Sotos Posted January 14, 2011 Report Share Posted January 14, 2011 CnC V1:[img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/3111/tag21.png[/img] V2:[img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/3111/tag21.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted January 14, 2011 Report Share Posted January 14, 2011 Dots are distracting. And i can see one part of the stock on the right, it isnt consistent with the tag. Also, i just noticed the C4d on the left contradicts the flow of the render. and the c4d seems oversharpened. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted January 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2011 Well, I kinda like the sparks, I think that without them it is too plain... The stock isn't too much, but I only wanted something to fill up some empty space... I'll give you the flow and sharpness things, gotta work on those... EDIT: Added another version, what do you think of that one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted January 14, 2011 Report Share Posted January 14, 2011 The new version is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted January 14, 2011 Report Share Posted January 14, 2011 Remove the abstract C4Ds and keep the bubbles/effects one. And keep the background black rather than that red stock. Then you might wanna add some smaller bubble C4D on the left with motion effects added to them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted January 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2011 You mean like [url="http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/3111/tag21.png"]this[/url]? Doesn't it look kind of plain? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted January 15, 2011 Report Share Posted January 15, 2011 Looks a lot better but the thing you blurred is not working. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted January 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2011 You mean his shoulders? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted January 15, 2011 Report Share Posted January 15, 2011 I find the bubble only C4d alot more appealing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted January 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2011 Well, if you both agree... I would remove the blurring, but I deleted the xcf...:/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted January 15, 2011 Report Share Posted January 15, 2011 then how about you... stop deleting your xcfs? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted January 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2011 Yeah, I know, I did it by mistake... Posted another thread in Showcase, care to CnC that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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