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Ice. Newbie

Ice.

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Wrong question. The correct question is, why did this thing you're feeling not happen sooner.

 

Because I thought it was stupid.

 

And then this kid had the nerve to complain about how bad his life is when he has it good.

 

That's the final straw, and the one thing that will make me hate a person with all of my guts (ex: when I hated Black).

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Shadow Zero

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Shadow, beat this. *fires Treehouse laser onto Shadow's cannon destroying it* They don't call me hotshot for nothing.

......*whips out the Mega Cannon*

 

Thankfully I have no shame.

 

*Fires MoonStone Cannon at Striker's Cannons and replaces them with giant flowers*

I could so hug you right about now. ^^

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The D.M. Newbie

The D.M.

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[spoiler=Zetsubou Black:The Blood Red Sin]

He stood alone. Atop the balcony overlooking the city streets. It was here that he would be finished with him. All the fear, the doubt that kept him from living, his inner sin, Marsuvees Black. He turned in the darkness of night to view his shadow. Not visible but always present, even in his nightmares. Marsuvees Black made himself visible to the man he had been tormenting all his life. Their clothes the same. The same black suit and tie, the same long-brimmed hat and the same white gloves and polished black shoes. They were both dressed for a formal affair. Murder. One had a cool blue glow amid his eyes and the other had a venomous icy glow about his glare. One's face portrayed a cool composure and a scowl of determination. The others face twisted into a familiar, sickening grin that revealed all of his daggerlike fangs.

 

"So baby...looks like ya finally want to settle this? Heheh bout time ya grew a pair HUH Black?!? You forgettin i f*ckin MADE you who you are baby!?"

 

Black didn't listen. He was a new man. Powerful and independent of this bothersome shadow. Without another word he generated a Lanza Del Relampago. A warm familiar lance of lightning. His shadow did the same and the two began their dance of death. The two fearsome and powerful fighters clashed again and again each time sending waves of bright-green energy flowing from their weapons like a divine lightshow. But one slip meant death. One moment of hesitation meant failure. And both fighters knew this. Marsuvees smirked at his foe and powered forward, knocking Black off balance. Just as he would meet his fate however Black deflected what would be the killing blow by rapidly twirling his Lanza in defense. He sprung back to his feet kicking Marsuvees squarely in the jaw. At that moment Caeda appeared atop the hotel. Wondering why Black had left their room. Marsuvees was upon her in a flash. Pressing his Lanza to her throat he gave a cold command.

 

"Drop your Lance or the b**** dies!"

 

Black gritted his teeth. The monster knew he was beaten. The creature of darkness had become cowardly. Even enough to exploit her. Damn him. Damn him to 1,000 hells! But he couldn't. Not with her in the way. Marsuvees knew all his moves. The instant he tried anything she'd die. His lance faded to nothing in his hands. Caeda looked to Black with tears of fear in her eyes.

 

"H-help..me..b-"

 

"SHUT UP B*TCH!!!"

 

Marsuvees snapped at her and glared at his counterpart wildly.

 

"I always was better than you...told ya you were nothin without me baby...NOTHING!! You've gone way too soft. Jake...Andx...EVERYONE in R.P.820. ALL OF EM ARE WEAKNESSES!! And now Cherry and this b*tch...ya sicken my stomach baby..."

 

He grinned twistedly and pressed his mouth to hers. Black's eyes widened in an insane mixture of shock, pain, and most of all Rage. Pure unadulterated Rage. Marsuvees drank it down like alchohol.

 

"That's right...get angry...hate me...HATE ME MORE BABY!!!"

 

Black removed his hat and gave Marsuvees a cold stare.

 

"Caeda close your eyes. It'll only be for a moment. But i don't want you to see this."

 

Marsuvees twitched defensively as Black began to approach. His eyes going from a cold blue to blood red before finally becoming black with red pupils. He glared down at Marsuvees with a look that paralyzed him. Marsuvees attempted to move but couldn't. It was as if time was frozen in fear. Black put his hand to Marsuvees' throat and lifted him into the air with one hand.

 

"This...is my purity. The symbol of the fact that I have overcome you. I guarantee you'll be one of the few who sees it. Consider yourself honored. I've become pure now. So simply put. I can purify whomever I look upon. With these eyes..."

 

Marsuvees began screaming in bloody, bloody agony and Caeda kept her eyes shut tightly. She didn't want to see what Black was doing to this man. If she had opened her eyes. She would not have comprehended it. No being. Mortal or Immortal could have comprehended it. The visage in Black's eyes was so mind-wrenchingly horrible that Marsuvees burned away. First his clothes. followed by his skin and then his muscles. His veins, arteries and nerves soon followed. His organs turned to black dust next and his skeleton dissolved from the feet up. Till nothing was left but a skull. This too burned away until Black was left with an eyeball, twisted in fear in his hand. This he crushed without emotion. His eyes returned to normal as he collapsed to his knees. Caeda ran to embrace him. The two held each other under the moonlight. Black had found his redemption. His solace. And his place. In her arms. Having protected the people he loves. By purging his Blood Red Sin

