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Actually Shizuo you are doing VERY well, better than I honestly had given you initial credit for.

 

Brothar to be honest is disappointing me. He is good but dude you have some major flaws.

In what way? I guess I understand the confusing wording and the broken powers, but how does that disappoint you?

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For instance you stated your power was super strength and durability; well maybe you haven't SAID so, but you are using them none the less.

 

During this entire fight I haven't seen you go beyond that at all. Also you keep within character, you aren't acting like someone else or becoming cocky in the least bit.

 

Not to mention, you are getting hit and showing the effects of the battle.

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For instance you stated your power was super strength and durability; well maybe you haven't SAID so, but you are using them none the less.

 

During this entire fight I haven't seen you go beyond that at all. Also you keep within character, you aren't acting like someone else or becoming cocky in the least bit.

 

Not to mention, you are getting hit and showing the effects of the battle.

Is that a bad thing? I'm not sure what you mean.

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How I am doing well? o.o

Please elaborate on that.

Well you certainly can tell a good story without saying much. You know how to collab and fight well with your fellow RPer rather than just "playing to win" you play to tell a story. And I have TONS of respect for that.

 

You sir. Have decent amounts of win in you.

 

Also, what Jake said.

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Well you certainly can tell a good story without saying much. You know how to collab and fight well with your fellow RPer rather than just "playing to win" you play to tell a story. And I have TONS of respect for that.

 

You sir. Have decent amounts of win in you.

 

Also, what Jake said.

That seems to be my biggest flaw. My stories don't really have much meaning to my characters, and if they do, I do a sh*tty job of elaborating it.

It's been a while. I've been suffering from writer's block for months now. I need to warm up to it a little more.

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That seems to be my biggest flaw. My stories don't really have much meaning to my characters, and if they do, I do a sh*tty job of elaborating it.

It's been a while. I've been suffering from writer's block for months now. I need to warm up to it a little more.

One thing is for sure. I was certainly had no clue about you all when I said what I did earlier.

 

(excluding what I said about Striker of course)

 

Uh Brothar none of that was too you. Those are all too Shizuo to be honest.

 

You are actually doing the worst amongst us when it comes to actual Roleplaying (8 /)

I think he's doing alright. Not "bad" per say. But like he just said he needs to just flesh out his character a bit more. I find the whole "darkness manipulation" trope a bit overdone but he works it well. His whole molecular phazing thing is potentially OP but he keeps a decent handle on it. He just has some rough edges that need polishing. Remind you of a certain "Broxret XV" you used to know eh Jake?

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I think he's doing alright. Not "bad" per say. But like he just said he needs to just flesh out his character a bit more. I find the whole "darkness manipulation" trope a bit overdone but he works it well. His whole molecular phazing thing is potentially OP but he keeps a decent handle on it. He just has some rough edges that need polishing. Remind you of a certain "Broxret XV" you used to know eh Jake?

 

LOL very much so.

 

And yeah he isn't doing too bad, but again he needs to work.

I'll gladly agree on the darkness manipulation and being "death incarnate"

 

Also Brothar molecular manipulation/instant regeneration is a no go. It is too OPed and makes the fight less fun. I mean I might have to completely obliterate you to beat you, which isn't fun nor interesting to do.

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I'm not involved cause I really don't want to deal with BS (mostly caused by me).

*throws entire crate of Oreos at Striker and then immediately begins dancing*

 

PROGRESS!!! SWEEET MOTHER OF JESUS PROGRESS!!!! SING HALLELUJAH!!!

 

Buddy!! *cracks open a bottle of Sarsaparilla and another of Root Beer* you've earned yourself a drink for tonight!

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LOL very much so.

 

And yeah he isn't doing too bad, but again he needs to work.

I'll gladly agree on the darkness manipulation and being "death incarnate"

 

Also Brothar molecular manipulation/instant regeneration is a no go. It is too OPed and makes the fight less fun. I mean I might have to completely obliterate you to beat you, which isn't fun nor interesting to do.

Alright. I'll change my character as soon as the battle ends.

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You were almost great. Don't even beat yourself up over it. From where I was getting pounded on, you looked like you had potential.

I'm not beating myself up for it, I just don't seem to have the development skills to make my character actually worth fighting with. :/

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