CrystalCyae Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 It migth have been better to edit your previous post. And I believe this post is too short. Try to describe what Rosa saw, what she felt, describe what she did more. Like how she did it. Snippets of what she said. Yeah And what Zextra said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted January 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 Little Red Lady, your post seems to have disappeared completely... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 ya i edited it and deleted by accident but i added a edit its a lot better hope u like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 It better. I'll say that. The only problem I notice is you said "at the end of the day" near the end of the post. I think we prefer to avoid time skips like that. EDIT: I feel like a fan fic reviewer... Only I'm reveiwing an RPer...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 Well i had to do that.... they left not like a moment after i had to do tha but other then that it was good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted January 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 True. However, you're making progress, so congratulations! After a week or two, you'll have this down. In the meantime, though I see grammar errors, I won't count them as a problem (for right now). Just a tip, as Crystal Star pointed out, try to avoid creating time skips. Most the people in the RP haven't posted yet, so we can't "end the day" until the rest post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 Geez Zex... If we keep this up, thid rp might actually last XD I'll do my post at school, I don't have a lot of time between now and the bus... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 kk i am going to bed in a few min. then i have school so i wont post for 8-10 hours.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted January 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 Sounds great! I look forward to it (and yes, I really hope this one survives! The past 3 RPs I've been in have all died shortly after they started) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 if i have to i will make it that only my caracters will stay on becase my first Rp i am going to stay on for a long time...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 Yeah... I posted because your post gave me the "Introduction" Idea and I just kinda filled the space between with what his normal day will look like... So... I posted now I must Get the rest of my school clothes on... XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 He is a Twilight Invader. Are all of the TI slots taken? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 We should have a couple of slots left, since I've still got one reserved. Well, time to get posting, if I have the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nes!o Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 i reread the rules, found my mistake, corrected it and others, + added a bio, and uploaded his ace card in a spoiler. i think its okay now, but let me know. Oh! is it okay if i make a twilight invader as well? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pyrowiz23 Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 cool a RP that looks like it's going to turn out pretty good! sign me up. [b]Username:[/b] Spedward102 [b]RP name:[/b] Yusuki Haniu [b]Age:[/b] 16 [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Appearance[/b]: Yusuki has blue hair(dyed), with grey eyes as hard as steel. He usually wears his fathers old Ra yellow jacket, and tattered jeans. He prefers to wear black, leather shoes and has a single gold earing in 1 ear. He stands in at around 5'10, and has an academy issued dueldisk. [b]Personality:[/b] Usually reserved, but when he gets a friend he never gives up on them. He is also very studious and works hard on preparing his 'perfect' strategy. At times when he's pushed to his limit he breaks from his shy shell and defeats any and all who stand in his way. [b]Bio:[/b] From a very young age, Yusuki has dreamed of being the best duelist he can be. He was inspired by his father whom was an extremely good duelist himself. But by the age of 10, his world was torn apart by the seams when his father was murdered by a mysterious organization known as the Twilight Invaders. Now he uses his fathers deck in order to duel and defeat anyone who is or was a part of the cult which took his father from him. [b]Faction:[/b] Duel Academia [b]Deck Type:[/b] He uses his fathers "Fabled" deck which expresses the darkness and the power behind the light. [b]Ace Card:[/b] the Fabled Leviathan [spoiler]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20101216110630/yugioh/images/thumb/8/86/FabledLeviathanHA03-EN-ScR-1E.png/300px-FabledLeviathanHA03-EN-ScR-1E.png[/spoiler] [b]Dorm:[/b] Ra Yellow and a YCM friend is king of pain. (my apps better) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nes!o Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 LOL! looks like there might be some friction between our characters. although you know mine will win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 The only one here who could possibly decide who'll win indefinently would be Zextra... and maybe myself and Dem if Zextra feels like it... However... I do really like that app... A lot... yes, it's accepted on my end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzoku Kira- Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 Could we get another post in the IC thread so that way if people see us active we could get more to join and keep this rp going for a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 it is best to post one at a time... so people can get their say in and the action moving properly ... it is a simple concept and I trust that you understand... yes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nes!o Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 [quote name='^v^Techi^v^' timestamp='1296511746' post='4977326'] The only one here who could possibly decide who'll win indefinently would be Zextra... and maybe myself and Dem if Zextra feels like it... However... I do really like that app... A lot... yes, it's accepted on my end. [/quote] mine or Pyrowiz23's? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 "Pyrowiz23's" <--- that kid's... I do not know why for sure... he retains the same qualities as most others I have seen here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzoku Kira- Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 I can its just been a little since the last post thats all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 I think Zex and I are waiting on Dem... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 I Will Win my caracter may hate deuling but there effects dont ven need to attack and i can kill u! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 [quote name='Little Red Lady!' timestamp='1296513392' post='4977376'] I Will Win my caracter may hate deuling but there effects dont ven need to attack and i can kill u! [/quote] I think this qualifies for a "WHAT TEH FUK R U TALKKIN ABUT?"... Lawl... Letters being messed up... =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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