Renzoku Kira- Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 Its pretty epic being a P.A.S walking around until a demon attacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 Alright sounds good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 He is my new app. It is definitely an improvement. Name: Shin Age: 20 Gender: Male Appearence: Shin is less than average height, only being 5' 10" (if this is the future, than the standard height should be greater). He has blue eyes that are the size of a child's and so, some think him to be younger than he really is. He chose not to grow facial hair to add to people's misinterpretation about how old he is. He still wears his standard military uniform, with all its protections. It is the camo version, because of how he operation. When not in camo mode, it looks black. He has one star that also goes camo. He was taught to kill, but didn't need that training before the apocalypse. Weapons: One Military Grade Survival Plane: An airplane that doesn't look very much like an airplane. It looks mostly like a sphere if you were to look up at it. But really, only the bottom is spherical. The top extends upwards to any number of floors. Shin picked three when he joined the army. One control room and two other floors. Just like a mobile home. But Shin would use it to rescue people from battlefields. Of coarse, he doesn't do that anymore. The plane itself has two front lasers, and a rotating laser before each connecting floor. So, two of those. It only has half a tank of gas left with, Shin predicts, will last him one week if he can manage it. The energy is used for everything, from the stove to the flying. One Energy Shield - You strap it to your arm and spokes extend which produces a yellow energy shield that can block most attacks. One Energy Sword - The same thing as the shield, but in swords form so it can be used to attack. It was based off a movie from the past "Star Wars", but the energy blade brought out can fluctuate. Unfortunately, this isn't the latest model. One DNA Scrambler - A high tech device that Shin had stolen from the military a few months before the apocalypse. It can scramble you DNA around along with other [i]fun[/i] settings. They never found out who took it. Personality: A happy man, he can't help but forgive people. A pacifist, but that doesn't mean he won't be serious in trying to kill the Demons that try to kill him. But what he wants to find out is why the Demons try to kill the humans. He has a theory, but really wants evidence. He has found an abandoned supermarket in the middle of nowhere and has taken up shelter there. It is a couple miles away from the church, but he doesn't know that. He does have ample food, but is eating the stuff that isn't in cans first. He bases his decisions on logic, not emotion usually, but he does show his emotion. It is a balance that gets harder to maintain with the apocalypse. Luckily, there haven't been many important decisions being made yet. He hasn't managed to kill any demons yet, but they haven't killed him ether. Fears: Death in all forms. Wow, my new character is a pacifist who joined the army. But he has a cool location. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzoku Kira- Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 So what would you want us to post next Arashi.....What exactly are we doing now that we know this info. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 @ Lego: Accepted. @ Phalanx: Well, considering this is the place you guys have lived for a little over a year, and you guys only have three months before the place loses it's barrier, meaning that place will no longer be safe, I'm pretty sure there'd be some kind of panic and fear in the place. EDIT: I'm going to be working on a fan-fic, so I may not be as active as I was, or it may not affect me what-so-ever. Right now, I'm not sure how to respond, so I'm going to get started on my fan fic. Thanks ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reinforce Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Name: No-one knows his real name, he is just known as Yami Zettaitekina (Absolute Darkness) or Yami (Darkness) for short Age: No-one knows exactly but thought to be mid 20's Gender: Male Appearence: Yami wears a long black shirt and pants as well as black gloves and black boots. His has long black hair and his whole eyes are also black. Weapons: He wields a sword powered by one that emits a black blade that absorbs anything it comes into contact with and an energy shield that absorbs energy attacks and can block physical attacks. All of these are also powered by the Micro Black Holes and he can use them to recharge energy sources and also to power anything that uses energy. Personality: Yami lost everything in the Apocalypse and because of this has shut off all emotions causing him to be cold and heartless and doesn't care for anyone. He used to be in the military and has all sorts of high tech weapons because of that. He also has some technology that was forbidden because it was too unstable but after the apocalypse he fixed it to be much easier to control. That technology is his Micro Black Holes that power his weapons, armour and his shield. The Micro Black Holes look like small metal balls with three spinning circles of increasing size around it. [img]http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3266/2418938548_0cba39d745.jpg[/img] Centre of the Micro Black Hole but without the reflections. Fears: Emotion and Fear itself. Also, he fears his Micro Black Holes getting out of control and forming into a real Black Hole. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Meh, seems rather...OP'd. His armor basically makes him immune to any kind of attack... Anyone who knows how to effectivly review fan-fics care to read and rate mine? You can get to it by clicking the "Gifted - My Old Story" spoiler. I just have the intro up for now to see if people would like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reinforce Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 I edited the armour and got rid of the gun so hopefully he isn't OP'd now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Slightly better. I'll accept you, but...your weapons seem sligthly better then everyone elses. I dunno if it's just me that feels that. And thank you SO much GreyCat. That was the kind of review I was hoping for. You'll see how the character's personality develops. I'll get started on chapter one ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreyCat Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 No problem. On a side note, Leon is rapidly evolving outside my original concept of him. He's becoming his own man. Not sure how that happened. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzoku Kira- Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Aiden helping cover up a hole just FTW helping others Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 [quote name='GreyCat' timestamp='1296974360' post='4992114'] No problem. On a side note, Leon is rapidly evolving outside my original concept of him. He's becoming his own man. Not sure how that happened. [/quote] Cheetos can do that to a person. Just sayin. [quote name='IPhalanx' timestamp='1296974958' post='4992142'] Aiden helping cover up a hole just FTW helping others [/quote] I lol'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Did anyone bring me home, or am I still in the grocer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzoku Kira- Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 I think so.........*not wanting to admit that I don't know for sure* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Becuase if I'm still at the grocer, I'm probably still lying on that table with a half-stitched cheek. And I don't want to post until I know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 We're just going to say you were brought in the roofless church. EDIT: I'll wait for Lego to post before I post in the IC. That okay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzoku Kira- Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Wait you were brought in I remember Leon looked at your face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreyCat Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Shin is really underestimating the skills of our church dwelling group of PASs. [s]We should totally hijack his ship[/s] Arashi, would things like holy water or scriptures work on the Demonica? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Shin is just happy that you haven't eaten Cat. Also he still has his level 27 shield, level 30 sword, and his stolen level 57 gun. Ps.s. I wrote the levels up quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 @ Leon: He is sadly... And yeah it would. However, almost every major water source was completely evapirated, and very few places have holy water. The chruch we're in actually contains many secret paths and what-not, so holy water would be rather difficult. As for scriptures, it'd take someone with a religious background and knowledge of that area to eliminate them. I didn't mention this as a means to keep it secret, but Alex has that background. He just is keeping it secret because that would just draw attention to himself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreyCat Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 @Lego: Don't underestimate Leon. There [i]is[/i] a reason he has several military grade weapons on his person. Several reasons, in fact. Leon was raised in the church. He just left it after an unfortunate run in with the government. Who knew hacking the district attorney's database and giving a couple bullies a police record was illegal? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 I sure didn't. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreyCat Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Lego, I'll tell you this from now; Leon is hating Shin. Probably always will. We'll see how that works out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 I realize that and it should create some fun roleplaying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTFauKorean Posted February 7, 2011 Report Share Posted February 7, 2011 btw answering the question yes shade did make it back he followed right behind you guys and i caught up last but jumped through the barrier first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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