Limited Edition KING Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 This fan-fiction is based from the player character from the Pokemon Fire Red video game in this fan-fic you'll be able to get an inside look at what our main character 'Red' sees, hears and feels about his current surroundings and Pokemon. [spoiler=000: Prologue, Where's Professor Oak?][center][url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JvKoBnv96PM&feature=related"]Theme[/url] [i]“Hello and welcome! My name is Oak! People refer to me as the Pokémon Professor! This world is inhabited by creatures that we like to call ‘Pokémon’! For some people Pokémon are known as pets, others use them for battling. As for myself I study Pokémon as a profession. But first tell me about yourself, like what is your name?” The professor asked. “The name’s Red.” I replied. “Ah so your name is Red of Pallet Town! This over here is my Grandson, Green! He’s starting his journey alongside the same time as you. Now Red your very own journey is about to begin! A world of dreams and adventures awaits you now let’s go!”[/i] Then everything faded white and I awoke dazed in my bed. I decided to wake up and walk around my room. It feels as if I’m seeing all these items for the first time yet it feels as if I’ve had them all my life. I decided to walk over to the computer and turn it on. Then suddenly a potion came out from one of the tubes connected to the computer. Since there seemed to be nothing else to do I decided to walk down the stairs which lead down to another room. I could see my mother sitting on a chair I walked over to her and she said. “Right all boys leave home someday, it said so on the TV! Oh, yes. Professor Oak, next door, was looking for you.” Then I remembered that today I was going to begin my journey to be the best Pokémon trainer in history! With that I raced outside the house and saw the town I was residing in. It wasn’t that large just my house and two others. I walked passed a fence which had a few signs nearby it and read one of the signs near one of the houses. It read ‘Professor Oak’s research lab!’ so I decided to walk in there seeing as that’s the place I needed to go to start my adventure. I walked in and could see a few people in the building none of the aids said anything about Oak’s whereabouts so I asked the boy just ahead of me. After I asked him he replied with “Gramps isn’t around.” So I walked back outside and waited for awhile for the Professor to return...[/center][/spoiler] [spoiler=001: Chapter 1, First Battle and the Pokedex!][center]I waited for minutes and yet the Professor didn’t show up, so I decided to look for him there wasn’t anywhere to go except north to Viridian City. You could go south to Cinnabar Island but you’d need a strong Water Pokémon to be able to cross the sea. I walked up North and was about to leave Pallet Town until I heard a shout. “Hey! Wait do not go outside!” I turned and could see the Professor running towards me waving his arms in the air begging me not to go out onto Route 1. He caught up to me and starting panting and trying to catch his breath. “Wild Pokémon lurk in grassy areas such as Route 1 you need your own Pokémon to be able to defend yourself from the wild Pokémon! I see that you’re quite adventurous well then follow me and I’ll give you your first Pokémon!” The Professor said and began walking back to the lab as I followed behind. We reached the lab in a matter of minutes I could still see his Grandson who looked rather impatient. “GRAMPS, I’m fed up with waiting!” he shouted as the Professor looked confused at what to do. “Oh yes that’s right I almost forgot that you were supposed to be beginning your Pokémon Journey today. Just wait for a little bit longer, Red there are three Pokéballs over there on that table, each one contains a Pokémon! You can have one go on, choose!” He said as I started walking over to the table, I could hear his Grandson bickering away at him some more. On these Pokéballs there were symbols of a Flame, Leaf and a Water Drop. Underneath the Pokéballs was a note that said which Pokémon were within the balls. I decided on choosing Squirtle because I felt that it would prove to be the most useful out of the three. “Ah so I see you’ve gone with the Water Pokémon Squirtle very nice choice Red.” The Professor said as I took the Pokéball from the table. I moved aside and saw that the other trainer took a Pokémon from the table I could see him smile at the Pokéball. Just as I was about to leave he shouted. “Hey Red wait up let’s battle to prove which one of us are stronger!” He shouted and we began to battle. “Oh for Pete’s sake Green not in my lab... Well it seems the battle has already started I can’t do much about it. Red have you been in a battle before?” The professor asked. “No Professor.” I replied. “Well then I guess now I better teach you. Once a battle begins the Pokémon who cannot continue loses. Once a Pokémon’s hit points are reduced to zero they will be unable to continue battle. Once a trainer is out of unusable Pokémon they lose the battle and give prize money to the victor. Do you understand all that?” The Professor asked. “Yeah I got it.” I replied. “Well then the best way for you to learn is to try it, so continue.” The Professor added as Green and I sent out our new Pokémon. “Go Squirtle!” I shouted. “Go Bulbasaur!” Green shouted. “Squirtle use Tackle!” I commanded as it hit Green’s Bulbasaur. “Don’t take that Bulbasaur get up with a Tackle of your own!” Green shouted as his Bulbasaur came back at Squirtle. “Squirtle use Tackle again!” I shouted as it hit Bulbasaur again. “Bulbasaur use Tackle!” Green shouted as Squirtle managed to dodge the attack. “How could you have missed it Bulbasaur?” Green scolded at his Bulbasaur. “Squirtle use Tackle!” I shouted as Squirtle hit Bulbasaur which seemed to have knocked Bulbasaur out. Green’s eyes widened in shock that his Pokémon had lost as the Professor clapped his hands. “Congratulations Red on winning your first battle.” The Professor applauded. “Shut up gramps, you’re supposed to be supporting me, your Grandson! Whatever smell you all later losers.” Green shouted and stormed off outside. I thanked the Professor and headed off outside as well, the Professor waved me off and wished me luck on my journey. In a matter of minutes I reached Route 1 I walked for a while and met up with a bystander who kindly gave me a potion and informed me that he works at Viridian’s Pokémart and told me that I should head there sometime. I continued walking along the path and encountered