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So either I . . . oh you know what screw it.

 

Rain! In the story you're going to be either a trap, a tranny or just a cross dresser because I'm tired of wondering your gender!

 

In Denver's DEF he's a dude. So just make sure you make his real mgender a dude. Although he got his ass kicked by Hina so I think making him a trap works pretty well. A TRAP WITH A MOTHERF*CKING CLAYMORE!

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In Denver's DEF he's a dude. So just make sure you make his real mgender a dude. Although he got his ass kicked by Hina so I think making him a trap works pretty well. A TRAP WITH A MOTHERF*CKING CLAYMORE!

 

A-what-a-wha-what? I was in a story?

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When was I in your story!?

 

I remember Archwing, he broke my profile comment virginity.

 

I had Status, this rogue faction go crazy in the sewers.

Then some Mods and the Black Knights crashed the party and arrested most of you guys. Apparently I had you fight Hina.

Wynn, the leader, escaped after killing Arch and bringing a band of people with him.

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I had Status, this rogue faction go crazy in the sewers.

Then some Mods and the Black Knights crashed the party and arrested most of you guys. Apparently I had you fight Hina.

Wynn, the leader, escaped after killing Arch and bringing a band of people with him.

 

Oh... and I lost, how?

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You had a small five second slot where you were pinned against the wall by Hingaku (Alice). Probably a few lines before but not much very special.

 

...you know what? I lost all interest the moment you started talking.

 

 

 

 

...Wait, there was something about RainexHina? That's hot.

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I had Status, this rogue faction go crazy in the sewers.

Then some Mods and the Black Knights crashed the party and arrested most of you guys. Apparently I had you fight Hina.

Wynn, the leader, escaped after killing Arch and bringing a band of people with him.

 

I still like how Nobuo (the character based off of me) nearly beat a mod in that fight by using a badass system of weaponry and combos, got hit point blank in the face with explosives, and still got away showing up completely fine later on...and then got his ass kicked by Lora and some prick.

I shoved a lot of cameos in v.v

Sad part is, I probably only knew half the people I mentioned just by name at the time.

 

I don't even think we knew eachother that well when I got some random profile comment from you asking about my Tatsuma avi.

...Wait, there was something about RainexHina? That's hot.

 

B*tch please. She was obviously there for me.

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I still like how Nobuo (the character based off of me) nearly beat a mod in that fight by using a badass system of weaponry and combos, got hit point blank in the face with explosives, and still got away showing up completely fine later on...and then got his ass kicked by Lora and some prick.

Lolol power levels

Ever think Marble was just weak ;3

 

I don't even think we knew eachother that well when I got some random profile comment from you asking about my Tatsuma avi.

Oh yeah, that's right.

Then you started reading and I was all

"Eh, I can give this guy another fight"

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1) A bit but a mod is a mod. And haven't you said they're stronger than normal people? Also Nobuo is like...I don't really know but wasn't I like recently 15 when he appeared? So there's still that age and supposed experience difference. And by the way...Marble>Nobuo>Chris. If Marble was weak and beat Nobuo then Chris is the story's biggest weakling since Nobuo blocked a punch from Chris just by flexing his abs (odd touch but I still find it funny as hell).

2) Dude, you love Nobuo's fights and you know it. You've said how Nobuo's fights are pretty high up in there in your faves. I'm the one who remembers trivial details. Don't try and argue this. :3

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1. I think so? That'd be the expectation.

I might have made him older than that, don't remember >.>

I don't believe you ever mentioned an age. :/

And that's what makes Chris balanced as a main character :T

Of course. I'm not saying it's bad that other characters are stronger but if you dis on a guy who could have kicked his ass ninety times over then it just plain looks bad. For Chris and the big bad guy he killed with a few friends. :/

2. Yeah...Chris vs Nobuo was fun.

I need to let him win a fight someday >>

All his losses have been pretty acceptable so far.

First fight- A mod who is a person with fighting capabilities above anormal human with cheap as f*ck tricks. Nobuo had cool sh*t up his sleeve (or it was his sleeve) but he didn't just randomly pull it out in sudden surprise. Nah, he was pretty honorable about it. Like, "Hey, I have ANOTHER weapon." Marble was like, "Oh hey *BOOM*" And Nobuo got pretty damn close to f*cking him up too.

Second Fight- 2 on 1 and he may have had a pole broken over his head beforehand yet he was like, "Nope, I'm too cool so Chuck Testa." Another pretty close fight but numbers got him.

Third fight- This was against Chris. Apparently he got three times as badass since the two on one fight. He only had his two nanopistols and was holding back so Chris could win. Also got hit with the banhammer and was pretty much fine five seconds later. Even doing push ups to train to get back at Remo.

 

tl;dr Nobuo is still displayed as being such a badass with so much potential that I don't really care that much if he does win. It's also a pretty funny running gag you got going there.

 

P.S.S. I already know that Jake pretty much makes up for it. <3

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True, Nobuo was probably in the top 10 strongest.

<3

I need to make him more balanced in the rewrite, but he'll still retain his badassery.

Well I think some actual characterization and backstory with him would be nicer. I'm not saying this just because it's me but he definitely had more importance than most status members and was actually a pretty decent character for what little he had. Hell, maybe give him a reason to hold back. Maybe he's a tad bit more logical and intelligent than the remaining status members. Not to toot my own horn but I do tend to be. :/

And rename him.

Oh thank god. Yes. Do this. Make his last name Desperaux. French or not it is the greatest last name of all time.

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I was thinking Desmond Finale, though Desmond "Finale" Desperaux sounds even better.

I'm keeping Desmond so we can call him Desu :3

 

And trust me, I know.

I'm not sure about the Status sub-plot staying or not yet, but I'm definitely reworking its goal.

Because even though I gave you an explanation, I have to admit, most of it was pulled out of my a*s on the spot >.>

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I was thinking Desmond Finale, though Desmond "Finale" Desperaux sounds even better.

I'm keeping Desmond so we can call him Desu :3

 

Yes. Just plain yes. I now have to start using Desmond when doing more realistic names.

 

And trust me, I know.

I'm not sure about the Status sub-plot staying or not yet, but I'm definitely reworking its goal.

Because even though I gave you an explanation, I have to admit, most of it was pulled out of my a*s on the spot >.>

 

I know how you feel. I had an RP character who had a split personality people thought were gay. I basically pulled out of my a** an amazing rant that was basically how he didn't give a f*ck and related even his name to his position as a split personality. I had a feeling yours was an ass pull but a good one either way. I liked it.

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