Desu the Blue Nerd Posted March 25, 2012 Report Share Posted March 25, 2012 My mom just got the book yesterday and she read 218 pages straight .___.Meaning it's my turn after she's done (probably by today). I died.Heads-up:As I wrote this, I was going chapter by chapter, meaning I was mostly improvising with the story until the last few chapters. And with most of the chapters, I included lots of YCM members as cameos, some only appearing one time and never being heard of again.So honestly, DEF's main problem is there are way too many characters clogging the fic because I tried giving screen time to whoever wanted it and that kind of thing. Aside from that, I'd hope the story itself is decent and the fights are at least passable.Oh, by the way, Noob decided to read DEF too a while ago. Not sure how far he got. T.G.I Fridays.It's sad though, they never let me eat their pizza anymore because it's on the kids menu >_>So I have to settle for a dumb steak now.You poor thing. How is it? It's pretty good. I thought it was supposed to be dark but it isn't. It's incredibly funny and the action is solid. Pretty cliche stuff but I think it's more of a joke that they make it that way. DesuLook at everyone in DEF.They all have weeeeird names >.>Good point.Your pic's fitting anyhow.I agree completely. Though this makes me wonder...are you black or something?...black...? Why the hell...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raine Posted March 25, 2012 Report Share Posted March 25, 2012 Though this makes me wonder...are you black or something? ... ... ...only in si- *murdered* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Exodia Posted March 25, 2012 Report Share Posted March 25, 2012 *Holding a bloody knife* What? *Cleans knife with cloth* I didn't do anything. It was that guy. *Points to thin air, then moves finger slowly* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Oh, by the way, Noob decided to read DEF too a while ago. Not sure how far he got. Probably not far at all. And I heard Needless had some similarities to Gurren Lagann despite no mechas. I'll need to check it out soon....black...? Why the hell...? I dunno.So you're a white boy after all? Oh and saw 21 Jump Street today.Funny as hell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Probably not far at all.Didn't think so. He hasn't been on much. Can't help but worry about that idiot. ;_; And I heard Needless had some similarities to Gurren Lagann despite no mechas. I'll need to check it out soon.I thought the same thing when I watched it. :/ I dunno.So you're a white boy after all?Well duh. -__- Oh and saw 21 Jump Street today.Funny as hell.I want to see it. It looks really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Hey man, be happy for him. He actually got himself a life >3> And trust me, the movie's dumb and stupid like Hangover, Step Brothers, that kind of stuff, but you're a teenage guy, so you're going to laugh your a*s off and enjoy yourself regardless/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Hey man, be happy for him. He actually got himself a life >3>No, I'm WORRIED. That guy can do some pretty stupid sh*t. -__- And trust me, the movie's dumb and stupid like Hangover, Step Brothers, that kind of stuff, but you're a teenage guy, so you're going to laugh your a*s off and enjoy yourself regardless/I liked those movies. Still do. -__- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 EhHe won't die.Hopefully.I think my friend Dranzer died, made me sad... DON'T GO -__- AT THOSE MOVIES, THEY'RE AWESOME.HANGOVER 3 WILL BE DOPE BRO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Hey guys, got a riddle for y'all: What do you get when you cross a black woman with a homeless person that doesn't take no for an answer? The cops. Plus a bunch of kids that might go home cussing from what they heard. xD Yeah, interesting day at work. But Fuse, don't expect me to read the whole thing in less than a month, cause it takes me two minutes to read 3 paragraphs including the ADD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Yeah, interesting day at work.So many questions... But Fuse, don't expect me to read the whole thing in less than a month, cause it takes me two minutes to read 3 paragraphs including the ADD....Good luck, mate.You'll need it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Yep. Final page count: 587 (size 14 Arial font) Almost wanna be like "FUQ DIS s***!" Wish it was a published novel. Then I'd actually read the whole thing. ;3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted March 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 As I wrote this, I was going chapter by chapter, meaning I was mostly improvising with the story until the last few chapters. And with most of the chapters, I included lots of YCM members as cameos, some only appearing one time and never being heard of again.So honestly, DEF's main problem is there are way too many characters clogging the fic because I tried giving screen time to whoever wanted it and that kind of thing. Aside from that, I'd hope the story itself is decent and the fights are at least passable.As I said I am putting those who can actually be of use there, maybe drop names, and do as I please. DesuLook at everyone in DEF.They all have weeeeird names >.>Of course they do, lolYour pic's fitting anyhow.And I thought it was as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Y'know, I was bored one day, so I figured out how exactly Ken would go axe crazy and destroy the world. The plan turned out to be quite effective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Coolio! # 502: Neko Miko <3 I'm in right? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted March 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Yes >> And Broken how so? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted March 27, 2012 Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 hat's Broken talking about. ._.; EhHe won't die.Hopefully.I think my friend Dranzer died, made me sad... Dude, that guy's my best bro. He's too f*cking awesome to die that easy. I'm just worried he got arrested or something.Hey guys, got a riddle for y'all: What do you get when you cross a black woman with a homeless person that doesn't take no for an answer? The cops. Plus a bunch of kids that might go home cussing from what they heard. xD Yeah, interesting day at work. But Fuse, don't expect me to read the whole thing in less than a month, cause it takes me two minutes to read 3 paragraphs including the ADD. I think I started reading when it was like chapter 27. I caught up to in it in way less than a month. Although, I think it was summer so I had a lot of time. ._.; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted March 27, 2012 Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 Forgot I was a member here. Hai. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted March 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 Yes you are Creator . . . Oh not here too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted March 27, 2012 Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 Oh, that post was largely so I would start getting notifications again. I promise not to post anything you don't want to see. For at least a week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted March 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 Nah Creator I don't mind having you around at the hotel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted March 27, 2012 Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 I don't mind my role model sticking around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted March 27, 2012 Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 Oh please, I'm not out to set an example Kujo. I just get bored sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted March 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 Creator its DF . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted March 27, 2012 Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 Creator's alive? That's a new one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted March 27, 2012 Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 @JakeI know who it is. I'm an idol of his for some reason or another. Oh great, it's this dipwad again. I thought I ditched this guy awhile ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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