energy, even after ANY training." Akarui stated.

"Well... since you left..." He gasped. "I've been woking harder." He slowly came to a normal pase of breathing, his hair still soaked in sweat.

"Heh. Ya learn any Ninjutsu?" Akarui asked. Interested (for like the first time) in Kenshi's training, which would be a surprise to anyone listening.

"Yes..." Kenshi said, curling up into a ball and wrapping his arms around his legs. He was so tired after all the training he did, that if he continued to stand, he'd faint.

Knowing Kenshi would be fine later. Akarui began to walk away, back to the Leaf Gates. "The Bird of Prey; me. The Hawk. The Prey..." Akarui stated as he activated his Sharingan "Batoru!" he finished as he jumped from behind the gates and into the trees.

Batoru was sitting in a chair of an unknown place, only two words came to his mind "It's time." he stated as he created a Shadow Clone. The Clone nodded and ran out the entrance to that place. "....Akarui...."[/spoiler]
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I think it's quite interesting (except for the prologue, which parallels the entire child-Itachi carrying baby-Sasuke during the Nine-Tailed attack...)
But...the storyline is interesting, and I like the plot twists such as Akarui getting separated from his team.
Also, I love Kenshi's role in this :)

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