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Bleach: Hollow's Feint [OOC/Not Started/Always Accepting]


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[b]Name: The Red
[b]Gender:Female
[b]Bio:Living a harsh life i died at age 16 had no family no one wanted me i fought long and hard and stole food. I stole to survive i was in the porrest of all places.
I pratice with a wooden sword and ran awayfrom people i stole from help me gain speed. I lived alone in my poor life. Once at age 36 I join the Soul Academeny.
I trained hard and got to the adv. class. I work my butt off there becoming the top of the class. i went and trained day and nite as much as possible i had no friends.
After i graduated i went off as a normal life i decided i dont want to be a soul Reaper but a few years latr after i graduated i got a call that they needed soul reapers so i joined.
[b]Zanpakuto Name:Chimamire no kage(The Bloodstained Shadow)
[b]Shikai Abilities: (5-8 Sentences)My shakai can increase Speed and Agilty by 150%.Once hit the creature begeans to loose engery.
This loose in energy makes them weaker to my power to Slice them. A disavatage is that this effect also works on me so if my attack was block i loose engery. My Shikai as well looses force when i get injured. It decress my speed by 100% of my bonus.
[b]Shikai Appearance:[img]http://www.wsbstudio.net/jstore/media/catalog/product/cache/1/small_image/135x135/5e06319eda06f020e43594a9c230972d/f/i/final-fantasy--rikku-s-red-sword.jpg[/img]
[b]Bankai Name: Kage ga ningen o korosu(The Shadow kills The Man)
[b]Bankai Abilities:It Creates Black wings and a armor to protect me. This as well increase power and Speed from Shikai by 50%.
This armor after awhile decreases my speed. The wings cannot fly only glide so jumping targets can attack and hit.
This as well shortens my sword and my agility to fight back.






[b]Bankai: Appearance:
[img]http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg149/Goddess_Of_Yaoi/Yaoi/anime-2.jpg[/img]
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[quote name='TheFinalFan' timestamp='1296408270' post='4974120']
Coyote Starrk, would you please stop shortposting in your own RP? Using quotes doesn't count.
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you have absolutely 100% no room to talk at all, consider this was your first post

"Almost...there..." [color=#918151] "Po, we need to get going."[/color] "But I've made a breakthrough!"[color=#918151]"Breakthrough, schmeakthrough! You have a meeting! Now!" [/color] Po, the 12th Company Captain, sighed and placed something back under a tarp, then left the Shinigami Research and Development Institute Building to head to the captain's meeting.

After you take out all the enters.

and these are all his posts.

Burrado had left the squad barracks to go and find Urahara and Yoruichi. He had ran into two new recruits, who had been conversing for sometime."Hello there. You two are here to become Soul Reapers here right?"


"First of all. You dont need to get so excited. You already seem older than I do," Burrado chuckled "and to answer you question, I need you two to come with me. You both seem very promising and I want to see what Urahara and Yoruichi think."

"Why hello there Akira." Burrado could sense a high amount of reiatsu within all of the group. "To be honest, I cant really tell you until you guys come with me. Including you Akira." He gestured. "Lets go." The weather was fairly nice today. The rush of soul reapers through out the seiretei was almost blinding. The walk to the barracks was fairly short, however, instead of going to the meeting room as promised, Burrado opened the door to a type of training facility. "Please wait here while I go get the others. Urahara and Yoruichi will be here soon."


secondly, your first post was 75% speaking, so yeah. So if speaking doesn't count your post is this long

Po, the 12th Company Captain, sighed and placed something back under a tarp, then left the Shinigami Research and Development Institute Building to head to the captain's meeting.

even though your post wasn't technically short posting you don't have the reasoning or skill behind your accusation. I don't wont an argument or a fight, I just want us to just go about the role play.
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