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Jake the Sage

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Speaking of fan-fics, I'm tempted to have my little short story reviewed here, but at the same I don't ._.

Speaking of short stories, when is that short story thread gonna go up, Desu? ._.

 

Turns pout Agro f*cked up and forgot I was going to do it so he recommended the idea to Bahumat. I'm going to wait a little bit until it's dead. Shouldn't take too long.

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Verz thread? Bahamut?

Ah, interesting.

[spoiler=The first paragraph]Gleaming from beyond, a special cloud laid in the midst of everything around it. Lights from the stars and reflection of those lights on the moons illuminated each aspect of the unknown. When the stars died out, their lights still lived on for time. But in where the cloud was or still is, time never existed. From the shapes that the special figure, the cloud, transformed to and from, the distinct form of this object never was. With such a standstill, action always happened around it, but never in the exact place it was in. In this location, each little second that went by would feel like millennium for the living things. Life never exists for those who have none to live.

 

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Jake isn't here at the moment. May I take your jacket?

 

Verz thread? Bahamut?

Ah, interesting.

[spoiler=The first paragraph]Gleaming from beyond, a special cloud laid in the midst of everything around it. Lights from the stars and reflection of those lights on the moons illuminated each aspect of the unknown. When the stars died out, their lights still lived on for time. But in where the cloud was or still is, time never existed. From the shapes that the special figure, the cloud, transformed to and from, the distinct form of this object never was. With such a standstill, action always happened around it, but never in the exact place it was in. In this location, each little second that went by would feel like millennium for the living things. Life never exists for those who have none to live.

 

 

You've got skill. I can say that. I'll be klooking forward to your writing.

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