several Pokémon, I ran from most of them as my Squirtle was still tired from the battle with Green. Eventually I made it to Viridian City and found the Pokémon Center and healed Squirtle. I then made my way over to the Viridian Gym, however the door was locked and an old man who was nearby explained that the Gym Leader is rarely in the Gym to challenge trainers for some reason. I continued walking through the City and found the Pokémart when I walked in the store clerk asked. “Hey did you come from Pallet Town?” “Yes.” I answered as I walked up to the counter. “Then could you take this parcel to Professor Oak? It came in for him this morning but he hasn’t picked it up yet.” The clerk asked. “Uh sure I’ll take it to him.” I answered as the clerk handed me the parcel. I left the mart and walked towards Route 1 I continued walking through Route 1 and jumped off some ledges which made the trip to Pallet Town quicker and I reached Pallet Town in little time. I continued walking to the Lab and talked to Professor Oak. “Ah Red, how is my old Pokémon doing?” He asked as I released Squirtle from its Pokéball. “Hm it seems to have grown attached to you. You might just have what it takes to become League Champion some day!” He remarked. “Professor I’m here to deliver this parcel to you.” I said and handed over the parcel I received earlier. “Oh thank you Red I completely forgot about that.” The Professor said as Green barged inside. “Hey Gramps, what did you call me for?” He shouted as he walked closer to us. “Oh yes that’s right I have something for the two of you. I have just completed my latest invention the Pokédex! I want the two of you to fill it out for me for I am too old to go out and complete it myself.” The Professor explained and handed two Pokedex’s to me and Green. “You’ve got it Gramps leave it all to me!” Green shouted then looked at me. “I’d hate to say it Red but I won’t need your help for this well smell you all later!” He added and walked off outside similar to before. “Ahem, anyways the world is large and there are many Pokémon out there. You can’t fill the Pokédex up just by seeing wild Pokémon you have to catch it in order to record its data in the Pokédex. Red I’m counting on you and Green to complete the Pokédex.” He said. “Sure thing Professor, I’ll do my best to complete the Pokédex.” I assured him. “Thank you Red here let me give you some Pokéballs to help you.” He added and handed over some Pokéballs which I placed in my bag. I said “thanks” to him then walked outside and over to my house, it was getting dark so I thought it would be best to stay the night at home before heading out tomorrow. I walked inside and mother was making dinner she noticed that I walked in and served out another plate. “So you’ve already gotten your Pokémon and a Pokédex? Wow that’s terrific Red!” She smiled. “Is it okay if I stay the night here before heading off tomorrow mother?” I asked. “Sure you’re more than welcome to stay home whenever you want to.” She replied and served some food on my plate. I said “thanks” and starting eating dinner I was starving and gobbled it down fast. Then I walked back upstairs and fell asleep in my neatly made bed.[/center][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoneycombTroy Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Nice, can't wai to read more. 10/10 for prologue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Interesting concept, should be interesting to read King! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted January 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 [font="Verdana"][b]Thanks for the comments, Chapter one is up![/b][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 The whole Pokemon game from Red's POV....a very interesting idea King. I'm hoping to see this one be as good as your Duel Academia fic. But anyway, to the fic, the whole idea surrounding Red like this makes me think of playing the original Pokemon games on the GBColor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KindredTether Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Alright I can't wait to read more I've never thought of the characters like this! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted January 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2011 [font="Verdana"][b]... Please don't rate here, this isn't custom cards. And please write something about the chapter, not "This is awesome can't wait to read more" say something that actually proves that you've read it. Like mentioning some of the characters used and what they've done, what surprised you, what you liked/disliked about the chapter these sorts of things.[/b][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tentacruel Posted January 24, 2011 Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 ...... Not be an ass, but what would be the point of reading this when I could get the exact same story from playing the game? I recommend you change it up. FAST. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted January 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 [quote name='ADHD-Guitar' timestamp='1295838329' post='4956372'] Not be an ass, but what would be the point of reading this when I could get the exact same story from playing the game? I recommend you change it up. FAST. [/quote] [size="3"][font="Franklin Gothic Medium"]Yeah... Daisuke kinda told me this earlier through MSN and I figured that out. I'm thinking about just leaving this fanfic and not continue on with it. Looking at it now I realize it wasn't a very good idea.[/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted January 24, 2011 Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 It was kinda hard to ready due to all of the "I"'s you used in the Prologue/Chapter 1. xD Your word choice could be better as well. ^^ It's a really interesting concept, and if you continue, I'll support ya. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted January 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 [size="3"][font="Franklin Gothic Medium"]Thanks Clair, but I think I will not continue on with this. School's restarting for me next week so I doubt I'll get time to continue writing anyways. ._.[/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 24, 2011 Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 [b][color="#FF00FF"]Amazing concept is amazing. I love how it is like the original Pokemon games. I will definetly keep an eye on this ;D[/color][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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