Wii614 Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 I'll post more later Rate please, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 A lot of problems, well lets start; OCG/Grammar errors, uber bad pictures, the effects do not make sense? And they are way overpowerd, try again. 0.5/10 the 0.5 if for effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wii614 Posted January 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 I'll change them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Ok buddy dont put yourself down just try again, study your OCG and you'll be ok, thanks for taking my information, well done ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spawn98670 Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 sweet cards and effects but a bit too strong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Who rated these 5 stars? They are only worth at the most 1 star. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowsoldier Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 A lot of grammar mistakes. The cards themselves are too powerful. Decent pics but you need to edit the effect of the cards. Especially on your Creature Saddler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TsunamiSpike Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Images - Could be better, but decent enough I suppose...Effects/stats - Waaaaaaaay over poweredOCG - A few errors but hey, everyone has the odd mistake there (taking me a while to clean up my mistakes lol...). Especially Saddler, making them invincible unless you're making "God" style cards is never a good thing. Overall.. 1.5 outta 5...and that's only because I like the Resident Evil series...lol. But chin up and you'll get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wii614 Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 better ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wii614 Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Ignore the can't be destroyed it was a mistake sorry about the grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowsoldier Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 You're still forgetting a basic part of ritual monsters/spells. What that is is you have to state what you sacrifice to summon the ritual monster on both cards. The phrase used in your case I'm guessing would be (for the ritual magic card) <"This card is used to ritual summon "Creature Saddler". You must also offer "Osmund Saddler" on your field as a tribute">. On the monster card it would say <"This card may only be ritual summoned by the ritual spell "Las Plagas". You must also offer "Osmund Saddler" on your field as a tribute">. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 mate i'm giving ya 0.002/10 cause youre getting all this advice but changing nothing!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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