Cyber Altair Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 that's what i have made,so what do you think? i really this one, i made the renders and background by myself and everythng is from scratch exept the two DJ's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 umm its the wrong way up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 what's wrong way up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Its good but it should really be horizontal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 what should be horizontal? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 the banneryouve posted itt horizontally Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 it is???? for me it looks fine but i'll try and fix it. will only take my 2 minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
II DEFiiNED II Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 The text is getting really, really old. And the big black blob in the middle, not so great, but, its good, I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Awesome, Cyber! i wish I could make banners like that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Awesome, Cyber! i wish I could make banners like that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 I think it's cool :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 thanks guys. i'm glad you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 You're making Dark Crystal look bad. I don't like that. Here's a list for you: -Center the text that's supposedly in the middle.-Give the text a border, make it intelligible.-Give the banner a border.-Don't ruin green and black for me, blend your colors and text better.-Don't make your renders so transparent, they're supposed to balance with the text. Start from there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 You're making Dark Crystal look bad. I don't like that. Here's a list for you: -Center the text that's supposedly in the middle.-Give the text a border' date=' make it intelligible.-Give the banner a border.-Don't ruin green and black for me, blend your colors and text better.-Don't make your renders so transparent, they're supposed to balance with the text. Start from there.[/quote'] i dont think so, i dont think the text is bad. - i think that the text's place fit for me, i really want it in the middle of the other fonts not in the middle of the banner.- i dont get what you mean- nope, i dont think it would look good, at least for me.- if i chose another colour then the whole colour scheme is ruined for me and i wouldn't like that.- i wanted the renders to blend with the background and like they and the background are one and i think i did a good job on that. well the text is also a bit transperent to make everything more visible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 I think it personally looks fab!! It goes well with my personal style of used text and my colour scheme ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 that's why i made it lol, sent you a pm you were waiting for lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 You're making Dark Crystal look bad. I don't like that. Here's a list for you: -Center the text that's supposedly in the middle.-Give the text a border' date=' make it intelligible.-Give the banner a border.-Don't ruin green and black for me, blend your colors and text better.-Don't make your renders so transparent, they're supposed to balance with the text. Start from there.[/quote'] i dont think so, i dont think the text is bad. - i think that the text's place fit for me, i really want it in the middle of the other fonts not in the middle of the banner.- i dont get what you mean- nope, i dont think it would look good, at least for me.- if i chose another colour then the whole colour scheme is ruined for me and i wouldn't like that.- i wanted the renders to blend with the background and like they and the background are one and i think i did a good job on that. well the text is also a bit transperent to make everything more visible. I mean you used the font in the wrong place, and did so badly. 1. It doesn't aesthetically fit, and that's the entire point.2. YOU CANNOT READ IT.3. Every banner needs a border. 1px is fine, just give it a border.4. I mean the colors are WAY too harsh. If I were to redo this banner, I would make them less flashy and more blended. Pretty much the only black is that big disturbing blotch in the middle.5. Then blend them with the background using effects and layers! Transparency =/= Blending! YOU WANT YOUR RENDERS TO BE VISIBLE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 I like it. The black blob in the middle hurts it a bit, but I think it's great 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 You're making Dark Crystal look bad. I don't like that. Here's a list for you: -Center the text that's supposedly in the middle.-Give the text a border' date=' make it intelligible.-Give the banner a border.-Don't ruin green and black for me, blend your colors and text better.-Don't make your renders so transparent, they're supposed to balance with the text. Start from there.[/quote'] i dont think so, i dont think the text is bad. - i think that the text's place fit for me, i really want it in the middle of the other fonts not in the middle of the banner.- i dont get what you mean- nope, i dont think it would look good, at least for me.- if i chose another colour then the whole colour scheme is ruined for me and i wouldn't like that.- i wanted the renders to blend with the background and like they and the background are one and i think i did a good job on that. well the text is also a bit transperent to make everything more visible. I mean you used the font in the wrong place, and did so badly. 1. It doesn't aesthetically fit, and that's the entire point.2. YOU CANNOT READ IT.3. Every banner needs a border. 1px is fine, just give it a border.4. I mean the colors are WAY too harsh. If I were to redo this banner, I would make them less flashy and more blended. PRetty much the only black is that big disturbing blotch in the middle.5. Then blend them with the background using effects and layers! Transparency =/= Bleninding! YOU WANT YOUR RENDERS TO BE VISIBLE. i disagree. not every banner needs a border cause it isn't nececary. colours are to fit my liking and DJ's, which is techno to light green so that's why it is that. and as for the last... a whole banner could mess due to the point that some render go over the others and half of the BG is covered and the text is above everything, seriously it wont look good at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 You're making Dark Crystal look bad. I don't like that. Here's a list for you: -Center the text that's supposedly in the middle.-Give the text a border' date=' make it intelligible.[s']-Give the banner a border[/s].-Don't ruin green and black for me, blend your colors and text better.-Don't make your renders so transparent, they're supposed to balance with the text.-The blob in the middle is just a mess. Start from there.Yup, that's pretty much it, with edits. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 lol, i thought you guys would like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 I think it looks amazing! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 I think it looks amazing! :) thnx, i'm glad you liked it, i can make one for you if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 You're making Dark Crystal look bad. I don't like that. Here's a list for you: -Center the text that's supposedly in the middle.-Give the text a border' date=' make it intelligible.-Give the banner a border.-Don't ruin green and black for me, blend your colors and text better.-Don't make your renders so transparent, they're supposed to balance with the text. Start from there.[/quote'] i dont think so, i dont think the text is bad. - i think that the text's place fit for me, i really want it in the middle of the other fonts not in the middle of the banner.- i dont get what you mean- nope, i dont think it would look good, at least for me.- if i chose another colour then the whole colour scheme is ruined for me and i wouldn't like that.- i wanted the renders to blend with the background and like they and the background are one and i think i did a good job on that. well the text is also a bit transperent to make everything more visible. I mean you used the font in the wrong place, and did so badly. 1. It doesn't aesthetically fit, and that's the entire point.2. YOU CANNOT READ IT.3. Every banner needs a border. 1px is fine, just give it a border.4. I mean the colors are WAY too harsh. If I were to redo this banner, I would make them less flashy and more blended. PRetty much the only black is that big disturbing blotch in the middle.5. Then blend them with the background using effects and layers! Transparency =/= Bleninding! YOU WANT YOUR RENDERS TO BE VISIBLE. i disagree. not every banner needs a border cause it isn't nececary. colours are to fit my liking and DJ's, which is techno to light green so that's why it is that. and as for the last... a whole banner could mess due to the point that some render go over the others and half of the BG is covered and the text is above everything, seriously it wont look good at all. Every banner needs a border so it stands from the background. Otherwise it looks out of place. You can't disagree, it's fact. I can't even understand what the hell you typed. From what I discerned, you think the renders make the background impossible to see. That's fine, the background is just there to accent them. The banner isn't about the background, it's about the whole thing. And if one render overlaps, it's not the end of the world. I've done it before, and it's looked FINE. If you don't know what implied edges or lines are, go take Graphic Design next semester and come back. And "it wont look good at all"? Yeah, it will. I could prove it, but I can't get on CS3 right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 7/10:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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