вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 You are a supernatural creature of your choosing fighting against an exorcist . . . go >83 confused... do u mean a priest? a priest performs exorcisms on possessed people... will you be more descriptive? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 Instea dof exorsist lets just go with a monster hunter, you pick everything else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Dark one~ Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 Well someone actually just recently came to me for help, so I guess I am able to do one-on-one teaching your a toutor so am i i help a kid iin my class he is kinda stupid to say the least Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 And 99.57378957823975892% of YCMembers hate school. I am a percentage of that bunch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 your a toutor so am i i help a kid iin my class he is kinda stupid to say the leastI should be capitalized, you need a period or some other sort of punctuation, what is a toutor? And capitalize the beginning letter of your sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 Believe me people you WILL miss it B | And Party what do you tudor him in? Because, quite honestly, I do hope it isn't in grammar ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Dark one~ Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 no math is my specialty not writing i have a C in thaat but an A+ in math Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 no math is my specialty not writing i have a C in thaat but an A+ in math Grades: English (AP): B+Math III (Trigonometry): A-World History (A): APhysics II: B+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Dark one~ Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 grades Math2[ap]:A+English:C+World history:B- im not going to post the rest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 I majored in english and writting, but I was horrible in math X C Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 I wake up, blinded it seems. Everything is dark and i am unaware of my current state. "what am i..." i quietly whisper to my self. "you are of a special kind" i hear a voice speak from afar. "who are you? what about me is special? I am just an ordinary druid." I am still unable to see anything more than two feet away from me. "You are no longer this druid you speak of. You are stuck in your current form." i chuckle knowing that this fact is impossible. "that cant be true, at any moment i can become anything i want to be." I try to stand up and realize that i have only 2 legs. The last thing i remember was being a Unicorn and running from... "That is not true, when you fell and hit your head i gave you a potion. As it turns out a Magical Bear is worth more than a Unicorn." I stumble to the ground, this potion paralyzed me. I feel his cold dark hand grab the scruff of my neck. I turn to bite him, only to feel the even colder barrel of a gun touch my head. "hunter, you forgot one thing" The hunter looks to see a rock, far off in the cave we have ran into, lift. Feeling returns to my paws and as the hunter dodges the rock i scratch him on the face. It is still hard to see but its getting easier. "i still have my magic." the hunter moans as he stumbles against a wall on the far side of the cave. I feel the blood on my paw, this give me a reinsurance that i can once again be a free man. I charge at the hunter, only to hear the bang of a gun, only to feel a bullet penetrate my heart and stop my blood flow. "your worth more alive, but ill make due" Everything turns black as i become no more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Dark one~ Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 I majored in english and writting, but I was horrible in math X C really i find it easy i am starting trig here preaty soon and i am in algrabra 2 it is so easy to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 Yeah writting comes naturally to me. And Dwight . . . that sounds all and well, but you are breaking one of my personal pet peeves- Speech Position.Place it at the beginning and/or ending of each paragraph. Redo it to fit that and I'll read the rest, okay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 Yeah writting comes naturally to me. And Dwight . . . that sounds all and well, but you are breaking one of my personal pet peeves- Speech Position.Place it at the beginning and/or ending of each paragraph. Redo it to fit that and I'll read the rest, okay? ok will do I wake up, blinded it seems. Everything is dark and i am unaware of my current state. "what am i..." i quietly whisper to my self. "you are of a special kind" i hear a voice speak from afar. "who are you? what about me is special? I am just an ordinary druid." I am still unable to see anything more than two feet away from me. "You are no longer this druid you speak of. You are stuck in your current form." i chuckle knowing that this fact is impossible. "that cant be true, at any moment i can become anything i want to be." I try to stand up and realize that i have only 2 legs. The last thing i remember was being a Unicorn and running from... "That is not true, when you fell and hit your head i gave you a potion. As it turns out a Magical Bear is worth more than a Unicorn." I stumble to the ground, this potion paralyzed me. I feel his cold dark hand grab the scruff of my neck. I turn to bite him, only to feel the even colder barrel of a gun touch my head. "hunter, you forgot one thing" The hunter looks to see a rock, far off in the cave we have ran into, lift. Feeling returns to my paws and as the hunter dodges the rock i scratch him on the face. It is still hard to see but its getting easier. "...i still have my magic." the hunter moans as he stumbles against a wall on the far side of the cave. I feel the blood on my paw, this give me a reinsurance that i can once again be a free man. I charge at the hunter, only to hear the bang of a gun, only to feel a bullet penetrate my heart and stop my blood flow. "your worth more alive, but ill make due" Everything turns black as i become no more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 That is a very important rule because it does a couple things: 1.) it helps your work look more professional2.) it makes it easier for others to read your writting EDIT: It needs a bit more work, but so far it seems to be standard working and top pier standard to be exact.But it is satisfactory in my eyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 Yeah writting comes naturally to me. And Dwight . . . that sounds all and well, but you are breaking one of my personal pet peeves- Speech Position.Place it at the beginning and/or ending of each paragraph. Redo it to fit that and I'll read the rest, okay? I'm terrible at writing, and I still got a B+. I got an A+ in calligraphy. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 Well I am more strick than most teachers would probably be, or would have any right to be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 That is a very important rule because it does a couple things: 1.) it helps your work look more professional2.) it makes it easier for others to read your writting EDIT: It needs a bit more work, but so far it seems to be standard working and top pier standard to be exact.But it is satisfactory in my eyes so am i accepted? or do i have to make edits? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 Accepted to what? I thought you were just showing me how good you could write 8 / But if you wanted to join a roleplay I have a couple that you could join, just let me get the OOC links Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 Accepted to what? I thought you were just showing me how good you could write 8 / But if you wanted to join a roleplay I have a couple that you could join, just let me get the OOC links u said u had a few roleplays i could join but i decided to show u how good i can write to see if i was worthy haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 Sorry for not responding sooner ^^; buisy and what have you . . . A~hem, Well I have Struggle of Powers II coming up, whenever Andrew/Gensis PMs me the revised epilogue and I manage to post it, so there is THAT I also have:Supernatural HuntersandDominion Break Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 And 99.57378957823975892% of YCMembers hate school. I'm not in that percentage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
六兆年と一夜物語 Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 I'm not in that percentage. BLASPHEMY BURN THE WITCH (buuuurrrrnnnn) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ярополк Пономарёв Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 *Gasp* Say what now?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
六兆年と一夜物語 Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 *Gasp* Say what now?! BLASPHEMY BURN THE WITCH (buuuurrrrnnnn) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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