Shinwa Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Hey people, I plan on writing a manga ( inspired by Bakuman ) and I thought days over days about a Name/Story for it .... I think I got something ..... The Concept is following..... [quote] Most People live their lifes without feeling or doing anything special. Everything is okay.... Most People think someone only is made of [u]Body and Soul[/u].... but that is not the truth.... the Soul is not the main part of someone....The Soul just glues everything together.... Deep inside you... there is something which is mainly known as [b]THE CORE[/b].... Each person and each thing has a core... but people dont notice they have it.... That is because most people can only use a really short part of their brain. What is the Core ? The Core is the part of your body which gives you all your strenght, all you luck, which controls all of your affinity to something. The Core keeps all your memories.... Most people think all of their knowledge is kept into their brain ( Brainwashing etc. ) but that is not true. The Brain is only a part of your body which can access all data of your core. That is why you can do all what you do..... Have you ever seen Prodigys ? Think about it... They are better, but what is the difference ? Prodigys have due to some preferences more access to their Core. They have no such limits .... But they are not able to fully control their Core that is why they have disadvantages too... [u]So what is the Plot here ?[/u] .... The first part of the story focuses on a boy, who dreams of being better.... at some day he sees his Zodiac in his dreams, who is telling him about his Core and where he can train to control his core etc. People who can fully control their core have MASS of adventages. If your energy is low , most people will collapse. But Core Users can control how much energy will be burned. They can run 100 km nonstop without a break and not being KO. [/quote] Well that is somethign I thought about first...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel Maeso Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Well it is very interesting, just some stuff that need beeing changed/inproved a little bit, I'm in bit of a hurry now so I PM you later with some sugestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinwa Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Thanks and it would be great if you can help me out . This is just the raw concept .... maybe I will add later Support for the Zodiacs too .... Maybe Cancer/Crab would has a Speed/Dodge Effect cuz Crabs are moving sidewards... like dodging and Aries would have some attack boost... Gemini Clone Effect or something... Just some ideas ^^ Edit: Okay the Protagonist will have the Cancer Zodiac. The Antagonist should be Capricorn then... as for the zodiacs... the Protagonist always go swimming but due to his natural clumsiness, mostly he fails in competitions.... The Antagonist (Earth Element) is strong and mostly ignoring our Protagonist..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinwa Posted January 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Actually I dunno really... Maybe something more futuristic ? With more electronics etc. ? I need help about the Plot >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Stay away from the High tech stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 I like the idea in general (almost sounds like my idea haha) In my opinion, i would keep the setting in a modern day world so the reader can easily connect to it. Calling it "The Core" doesnt sound really cool, in my mind anyway, you could call it Tempest (has nothing to do with the centralized idea) just sounds cool, Singularity means uniqueness so that could work, you can use Dictionary to find some good ones Just some thoughts to think of I have like 4+ stories that i came up with but thats for me only lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Idea is [s]good[/s] awesome, but stay away from the unneeded "..." because they're not as cool as you think. Also think of End of Evangelion for proof that too complex plot devices are Hebrew. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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