 

 

 

Warning. Contains only one of Black's ACTUAL moves. And some amounts of Emo. But it has Squee also. So that's good

 

 

My tune for this story

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Kazooie

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[spoiler=Zetsubou Black:The Blood Red Sin]

He stood alone. Atop the balcony overlooking the city streets. It was here that he would be finished with him. All the fear, the doubt that kept him from living, his inner sin, Marsuvees Black. He turned in the darkness of night to view his shadow. Not visible but always present, even in his nightmares. Marsuvees Black made himself visible to the man he had been tormenting all his life. Their clothes the same. The same black suit and tie, the same long-brimmed hat and the same white gloves and polished black shoes. They were both dressed for a formal affair. Murder. One had a cool blue glow amid his eyes and the other had a venomous icy glow about his glare. One's face portrayed a cool composure and a scowl of determination. The others face twisted into a familiar, sickening grin that revealed all of his daggerlike fangs.

 

"So baby...looks like ya finally want to settle this? Heheh bout time ya grew a pair HUH Black?!? You forgettin i f*ckin MADE you who you are baby!?"

 

Black didn't listen. He was a new man. Powerful and independent of this bothersome shadow. Without another word he generated a Lanza Del Relampago. A warm familiar lance of lightning. His shadow did the same and the two began their dance of death. The two fearsome and powerful fighters clashed again and again each time sending waves of bright-green energy flowing from their weapons like a divine lightshow. But one slip meant death. One moment of hesitation meant failure. And both fighters knew this. Marsuvees smirked at his foe and powered forward, knocking Black off balance. Just as he would meet his fate however Black deflected what would be the killing blow by rapidly twirling his Lanza in defense. He sprung back to his feet kicking Marsuvees squarely in the jaw. At that moment Caeda appeared atop the hotel. Wondering why Black had left their room. Marsuvees was upon her in a flash. Pressing his Lanza to her throat he gave a cold command.

 

"Drop your Lance or the b**** dies!"

 

Black gritted his teeth. The monster knew he was beaten. The creature of darkness had become cowardly. Even enough to exploit her. Damn him. Damn him to 1,000 hells! But he couldn't. Not with her in the way. Marsuvees knew all his moves. The instant he tried anything she'd die. His lance faded to nothing in his hands. Caeda looked to Black with tears of fear in her eyes.

 

"H-help..me..b-"

 

"SHUT UP B*TCH!!!"

 

Marsuvees snapped at her and glared at his counterpart wildly.

 

"I always was better than you...told ya you were nothin without me baby...NOTHING!! You've gone way too soft. Jake...Andx...EVERYONE in R.P.820. ALL OF EM ARE WEAKNESSES!! And now Cherry and this b*tch...ya sicken my stomach baby..."

 

He grinned twistedly and pressed his mouth to hers. Black's eyes widened in an insane mixture of shock, pain, and most of all Rage. Pure unadulterated Rage. Marsuvees drank it down like alchohol.

 

"That's right...get angry...hate me...HATE ME MORE BABY!!!"

 

Black removed his hat and gave Marsuvees a cold stare.

 

"Caeda close your eyes. It'll only be for a moment. But i don't want you to see this."

 

Marsuvees twitched defensively as Black began to approach. His eyes going from a cold blue to blood red before finally becoming black with red pupils. He glared down at Marsuvees with a look that paralyzed him. Marsuvees attempted to move but couldn't. It was as if time was frozen in fear. Black put his hand to Marsuvees' throat and lifted him into the air with one hand.

 

"This...is my purity. The symbol of the fact that I have overcome you. I guarantee you'll be one of the few who sees it. Consider yourself honored. I've become pure now. So simply put. I can purify whomever I look upon. With these eyes..."

 

Marsuvees began screaming in bloody, bloody agony and Caeda kept her eyes shut tightly. She didn't want to see what Black was doing to this man. If she had opened her eyes. She would not have comprehended it. No being. Mortal or Immortal could have comprehended it. The visage in Black's eyes was so mind-wrenchingly horrible that Marsuvees burned away. First his clothes. followed by his skin and then his muscles. His veins, arteries and nerves soon followed. His organs turned to black dust next and his skeleton dissolved from the feet up. Till nothing was left but a skull. This too burned away until Black was left with an eyeball, twisted in fear in his hand. This he crushed without emotion. His eyes returned to normal as he collapsed to his knees. Caeda ran to embrace him. The two held each other under the moonlight. Black had found his redemption. His solace. And his place. In her arms. Having protected the people he loves. By purging his Blood Red Sin

 

 

 

Warning. Contains only one of Black's ACTUAL moves. And some amounts of Emo. But it has Squee also. So that's good

 

I think Black will like it. ^^

 

I don't think it was bad at all.

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Kazooie Newbie

Kazooie

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You...liked it? And...the butler like it too?

 

*dies*

*Goes to Heaven and sings with the Angels and Haruhi for a breif. Blissful moment*

*returns to life*

 

Yaaaaaay...

 

...Well, it's not like it was bad or anything. xD

 

It's short, but good enough. ^^

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